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Published: 2009-05-16 05:51:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Skin hides veins,
muscles, fat, bones,
things that aren't as
obvious as your eyes
or smile or voice.

They are as much a part
of you as memories,
touches, words, movements.

Things get lost in the
daily course of loving
but I try to recognize
it all.
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Comments: 3

Hercynianforest [2009-08-01 20:02:37 +0000 UTC]

My favorite of the 4 I've read. When I read your stuff, I get such a natural feeling from it and it makes me wish I could be as fluid.

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fragilemacabre In reply to Hercynianforest [2009-09-15 20:58:02 +0000 UTC]

When you write something, try speaking it out loud to get a sense of how the words flow together. When I get clumsy or rush a piece, I often have problems with the lines sounding out-of-place.

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Hercynianforest In reply to fragilemacabre [2009-09-25 00:41:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks darlin'

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