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Did you ever just feel like going for a walk?Not caring the least, not caring to talk.
Who would notice for an hour… maybe four?
Just to escape and walk out the door
You walk along, you laugh, you cry
You reminisce the moments that are no more and sigh.
But wait, there’s more, you’ll never guess
Imagination! Kicked overdrive and into excess
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Comments: 68
Oh my jebus!!! This is really good
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was just a little overdone.." but then other times i'm like "i could've
done that better T_T" lol it all depends xD
THANKS FOR THE COMMENT!! xD and i'm glad you liked it
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Naaaaa its not over done
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shank youu! and i have! i'm writing a version of the letter jace leaves behind for
clary when he goes off to find valentine... and please please please tell me i haven't
just spoiled that part of the book and that you've read past it!!! D:
but yeah.. that's my next bit of writing xD
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Hahah yooooor velcome!!! OMGGGG are you serious!!!! He leaves to go find Valentine?!!?....BAHAHAH juuuust kidding, BUT I tottaly JUST finished that part before I read your comment!! XD Im so glad I didnt read it before. Im exited!!!!!!
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you just finished reading that part and i put this up
happened before too! i cant remember which part it was though lol
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!!!!!! 
Hahah yes it is! OMGGG by the way...I FINISHED THE BOOK!!!!! All I can say is...sdjgiosrhgirghjkdlfhgskljfnvkjfsdvnsjdkl fs!!!!!! XD LOVED IIIIT! And I don't know why everybody is saying they can't understand why she is making a 4th book, honestly I think she NEEDS to make a 4th one <^^>
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I just had to put it as my signature thingy ^^!
Iv'e been okay, one of my freinds moved recently so I don't get to see her anymore =/ so thats kind of been a drag, but on friday me and a couple of my freinds went to my schools football game
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hahaha
that was me when i read the "there's no pretending" bit, and then i was
all
isn't it? the whole fireworks scene where he just puts his arms around
her as if it's been ages since he's seen her, and then she walks up to
him in this beautiful white dress and he just stares, and she gets all
hurt when she thinks he meant for her to go away, and he stands up and
reaches out his arm to try and stop her *siiiigghhhH!!* i'm like.. in
love atm because of that book.. i remember parts and go phsyco hehe xD
and yes, i say KEEP THE BOOKS COMING!!!
and dont sweat it about not being online. i wont be this week i think,
cause of all these assignments i have to write.. so yeah xD life is good,
had my friend stay over, my nan is over too and we've been laughing out heads
off and yeah.. izz awesome
how've you been luvii??
x bree
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I love it Bree!!! It's not weird. I totally understand the feeling. That's exactly how I feel right now. No joke. Good job.
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Nawww shanks luv! 
i thought of you when i was submitting this actually. it came
across as one of the pieces of writing you'd use to describe a
moment of some sort
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You're welcome!
Really? Huh. That makes me feel good.
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I'm going to try and write another Jace and Clary thingy-mo-bob, but
i just dont know which scene or aspect of a scene i'd like to try
and fiddle with x]
Did you have any parts from the books that you thought might need a
little tweeking?? if so, let me know and ill re-write it or something!!
yeah!!! and that way it'll be another feel-good prose for you
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OOO! I'm excited! 
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hahaha wohoo! xD
and let me know when you can think of something mmk? x]
umm when is it due in, cause i might start writing that today if
things pan out that way
know xD i just dnt know when it closes =/
x bree
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Haha.
Alright. I most definitely will.
And the contest closes on Halloween. 
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yeah.. well im thinking of writing something down now, because this
weekend my best friend is staying over xD and although she lives only an
hour away, we still can't see each other much cause of work =/ izz homo.
feels soo comfortable she just wants to sleep x] which is what i feel like doing
when i'm down at her place funnily enough...
jot down some ideas xD
Thanks for letting me know
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Haha, that's interesting. Cuz I stay up til all hours of the night when I'm at my friends house or even if she's at my house. It's weird. It's like I never get tired with her.
And YAY!!! jotting things down!!! Hehe.
and you're welcome.
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groggy.. so she turned on the laptop n we started just browsing. and then we started
mumbling things like "doo yuu wnt anyy brekastt..?" xD hehehe and then we finally woke up and put
music on, which has been playing ever since then, and turned the internet off and started talking.
we didnt stop talking for like.. an hour. as in no toilet breaks, no drinks or food or internet..
just hard-out talking
much fun for us though xD
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Haha, no actually that sounds about like what my friend and I do. 
