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Published: 2003-10-24 02:06:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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The candle sweats in silence.The warmth prevents decay.
A new life is convincing.
The screaming fades away.
The clock, forever ticking.
The touch is to forget.
Wonder if the teardrops,
Cry with pure regret.
The bed sheets seam so angry.
The eyelids sting so rough.
The winds caress and promise.
The page bent. Had enough?
Unaffected sorrow.
Darkness fills the void.
The door mimics the window.
Lock if you’re annoyed.
Wonder what he’s thinking.
Wonder how she feels.
Curl inside your corner.
Hurting, faith reveals.
Tear the ribbon harshly.
Heart recalls a beat.
Destination Failure.
Mission Incomplete.
© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 11
But the stanzas don't have anything in common ... lol.
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well if this doesn't smack you in the face and says 'hi i'm lonelines' i don't know how anything could... this pierces... and i like in your description.... My loneliness has turned into a way of life. says a lot. the peom.... gah! wow!!!!!!!!!
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sorrow suits you well,
and each poem you write,
you wear your sunday best,
delivering verses that seeped
the minus zest of a sunken sun,
your is the dark's gun,
and you weild it properly...
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That's so sweet of you. Thanks.
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T________T
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wow, so harshly real, but with an aesthetic distance so much taht one doens not become completely trapped within the emotional wellspring that this piece came from. Makes on fear falling asleep....
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