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TheGreyEyes [2018-07-31 16:29:43 +0000 UTC]

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Hello, I'm may not be the best but I think I can give you some advice on this one!
First thing I really like is writing supplies in description, it's really nice and it may help people (I was never asked so I don't do that but it's really helpful)

Now about drawing,
I think idea is really good and I like how you did shoulders, neck and back.
Also watermark is beautiful, but there are some issues mostly with anatomy:

-first thing that is really visible are hands, they're tiny, expecially the right one.Hand should be the same size as face, and in the middle of them fingers start.

-second thing is lighting, it's confusing, somehow the middle of the head is the most lighted part of this drawing, so it suggests that light source is comming from us (the viewer) but then at the same time entire stomach is the darkest part of the body. Same thing with darke left arm and very light part left side of the torso
I think the best way to avoid it is to look up some lighting references and set one (or more) place of light source before drawing, simply deciding where do You want it to be.

- I can also see that this is muscular body type, You tryied to draw muscules but I'm not sure If You knew how it is supossed to be, they might look differently depending on person, however they can't really be placed randomly
I suggest visiting Proko, he is professional, he is making really good videos on anatomy on youtube, I learned a lot and I'm still learning :

www.youtube.com/channel/UClM2L…

-finally, I think right side of stomach looks better since lower we can see the fragment of hips,that should be also on the left side and there isn't.

Well, that was a bit long, sorry, I really hope it'll help you !
Have a nice day!

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RossiTorres [2018-07-31 20:37:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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