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fragilefacade — The Victory Is Yours
Published: 2003-08-18 16:17:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 81; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 18
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Description I'm missing so many pieces.
I'm unable to think anymore.
It's all so blurry and hazy,
So empty here inside my core.

Remind me what a smile had felt like.
Remind me what you saw in me.
I trip and I fall into hatred.
The You is consuming the We.

I wish you no longer existed.
My eyes hurt and so does my skin.
My legs are so tired of running.
Feels like wanting has become a sin.

It's so hard to lie to myself, now.
It's so tough to accept what you've done.
I just watch and I hope you'll return soon.
In the end, it's the same; You have won.

(c) Sylwia Wielgosz 2003
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Comments: 5

theinquisitions [2003-08-22 13:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! It reminds me of a nine inch nails song. Dark, hurtful and true.

::cannot resist urge to add to fav's::

This is really one of my favorites. I wonder what inspired it...?

My favorite lines were:

"I wish you no longer existed.
My eyes hurt and so does my skin.
My legs are so tired of running.
Feels like wanting has become a sin."

Where do they come from!? As good as ever ):

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fragilefacade In reply to theinquisitions [2003-08-22 13:15:30 +0000 UTC]

What do you think inspired it? Or .. who?

I'm going out with him AGAIN, too ... I HATE me.

Thanks for the nice comments, Katie. They mean so much to me. You have NO idea.

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acidangel [2003-08-20 15:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Thats more like it. Its a fav.

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fragilefacade In reply to acidangel [2003-08-20 17:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I like faves. I like faves very much. ;D

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shatteredone [2003-08-19 02:20:32 +0000 UTC]

mm! i love i hate u because i love u poems!! tehe. but ya yet again though this idea is used more frequently u find a way to make it more standoutish or something.. thats the genius at work!!

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