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#oc #pencil #rock #test #trow #animation #gifanimation #penciltest
Published: 2017-08-18 12:03:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 289; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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now i only need to ink it!And finish all the other pencils...
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Wow, this looks really good! I like that she leans back for a few frames in anticipation to bend down and pick up the rock.
But one thing I think could make it sell better, is that when she actually picks up the rock, she does it too quickly. You have the first few "attempts" of her picking it up down pat, but when it actually comes off the ground, to really sell off the weight of the rock, have her stand up reeeeaally slowly and really show that effort. It'll make the rock look a lot heavier.
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mh.... now that you make me notice it...
you're right.
if i'll feel like i'll have enought time I'll probably fix it, cos now it is sorta starting to bug me...
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