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Published: 2003-11-21 03:36:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 49
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Wisk me from this towered stack,As wicked witch has brought me back.
My hair cannot create a rope,
And freedom is the love I lack.
Your shining armor made you bleed,
As you came in upon your steed.
I threw my tissue to your hand,
To wipe the crimson was your need.
You called me fair; You called me pure;
And of a save I was unsure.
But she returned and pierced your shield,
And I had lusted for allure.
I sat upon the windowsill.
All the remorse had made me ill.
She smiled at me but couldn’t see,
The hole she made but could not fill.
I see the corpse upon the ground.
I cannot hear the wicked sound.
As her voice sings of love so true,
I wonder if I’m love she’s found.
© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 8
tragicrabbit [2003-11-28 20:09:55 +0000 UTC]
aww.. i like it. i don't think the rhythm is bad at all; and, as always, your rhyming sense makes me envious. anyway. good work
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contaminatedwata [2003-11-21 14:18:00 +0000 UTC]
very good... i totally understand the coming out of a block thing. keep writing!!!
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