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fragilefacade — Unjust Satisfaction
Published: 2003-10-02 22:00:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Spare me of this binding curse.
Release me from the cage.
If you don't see my bleeding eyes,
You might ignore the rage.

But with this spell comes hate and love;
Friendship and misery.
And with the taunts come helping words.
Release so I can flee.

Your arms are warm, your eyes are cold,
Your tongue spills poisoned ale.
I want to run. I want to hide.
I do not want to fail!

The thoughts entwine around my faults;
Deepen so I can see.
So that the burning in my sight,
Could truly ruin me.

I’m scared. I’m lost. I’m so alone.
The sun has grown so dim.
And even though you say you’ll help,
I wish that you were him.

I know my voice will crack with fear,
As I want you to pause.
But deep inside I give in to.
The makeup smears with cause.

I lie to you when you suspect.
Why does my mind deny?
You’re not the one I want to hold,
I kiss the last goodbye.

© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 16

acidangel [2003-10-06 21:59:08 +0000 UTC]

Dear Syl, this is nicely written. Really youre just keep getting better.

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fragilefacade In reply to acidangel [2003-10-06 22:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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poet-of-da-north [2003-10-04 22:20:25 +0000 UTC]

^_^ how can i compare to those other comments?? lol i mean it's a great poem good job!

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fragilefacade In reply to poet-of-da-north [2003-10-05 00:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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shatteredone [2003-10-03 01:18:41 +0000 UTC]

cripes.. this is loaded with so much emotion i feel infected with it all after reading this.. thats a good thing you touched me!! fabulously done!

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fragilefacade In reply to shatteredone [2003-10-03 16:34:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad my poetry can reach out. Thank you for letting it and thanks for the comment.

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shatteredone In reply to fragilefacade [2003-10-03 23:54:17 +0000 UTC]

your quite welcome.

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Loser69 [2003-10-03 01:08:35 +0000 UTC]

oOo

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fragilefacade In reply to Loser69 [2003-10-03 16:34:10 +0000 UTC]

lol. Thanks for the comment.

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blameshiori [2003-10-02 22:39:14 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S ONE UGLY ICON.

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fragilefacade In reply to blameshiori [2003-10-03 16:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. But it's quite ... friendly. I want to hug it. ;D

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blameshiori In reply to fragilefacade [2003-10-03 17:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Okay, you hug the ugly icon, I don't hug it, okay?

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fragilefacade In reply to blameshiori [2003-10-03 20:15:53 +0000 UTC]

The Ugly Icon loves you.

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blameshiori [2003-10-02 22:38:47 +0000 UTC]

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phaze05 [2003-10-02 22:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Okay, where do i start?
emotion, brimming over,

"I know my voice will crack with fear,
As I want you to pause.
But deep inside I give in to.
The makeup smears with cause."

my fave verse,
the makeup smears with cuase?... brill line...

great great one.

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fragilefacade In reply to phaze05 [2003-10-02 22:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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