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Published: 2003-08-22 22:18:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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My ragged bodice, falling through,Falling far away from you.
The beaten, broken, torn apart,
The pieces drop upon my heart.
My eyes are bleeding tears of harm,
From every lie, mistake and charm.
Disgusting. Spit on me again.
Wipe my eyes. Remember when?
You tease the strings inside my core,
Until I cannot think no more,
Until I suffocate in flaws,
Until your lips can smile with cause.
You get inside my fickle mind.
Do not waste time on what you find.
Irritate the feelings; raw.
Pretend I’m wrong. You never saw.
You knew me longer than I had.
The reason why you have gone mad.
I’ve ruined me. I’ve ruined you.
My ragged pieces, falling through.
Grotesque. Repulsive. I am ache.
Hide from me, for goodness sake.
I am the monster in your bed,
The haunting feeling in your head.
Without a reason. Without thought.
I am the villain you have fought.
Seeking out to be restrained.
I soon became the one to blame.
Forgot that you have hurt me too,
My ragged pieces fell on through.
But you have hurt me in the least.
You are the beauty. I’m the beast.
© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 20
this is really good. again, your rhyming has mesmorized me 
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Thank you very much.
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aww... i really love the lines "ive ruined me. ive ruined you// my ragged pieces falling through." i really really really like that line... like a lot...i wish i had thought of it.
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Thanks.
Why do you "..." so often? Do you need a hug or something? I'll hug you. 
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well i really dont know but i cant stop... i do them constantly... see theres some more...AHHHHH!
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Well, "...", to me, are a sign of depression. When I'm upset I use them a lot, so I got confused. lol. Excuse me.
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ha lol... no i just use them because my brain stalls i guess but now its kinda habit my fingers just do it...
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"Without a reason. Without thought.
I am the villain you have fought.
Seeking out to be restrained.
I soon became the one to blame"
That has to be my favourite line. and for some reason,this fits in on how i was feeling the last couple days.
^__^ Really great piece of writing once again.
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But you have hurt me in the least.
You are the beauty. I’m the beast.
nice ending to a NICE piece!!
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lol. I like that part, too. Hee, hee.
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;_; i hope u make up with that friend of yours (if at all possible) this poem is so touching
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Not possible. She hates me quite possibly more than anyone else. But thank you for the comment and junkness. You get a special Syl heart as well;
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You tease the strings inside my core,
Until I cannot think no more,
Until I suffocate in flaws,
Until your lips can smile with cause.
I love it. Instant fav. <3
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Thanks. Mmm ... Boy, do I like faves.
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by that I mean I loved this poem. Maybe too much.
... I want to talk
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You're not responding to my IMs.
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no wonder. *hits comp monitor* FIXED <3
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