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Cheezee CAKEComments: 23
Jijono-san [2008-11-12 04:34:20 +0000 UTC]
wow. this is nice.
know how that feels
nice poemm!
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Aijdi [2008-10-23 14:51:34 +0000 UTC]
wow .. itΒ΄s nice
but some of the textlines reminded me on songspots
maybe you take them as inpirations
in whole i think its great done work
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Emi-Chan01-0 [2008-10-22 22:30:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow !! This is SO FUCKING BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!! I love it !!! It's you who made that ?? so ! I love it !! 10 / 10
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xsound-trackx [2008-10-22 22:11:21 +0000 UTC]
this is powerful!
you spelled always wrong towards the end btw. but it's really good!
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litllebell [2008-10-22 21:57:19 +0000 UTC]
that's just the kind of thing I'd say to gui.... [gui's the guy I love's been years and he just hates me]....
reminds me a poem my cousin showed me sometime
roses are red
violets are blue
you might hate me
but I love you
=]
me loves it!! good job *thumbs up * ^^
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Spike-Aiui [2008-10-22 21:52:48 +0000 UTC]
It sure is a sweet one, I like the fact that you wrote it from you heart. ^^
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Pondicherry [2008-10-22 18:16:37 +0000 UTC]
A few gramatical errors, but other than that its sweet
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frozendreamwork In reply to Pondicherry [2008-10-22 19:12:41 +0000 UTC]
what ill fix em ^^ xD
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Pondicherry In reply to frozendreamwork [2008-10-22 19:47:13 +0000 UTC]
"ment to hurt u"
meant to hurt you
Only one, I think.
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