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Published: 2004-11-06 03:50:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 43; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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psst...why must you torture me?
am i not anything to you?
i feel so hated
so ripped apart
and exposed
by you
you intimidate me
why must you make me feel
like this?
my insecurity
eats at me
my pain
kills me
day by day
everything feels
so wrong
nothing is right
stop
making me feel like this
please?
psst...
why are you ignoring me?
you cant just throw me away
after all this
all this shit
i feel so sick
you keep me here
on this rusting blade
cuts on my veins
as i die in vain
it all drips away...
Comments: 4
i adore the structure of this. each line flows into the other one as much as most of your other poems do
amazing work again my friend 
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Hmm, I get the feeling that the narrator is angry, but it looks like pleading... :S
Good to see that other people write poetry around here.
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yes anger plays a main part. i love writing poetry..
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