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There is a silver bullet.Where my heart used to be.
Shining ever brightly.
Shining teasingly.
I sing and hear the echo,
Pulsing through my veins.
I sing and hear the echo.
Hear the echo.
Pulsing veins.
There is no longer shadow,
Where there is no dim part.
There only lies this bullet;
One bullet ends a start.
I sing and hear the echo,
Pulsing through my veins.
I sing and hear the echo.
Hear the echo.
I pick the stitches open,
Where my heart used to be.
I cannot feel the heartache.
I cannot even see.
I sing and hear the echo,
Pulsing through my veins.
I sing and hear the echo.
There is a silver bullet;
A lack of pumping blood.
I’ve lost control of thinking.
I’m lost inside this flood.
I sing and hear the echo,
Pulsing through my veins.
I gaze upon my footsteps.
It lies in its decay.
I pat my silver bullet.
Dear Heart, please go away.
I sing and hear the echo.
© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 14
pystlit [2003-12-08 03:24:45 +0000 UTC]
nice rhythm and structure. i'm not a huge fan of structured poetry, but I liked this. I bet this would be great as spoken word. Ever done that?
Hi! Random deviant stop.
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fragilefacade In reply to pystlit [2003-12-08 20:27:28 +0000 UTC]
I've read my poetry outloud before, but I rather have people read it to themselves. I like to include many meanings into my poetry. I'm not someone who likes to keep things simple. Besides, I have a horrible voice. It would anything.
And thank you.
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metalmistress [2003-11-09 18:18:41 +0000 UTC]
I gaze upon my footsteps.
It lies in its decay.
I pat my silver bullet.
Dear Heart, please go away.
awesome lines!
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fragilefacade In reply to metalmistress [2003-11-09 18:21:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Hearing that from someone I'm starting to admire as much as you is just grand.
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voices [2003-11-08 23:54:45 +0000 UTC]
wow you can structure a poem so well, nice images as well
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poet-of-da-north [2003-11-06 23:40:48 +0000 UTC]
very strong beginning
There is a silver bullet.
Where my heart used to be.
Shining ever brightly.
Shining teasingly.
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fragilefacade In reply to poet-of-da-north [2003-11-08 00:00:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. My beginnings and endings are usually the best, from what people have told me. Thanks.
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antidepressant72 [2003-10-22 23:28:00 +0000 UTC]
whoa. i love this. i like the repitition in it and the whole "silver bullet" thing. great work. i might just need to +fav this.
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fragilefacade In reply to blameshiori [2003-10-18 13:24:07 +0000 UTC]
That'd be cute, but I prefer poetry to songs.
Thanks for commenting. <3
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blameshiori In reply to fragilefacade [2003-10-19 03:43:45 +0000 UTC]
*sings*
LAALLAlaLAALLAALAL
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