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Published: 2004-05-16 16:50:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 230; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 26
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Description Rashes on his thighs from bitter chewing.
Teased is dignity by trouble brewing.
Crack the whip but kiss the shaking.
Lost the absence she was faking.

How’s it feel to understand,
That troubled, loving, brutal hand,
Which robs your eyes of slumbers sand,
And shoves you from said sheltered land?

Selfless, mindless, thoughtless luring,
Led poor angel’s wings to blurring.
Tears scorch lies into his face.
The laughter shoves her into place.

Darling’s eyes are bloodshot gray.
Colorless willed to betray.
With all the words, numbers portray,
All she had promised turned her gay.

The pencil sketch erases screams.
It’s pain induced to smile in dreams.
Another serpent soils the water.
Mary was still just a daughter.

How does he sleep on tainted sheets?
How can she love the heartless beat?
Why can’t the nothings ever meet?
A concentrated, loved defeat.

© Sylwia Wielgosz 2004.
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Comments: 6

Ichigo-Sin [2004-07-07 01:42:25 +0000 UTC]

I really love this poem love

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fragilefacade In reply to Ichigo-Sin [2004-07-07 06:04:11 +0000 UTC]

That brings a smile to my face.

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LoathesomeLoser [2004-06-15 07:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Syl ... allow me to warn you, I do not read poetry much. Yet this piece I liked. The way the words flowed and the emotion it rendered was truly creative and accomplished. Good job. Take Care.

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fragilefacade In reply to LoathesomeLoser [2004-06-16 23:56:00 +0000 UTC]

I tried to figure out how I could respond with more than two words but I couldn't come up with anything other than Thank You. So, yes, thank you. It's nice to hear from you, again.

<3

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poet-of-da-north [2004-05-20 00:17:49 +0000 UTC]

i like the first stanza really drew me into the whole thing

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metalmistress [2004-05-16 17:38:25 +0000 UTC]

nice rhyming.

the gay part kinda made me iffy though

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