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kcphotoguy [2016-08-12 20:23:05 +0000 UTC]

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I do agree with the other critique in that you need to slide off center a bit. You definitely should be more to camera right in the frame in my opinion. I don't know that I agree about your eyes however. As I said on another shot I would prefer your eyes straight into the camera. You have gorgeous big eyes that would stare straight into the soul I think.
The bare shoulders and lack of color are very nice and does give you that sense of bleakness. I might try to wash out the wall a bit more especially the shadow behind you. You could do that in post.
I think I'd also move that hair off your face. I think it tends to disctract a bit from your eyes.
All in all though I really like this photo. Hopefully I don't come across too negative. I think you did an outstanding job. Thank you for sharing it.

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ov3 [2016-08-12 08:09:02 +0000 UTC]

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I love the soft colors that you used for this image. This gives an impression of sweetness and also fragility and delicacy.
I also like the point of light that we see in each eye and which brings life to the portrait.
The facial expression is also very beautiful. And those eyes ... they are gorgeous.

Due to the eyes direction, I might have tried a square format by cutting the empty space of the right part of the image (your left). This could give more strength to the portrait.

Anyway, you show us a beautiful portrait! Congratulations

I just love it.

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chaosScizorSword [2016-08-12 05:43:01 +0000 UTC]

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1Eres [2018-09-20 09:04:29 +0000 UTC]

A bit colorless, except for two amazing blue eyes

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DannyAndYoko [2017-03-28 22:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Is that you or someone else?

Very good looking, either way. ^^

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Nebuladiver [2016-12-04 09:53:28 +0000 UTC]

You have a magnificent face and even if it was b&w you wouldn't be colourless

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JackGarnier [2016-09-20 21:50:25 +0000 UTC]

by far one of my favourite picture; you honestly look perfect

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rpost61 [2016-09-06 04:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done.

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Kennyfiddler [2016-08-12 16:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful shot. Stark but expressive. Looking off camera adds to the sense of isolation, yet you seem engaged. My only suggestion: if I had been the photographer, I might have posed you more off center, perhaps to the viewer's left. That would leave more negative space, adding to the sense of isolation. But great shot.

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dramaticpeanut [2016-08-12 11:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work!

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calsixty [2016-08-12 11:29:27 +0000 UTC]

This shot is lovely, it captures your beauty in a soft, sensual manner that gives the viewer means to be either simply moved, or to imagine even more. Nice going!

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MindsEyeWorkshop [2016-08-12 06:40:14 +0000 UTC]

There's a starkness here, though very much softened by your beauty. Pose like this can feel a little contrived, but it doesn't spoil the shot. Implied nude adds a question mark, leaves the shot in between a sensual or simply an intimate portrait.

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SecretsOfAphrodite [2016-08-12 06:35:26 +0000 UTC]

You look like an actress from Narnia

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CarlTheCobra [2016-08-12 05:38:24 +0000 UTC]

beautiful eyes

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