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u199 [2012-03-31 16:37:44 +0000 UTC]

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Hi

The idea was interesting, but the realization of the idea has flaws. The main problem is too large depth of field. The background has turned too sharp and it merges with the model. Plus, the background itself is not very good, a lot of diverse lines it contains. Also in the picture is noticeable perspective distortion, which is very negative for a portrait.

All of this can be avoided by applying the lens with a focal length of at least 50mm or 85mm is better to use. Then the depth of field can be reduced, it will blur the background. Also, 50mm or 85mm will help get rid of the distortion of perspective.

The light on the face and the girl's hand is not very good in my opinion. Even better would be to shift the girl closer to the right edge of the frame. Central crop is not always good.

All is IMHO.
Please sorry for my bad english.
I wish you success in your creative work!

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silentlyDreamer [2012-04-01 17:52:15 +0000 UTC]

you look so beautiful ^^ very nice and cute <3 which Petticoat do you use ?

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SweetManiacDeluxe [2012-03-31 14:44:43 +0000 UTC]

I like your outfit, it looks so cute! And the Hello Kitty umbrella is awesome! ^-^

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