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Published: 2003-06-26 02:27:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Everybody asks me who I am.What am I to say?
I’m that messed up little girl,
Who walks alone each day.
Every night I cry till sleep,
And mope until I cry.
I always smile. I always laugh.
I hate saying goodbye.
I’m the cruel misunderstood.
The one you think you know.
I’m the one whose skin is pale,
As pale as pale white snow.
I’m the one whose “friends” don’t care.
Well, maybe one or two.
I’m the one who picks the scabs,
From every “I love you”.
I’m the one who hides her face.
Hides her face in shame.
I’m the one who’ll never know,
I don’t deserve the blame.
I’m the one whose knees bend slow.
The one whose heart will break.
I’m the one who takes so much.
How much more can I take?
I’m the one who laughs too hard.
So hard that her eyes tear.
I’m the one who hates each day.
Each day throughout each year.
(c) Sylwia Wielgosz.
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Comments: 9
herbiejonesie [2003-09-08 02:05:13 +0000 UTC]
I really like this a lot, and although I'm a guy I see myself in this.
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fragilefacade In reply to herbiejonesie [2003-09-08 10:58:40 +0000 UTC]
At the same time as I'm sorry, that's kind of cool. lol. And thanks for the comment! ^^;
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theinquisitions [2003-08-22 13:07:11 +0000 UTC]
You have rightfully succeeded in making my overcome with severe jealosy. Do you want me to deny the 5 kids flocking to me sour jellybeans!? huh?
This is a true work of Sylwia, really, your essence is poured out into this poem. I adore it. Overflowing favorites
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slim-213 [2003-08-04 07:48:21 +0000 UTC]
Dmn girl,,, very expressive. seriously it's MAD. i like beautifully done with a touchy rhyme
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contaminatedwata [2003-06-26 23:31:33 +0000 UTC]
wow, that's awesome!!! you write beautifully.
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shatteredone [2003-06-26 21:56:44 +0000 UTC]
so much reflection and emotion in this. wonderfully done!! as always, i love it! you never disappoint.
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acidangel [2003-06-26 03:34:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Youre a girl Im sorry about calling you "dude" or "man". I didnt know.
Anyways, i love this! This really sth ellse. This goes to the favs bag as well
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poet-of-da-north [2003-06-26 02:30:16 +0000 UTC]
wow that's awesome! i like the lines "i'm the one who'll never know, I don't deserve the blame"
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