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O: yaaayyy!! seven days.. that's not long at all! xD
i'm going to have to wait a bit longer than that til i see Farah again,
so we'll definitely have to make plans for the future
And it's your birthday soon!!!! 
get-together n eat tonnes of food and see everybody, or are you gonna meet up with
a bunch of friends??
x bree
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Haha, at least, she told me shje was coming down again in seven days... she'd better. I'll be really depressed if she doesn't. And sounds fun.
YAY!!!!!
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Hahaha i can't just sit at a party and listen to music and talk
to people. that's dumb.
And small parties are good
the big parties better, cause everyone is more willing to
dance with a lot more people around. They, me especially, start
to think "hey, if they can look like an idiot than SO CAN I!" xD
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Hehe, that's just me.
I dunno, I never really was a party person unless there's something to do... I get bored. Like my friend used to always have these campout birthda parties and I'd get bored when everyone was sitting around in the tent talking and I'd be like, I'm going for a walk, cuz I knew her place really well, and I'd be like, anyone else wanna come? And then she would always tell me, No, you can't go walking around at night, my parents will get mad. I was like yea right.
Haha, nice.
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I'm going to one of those too!! my friend's 16th
hahaha niice xD i did that too at my step sisters' sleepover party
thingo. we couln't sleep, so 3 of us got up and went out for a walk
through the streets,
which ended up turning into a jog.. along the main road.. at 5 in
the morning
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Sweet!
Haha, I was totally gunna go for a walk in her pasture, but she got angry at me, so I just chilled with my best friend in the other tent and we talked, and then it started raining, so I guess it's a good thing we didn;t go for a walk.
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i would love to have a pasture near by! i would go there and write my
stories and take photos and do tonnes of things there xD
And to follow on about the dreams! i haven't dreamt about jace.. i dont
think'
you have those kinds of dreams?
What was the one you had where you were Clary??
x bree
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zYep. I love walks in pastures. So fun. I love my pasture. So awesome.
Yea, I know whatcha mean. And I honestly dont remember, but I know I had one... That kinda happen to me sometimes... I remember what its about, but not the exact details of what happened. I think Jace and Clary(or me in the dream) were just chillin at the Institue.
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awww.. see if i had a dream, i'd want to be clary in one of vicky's
or yours or jane's lil side stories xD a lot more happens there haha
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haha, I don't really remember what happened....I wish I did though...
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i'm gonna read a couple of jace and clary things online tonight, but
go to bed early. so that way, hopefully, the last thing on my mind will
be those scenes, and by me going to bed early i'll have more time for
dreaming xD
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Haha, excellent idea. Supposedly, whatever you think about before you go to bed is what you will dream about. And it works for me. Cuz I was thinking about sharks one time before I went to sleep(din't ask me why, it was weird) And I had a dream that I was living in the storyline of Jaws, and I've done the same thing with Jurassic Park, watched it before I went to bed and dreamed I was in the same situation as the characters in the movies or there were dinosaurs running around. And the night I dreamed about Jace and Claryy, I was thinking about a fan fic I was going to write.
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yaaayy i'm all excited now hehe xD and yes, i've done the exact same T_T
i've had soo many jurassic park movie dream-a-likes its not even that scary
any more. they've even started repeating themselves a bit now.. like i'll
remember the dream from when i've had it before. it's weird xP but then again
so am i so.. it evens out
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Yeppers. I've just kinda gotta solidify my idea, you know? I've gotta put it together... So yea. But I'm planning on having something up soon.... Not sure what it's going to be yet. How would you feel about a Seth and Andi thing? Or another medieval setting thing? I've also kinda thought about maybe tring to write a pirate story, but I'm not sure yet.
Haha, I've had that happen. But most of the time mine don't repeat. Mine are just really weird. It's like, not scary, just freaky and weird. But yea. And you're not weird... Well, at least not too weird... Jk. You're definitely a good weird.
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hahaha well at least i'm some kind of good
OMG YOU NEED TO WRITE ABOUT ALL OF THEM!! i remember the medieval one
cause it had the perfect guy and the bow and arrow, the seth and andi
things just makes me sigh, and, well, Jace and Clary. who needs to say
any more about that! haha xD
you've always had brilliant ideas, so whatever you decide to go with will
be another favourite of mine
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You're good in lots of other ways too.
Haha, I'll try. I'm hoping to have something up this weekend. Not sure which though. And AW! Thanks! That just made my day even better! And today was pretty good cuz it was my birthday and people were actually pretty nice to me today.
