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Published: 2003-10-14 19:36:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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Description I had a lovely flower once.
It smelt of soap and foam.
I loved my lovely flower, then.
I was its only home.

But Lovely Flower withered, still.
Like all things good, it died.
My heart, for Lovely Flower, ached.
And with its death, I cried.

I had a lovely flower once.
It taught me how to smile.
It taught me how to cry inside;
Now it sleeps with the pile.

My lovely flowers; happy thoughts,
Descend while petals shed.
And I'll refuse the next few ones,
I hate the things they've said.

(c) Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 17

nxoxtxhxixnxg [2003-10-21 01:24:37 +0000 UTC]

My lovely flowers; happy thoughts,
Descend while petals shed.

excellently beautiful. i commend you, my friend. these two lines particularly caught my attention. beautiful work.

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fragilefacade In reply to nxoxtxhxixnxg [2003-10-21 19:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Yay. Thank you. ^^

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poet-of-da-north [2003-10-20 20:57:43 +0000 UTC]

I had a lovely flower once.
It smelt of soap and foam.
I loved my lovely flower, then.
I was its only home.
i love that opening perfect it is

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fragilefacade In reply to poet-of-da-north [2003-10-20 21:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. <3

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shatteredone [2003-10-17 02:46:32 +0000 UTC]

this is fabulously depressing!! i like the concept of the pile of flowers.. like with every new flower was your new attempt at happiness.... but then it died... again. fabulously depressing!

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fragilefacade In reply to shatteredone [2003-10-17 03:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad it wasn't too vague. I have some odd problem with writings things too vague. But, thanks. That was exactly what I was going for. : )

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blameshiori [2003-10-15 05:18:53 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S A SAD POEM. *cries*

Because you HAD a flower once.

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fragilefacade In reply to blameshiori [2003-10-15 20:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Um.

Thanks?

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blameshiori In reply to fragilefacade [2003-10-15 21:10:24 +0000 UTC]

BURRDEENN MEEEEE SOFTLY WWITH YOUUUUURR POEETRRYYY

BURDEN MY WHOOOLEEE LIFFFEEE WITH YOUR WORRDSSS BURDEN ME SOFFTTLYY WITH YOUR POEEETRRY~~

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fragilefacade In reply to blameshiori [2003-10-15 21:11:44 +0000 UTC]



That is the burden. Do you see it? DO YOU?!

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blameshiori In reply to fragilefacade [2003-10-15 22:02:51 +0000 UTC]

I SEE IT

BUT OOHHH

DO I NOT FEEL ITTTT NOOO I DON'tTTTTtTTT

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phaze05 [2003-10-14 23:38:02 +0000 UTC]

alright, point taken...
and the annoying thing is that i like it...

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fragilefacade In reply to phaze05 [2003-10-14 23:48:26 +0000 UTC]

HAH, hah!

In YOUR face.

Thank you, though. ^^

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fk [2003-10-14 19:50:37 +0000 UTC]

That's a very beautiful poem. I like it a lot. Sincerely.

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fragilefacade In reply to fk [2003-10-14 19:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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lindsay [2003-10-14 19:39:22 +0000 UTC]

I usually don't like structured, rhyming poems but this one I really really like. Especially the line "My lovely flowers; happy thoughts,/Descend while petals shed."

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fragilefacade In reply to lindsay [2003-10-14 19:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I'm flattered since you don't like rhyming poetry. Thanks.

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