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Published: 2004-07-02 14:58:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 12
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Description sasha.
there's a reason I became her
in the confines of brick and poetry,
in the heat of summer a year ago.
she doesn't have my scars
but she has my eyes,
my hands...
her sasha crown
(as it was deemed)
displayed the heart I lack.


sasha.
back in the walls of
syllables and mismatched chairs,
I think I'll become her again.
none of my nomad life
or broken hearts
remain in her black-lipped smile.
I have ceased to exist,
leaving a husk in my wake
that only she can fill.
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Comments: 16

changethecombo [2004-07-22 18:50:46 +0000 UTC]

ive had everyone at my sleepaway camp call me khaki for the past five years. it was originally after this hat i wore, but then it was because i liked it...
nobody else knows that. my friends would probably think it was hilarious.
anyway. great poem. love it.

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fragilemacabre In reply to changethecombo [2004-07-22 18:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Hah! That's exactly what it was like last summer. Quelle funny.

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HurtByHerHeart [2004-07-04 18:55:05 +0000 UTC]

sasha.
back in the walls of
syllables and mismatched chairs,

Love it all espesh love this bit.

I changed from Emily to Emilie. Don't know why but hey!

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andhehatesthesun [2004-07-03 16:39:31 +0000 UTC]

I really like how...

I think I'll become her again...

just slips in there...very elegantly..

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fragilemacabre In reply to andhehatesthesun [2004-07-06 21:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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BliZZaRDAdIcT [2004-07-03 15:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Im still gonna call you susan . I think its cuz I love you somehow but I really have no idea.

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soulwrai [2004-07-02 21:51:26 +0000 UTC]

that is a insanely well done creative piece *mucho applause*

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soulwrai In reply to soulwrai [2004-07-06 21:23:46 +0000 UTC]

lol

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fragilemacabre In reply to soulwrai [2004-07-06 21:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Er... thanks. :insane:

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itsmejesse [2004-07-02 18:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Oooooooookay!

-Jesse out

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fragilemacabre In reply to itsmejesse [2004-07-06 21:19:42 +0000 UTC]

Huh?

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itsmejesse In reply to fragilemacabre [2004-07-07 01:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Understanding.

-Jesse out

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fragilemacabre In reply to itsmejesse [2004-07-07 13:47:15 +0000 UTC]

Whhyyyy must you confuuuuse me?
-Susannah

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itsmejesse In reply to fragilemacabre [2004-07-07 14:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Because I'm incomprehensible?

-Jesse out

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fragilemacabre In reply to itsmejesse [2004-07-07 14:11:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Yeah. That.

--Susannah

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gravetocradle [2004-07-02 16:07:22 +0000 UTC]

I have ceased to exist,
leaving a husk in my wake
that only she can fill. -beautiful line

i know a girl named sasha.

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