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Published: 2003-09-24 22:18:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description A little girl. A little smile.
A little dirty face.
With little thoughts and little dreams.
Give a little embrace?

A little slap. A little kick.
A little bloody child.
A little hate. A little slur.
And little means it’s mild.

A little hug. A little kiss,
Could give a little hope.
A little pet. A little love,
And Little Girl could cope.

But Little Girl with Little Smile,
Does hide in Little Room.
Her little hand grips Little Knob,
“Don’t get the little broom…”

A little mom. A little dad.
A little lie is true.
A little sex. A little drug.
A little “I Love You”.

And Little Girl with little wounds,
Can’t run with little legs.
She fears the chilling little voice.
Her little cries and begs.

Little Girl with Little Smile,
Forget the little past!
Try to hide your little tears.
The little pain can’t last.

A little girl, a little smile,
A little broken heart,
Are held in her own little arms;
One piece can’t fall apart.

© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 24

poet-of-da-north [2003-09-26 21:48:49 +0000 UTC]

aww you write too many sad poems! we should all be happy! *cough* well i guess we're all addicted to depression and stuff like that makes a better poem? nah happy one's are good too! well i enjoyed this one a lot thanks for sharing yr wonderful work with the rest of us!

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fragilefacade In reply to poet-of-da-north [2003-09-26 22:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank for for the kind words.

I am not addicted to depression ...

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poet-of-da-north In reply to fragilefacade [2003-09-27 01:38:28 +0000 UTC]

that's not really what i meant... just saying that a lota ppl including myself seem to write about stuff like that a lot didn't mean to offend ya =/

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fragilefacade In reply to poet-of-da-north [2003-09-27 01:58:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm not offended. ^^ I just didn't like the way that sounded and gave you a chance to redeem yourself! And you did!

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poet-of-da-north In reply to fragilefacade [2003-09-28 00:55:46 +0000 UTC]

^_^ thanks yea i didn't really mean to write it like that 0_o it was a stupid thing to say *shrugs*

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fragilefacade In reply to poet-of-da-north [2003-09-28 21:03:52 +0000 UTC]

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poet-of-da-north In reply to fragilefacade [2003-09-30 13:42:45 +0000 UTC]

oh u changed ur icon! prettty this convo can go on forever....

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nxoxtxhxixnxg [2003-09-25 22:27:37 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful...i really like this concept...you know if you read little many times...it starts to look like it is spelled wrong...lol. but very nicely done.

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fragilefacade In reply to nxoxtxhxixnxg [2003-09-25 23:10:07 +0000 UTC]

I know! I thought that when I was typing it up. God Bless Spell Check.

Thanks for the comment.

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auddwaggin [2003-09-25 19:58:11 +0000 UTC]

I like how the description makes it feel like it'll be referring to an object, but you use the "little girl" as the object itself, sort of.

damn, Syl, I need to comment your poems more often ;_; I suck.

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fragilefacade In reply to auddwaggin [2003-09-25 21:32:49 +0000 UTC]

You should comment more! But it's okay. I don't always comment on your stuff because it's really hard to figure out what to say.

Thanks for this one. Love you.

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tragicrabbit [2003-09-25 02:20:13 +0000 UTC]

i love it. beautiful concept, portrayed wonderfully

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fragilefacade In reply to tragicrabbit [2003-09-25 21:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Coming from an amazing writer like you, that comment is a ton better. ^^

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tragicrabbit In reply to fragilefacade [2003-09-26 02:48:54 +0000 UTC]

aww.. i'm no good. you're excellent i really look forward to your work.

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Loser69 [2003-09-24 23:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Deep, as usual.

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fragilefacade In reply to Loser69 [2003-09-25 21:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Love.

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Loser69 In reply to fragilefacade [2003-09-26 00:46:24 +0000 UTC]

british all of the sudden...

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fragilefacade In reply to Loser69 [2003-09-26 00:57:59 +0000 UTC]

What's with the double comments?

Brittish, eh?

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Loser69 In reply to fragilefacade [2003-09-27 01:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Sorry?

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fragilefacade In reply to Loser69 [2003-09-27 01:59:30 +0000 UTC]

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Loser69 In reply to fragilefacade [2003-09-26 00:46:22 +0000 UTC]

british all of the sudden...

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Loser69 [2003-09-24 23:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Deep, as usual.

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phaze05 [2003-09-24 22:52:13 +0000 UTC]

interesting,
executed beautifully.

nicely done.

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fragilefacade In reply to phaze05 [2003-09-25 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. ^^

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