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fragilefacade — The Knight And The Witch
Published: 2003-11-21 03:36:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 49
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Description Wisk me from this towered stack,
As wicked witch has brought me back.
My hair cannot create a rope,
And freedom is the love I lack.

Your shining armor made you bleed,
As you came in upon your steed.
I threw my tissue to your hand,
To wipe the crimson was your need.

You called me fair; You called me pure;
And of a save I was unsure.
But she returned and pierced your shield,
And I had lusted for allure.

I sat upon the windowsill.
All the remorse had made me ill.
She smiled at me but couldn’t see,
The hole she made but could not fill.

I see the corpse upon the ground.
I cannot hear the wicked sound.
As her voice sings of love so true,
I wonder if I’m love she’s found.

© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 8

tragicrabbit [2003-11-28 20:09:55 +0000 UTC]

aww.. i like it. i don't think the rhythm is bad at all; and, as always, your rhyming sense makes me envious. anyway. good work

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fragilefacade In reply to tragicrabbit [2003-11-28 22:59:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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blameshiori [2003-11-21 22:01:30 +0000 UTC]

*cries* Waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~~~~

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fragilefacade In reply to blameshiori [2003-11-22 00:15:18 +0000 UTC]

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phaze05 [2003-11-21 15:23:46 +0000 UTC]

liking this new side....

liking it!

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fragilefacade In reply to phaze05 [2003-11-21 21:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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contaminatedwata [2003-11-21 14:18:00 +0000 UTC]

very good... i totally understand the coming out of a block thing. keep writing!!!

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fragilefacade In reply to contaminatedwata [2003-11-21 21:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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