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OMGOSH I DIDNT KNOW IT WAS TODAY?!?!?!
i'm soo sorrryy!! i completely lost track of time
argh now i feel really bad =/ ill have to write you something to try
and make up for it.. and ill dedicate the letter for clary from jace
competition entry to you
for what this stupidly late message is worth, i hope you had a truly
wonderful time today. you're such a cool, talented, amazing, sweet and
funny girl and i wish you all the best wishes in the world for your
birthday and all the years to come
lots of love, bree xx
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Yeppers. Today. Well, yesterday... Well, the 14th. Whenever that was for you. And that's ok. I didn't really make a big deal of it on here. And YAY! STORY TIME!!!! Hehe. Jk. AW! YOU DON'T HAVE TO DO THAT!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
P.S. I finished Ransom My Heart Like 30 minutes ago.
and thanks again!
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i can't believe it, i didnt know you were reading it xD what did you think?
i absolutely LOVE the fact that even though she tried to push
him away that night when they kissed, he still stayed and gave her the
jade necklace... *sigh* hehe x] and i thought the end was good how she
comes out with her pregnant and Hugo.. Hugh? i can't remember! haha well
his men come in and see her and start flirting, and then she tells
them all off and he enters the room and says "That would be my wife"
It's all really good hehe and you can really visualise it all too, because
it's written soo well, and in old language type too.
And of course i am going to do that xD you're one of the coolest chics on
this website
Ps. thanks for reading all the way to the end of this super-long message, but
it involved a book, n i dnt know if you've noticed this but when it comes
to books, i'm over-excited and in love hehe
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Haha yep. I loved it. It was awesome. Haha, yea that was sweet. And then I thought it was funneh when he was injured how Hugo kept going on about how he wanted Finn back. That made me laugh. But yea. I knew Peter was iffy from the beginning... He just struck me as one of those characters... And yea, i loved but hated the ending... I thought it was funny, but I thought there could have been... not nore, but i guess i would have done it differently. I dunno. It was still good, just not my type of ending you know?
AWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
And haha. That's ok. I like long messages. Mine's kinda long too anyway...
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hahahahahahaha yaaayyy i'm like all excited again from reading this message hehe
and yeah, i agree with the ending bit - it could've been done with him going up to
her and just touching her elly where the bub was growing, or just some lil sweet thing
to say to her. something.
Ill consider myself squeezed the life out of then
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Haha. Me too.
Exactly. I dunno. Just not my kind of ending. i like a little more closure and I thought something could have happened with his knight friends or something. I dunno. But yea. that would have definitely worked.
Haha. Yep. Just to the brink of death. Then I'd bring you back to life so I could hug you again.
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Naww it's good to know a hug will bring me back xD
and yeah.. i was thinking about that book today tho.. about reading it
again. cause it's my holiday book. it's the book i take up - along with
whatever book i'm reading at the time - to where ever we're staying and
i'll read it.. and iono it just sets this candescent aura.. it's nice x]
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Haha yep.
Haha that's cool. It's weird cuz as much as I love the books I read, I don't normally reread them... except for Harry Potter cuz those are just too good not to reread... But usually I just reread parts of it when the mood strikes me.
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LOL yeah, well i reread the books, and especially just random parts when you get
into the mood lol like when they're by the fire and then they wake up on the hay
stack, i loove reading that part. One, cause it's sooo funny when the guy is like
'i've never wanted someone so bad'
she's rolled over and they've come together n just slept side by side.. *sigh i love it x]
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Haha. Well, if the next book is coming out and I haven't read it in a while, then I'l go back and reread all the books. But, for me, there's just too many good books out there, so I usually read another book that I find and keep reading new ones.
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someone gets me started on a book, as in they ask me what it's about, ill
tell them a lot cause i just remember it in such detail.
One time, i was at gym and my friend there, she's very cool x], and i started
talking about books, and i told her about The Tea Rose, and she's like and you've
read this how many times?
I was like this is the first. She actually looked stunned hahahaha xD
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Haha. Yea, I tend to do that sometimes... I get caught up in telling the story that I don;t actually tell them what they want to know. I tell them a very detailed story and they're like, "I just wanted a summary..." Hehe. And nice. I think I've done that to someone too... Hehe.
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hahaha i know right!! it's a good but bad thing, cause it only ever happens
with books that you dont have to read for school.. so when it might actually
count for something you wont remember it cause it's a school book, and since
when have school books been interesting..?
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