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Published: 2012-04-23 16:51:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 6
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I DON'T THINK I CAN EVER FINISH THIS.I'm so sorry, NNK-minna. I will just. Submit this to Daily Life.
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Panel 2 (right-to-left)
Kazuya (c)
Manami (c)
Alfie (c)
Panel 3 (right corner)
Manaru (c)
...and,
faceless boy Kohaku (c) me
All enrolled in Tsunami Gakuen (c)
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Comments: 34
E-wGeo [2012-05-04 10:32:18 +0000 UTC]
Why can't you finish this? This is a really good piece, it will be a waste if you don't.
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fuicchi-nee In reply to E-wGeo [2012-05-04 10:39:49 +0000 UTC]
Making panels has proven itself to be harder than I imagine... It consumed a lot of my time to get the characters done in perspective. I don't know if I will ever come back to this piece again, so it stays this way. Sorry, ne. //pats you
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E-wGeo In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-05-04 10:46:40 +0000 UTC]
Ok listen if you have problem in panel making then listen to this. I've got experience in making comics so listen. Before I used to first draw the character then draw the panels around it, which by far resulted in making some of my comic usually having very few panels, sometimes 2-3 but the quality of the art was good. But this is if I'm drawing single pieces not comic so I started doing panels then drawing the characters on them, it's hard since there's only limited space to draw, so what I do now is to first write a script have the image of the comic in my head then start either with the character first or the panel first as long as the strip looks fine to me then it's all good.
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fuicchi-nee In reply to E-wGeo [2012-05-04 11:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the advice~
I've once attended manga class, and read a (lot of) books about manga-making, so yeah, I've picked up some nice tips here and there. However, those almost didn't apply to this one, since what I was trying to achieve was a long vertical strip. One that you often see in pixiv.net, if you know what I'm talking about. Here, let me point you to one example on dA:
[link]
What I was trying to achieve, was the perspective within the small panels. And it took me longer than I had hoped it would, sooo... I scratched the existence of all backgrounds here (Did you notice? ^^a), and declared it unfinished. I also thought of this one as something light, not-too-serious, and when it became a piece I remade one time too many, I decided to stop.
I hope it makes sense? ^^a
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E-wGeo In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-05-04 11:30:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I see what you mean, if you want a tip I did something like that before but on real paper, I connected several A4 papers together and whipped up some panels and drew, just for fun, try doing something like that it may help.
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fuicchi-nee In reply to E-wGeo [2012-05-04 18:22:29 +0000 UTC]
True. XD It's really been a while since I draw traditionally, plus I don't have a scanner, so I suppose I'll save the technique for a more serious project. XD
But thank you for the advice~
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E-wGeo In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-05-04 18:41:18 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, and you can use a camera.
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fuicchi-nee In reply to E-wGeo [2012-05-04 18:44:56 +0000 UTC]
...believe me or not, I don't have a camera either, even in my handphone! XD Or rather, my cellphone doesn't have an external memory card that I cannot save any pic I want to take~ but shush, why are we talking about this again? Case closed~
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petitepurrito [2012-05-01 03:08:23 +0000 UTC]
Awww, this looks cool!! I like it even if it's unfinished ^_^
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fuicchi-nee In reply to petitepurrito [2012-05-01 08:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Th-thanks... I'll do my best in the second event!
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Noruchu [2012-04-29 09:51:24 +0000 UTC]
SLKJHGASFGHJASHGFCGHJCKVLKJHASHJalskjhAGHJaslkjhahsj--
VEEEEEEE-- WHY ARE YOU SO LOVELY NFHGASH.
Thisisjustsohilariouslylovelyandfaaahhhsdgasdgh.
The whole thing sjhasjk bbuu
//cuddlesHaku
YOU MADE ALFIE BBY LOOK SO GOOD NNHljhGAghj
SOSOSOSASJHGF ILU.
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fuicchi-nee In reply to Noruchu [2012-04-29 10:30:11 +0000 UTC]
aklJDHAHFJKASHFJASF NOOOO you are lovely
NORUBBY I MISS U
//cuddlesNoruwhoiscuddlingHaku
R-really?
askldjaskksjf ILU2SM
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Noruchu In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-05-01 15:57:38 +0000 UTC]
ASKJHGASG no you bbu aah--
AND NGHH I MISS YOU TOO ADHSGFASG //SHAKESYOU
//snugglehugglepartay
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Iraira-tomasu [2012-04-29 02:14:34 +0000 UTC]
FFFFF YOU DID DRAW KAZUYA. YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY
My bby looks so manry in your hands
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fuicchi-nee In reply to Iraira-tomasu [2012-04-29 07:01:50 +0000 UTC]
Kazuya's hair is too hard, Tomu...
I drew mochiko too, but I couldn't draw her as cute/hansamu as you, so I didn't draw her face.
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Iraira-tomasu In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-04-29 09:28:30 +0000 UTC]
lmfao I know I can never draw it right either /HITHITHITHIT
PFFT WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT. And mochiko looks better with out a face anyway lololol
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fuicchi-nee In reply to Iraira-tomasu [2012-04-29 10:40:33 +0000 UTC]
wry you making him so hard then...?
TAKE THAT BACK MOCHIKO'S FACE IS SO HANSAMU I FELL IN LOVE WITH HER //bricked
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Iraira-tomasu In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-04-29 10:51:39 +0000 UTC]
laskjfdlk it wasn't intended "OTL
The whole Kazuya design was made in like 20 mins because I didn't have that much time at the time;;
If I could I'd redesign him man;;
I WILL NEVER TAKE THAT BACK. YOU BELONG TO ME--I MEAN MOCHIKO'S BUTT UGRY B'I
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fuicchi-nee In reply to Iraira-tomasu [2012-04-29 11:07:46 +0000 UTC]
The amazingness of 20 mins in a man's life.
TOMU, DID YOU JUST CLAIM ME?
Don't do it, Mang, or I'll have you marry me and tie you down and never let you go for the rest of your sorry life.
AND MOCHIKO'S BUTT IS CUTE whether I can or cannot draw her right.
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Iraira-tomasu In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-04-29 11:18:32 +0000 UTC]
OH BBY I'LL CLAIM YOU. COME JUMP INTO MY ARMS MY WAIFUU
LMFAO KEI WHERE ARE YOU EVEN LOOKING LOOOL
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fuicchi-nee In reply to Iraira-tomasu [2012-04-29 11:21:59 +0000 UTC]
HUBBYYYYY~~ //jumps
Y-you pointed it out first!
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fuicchi-nee In reply to LunaBell [2012-04-29 07:03:19 +0000 UTC]
Th-thanks... This is sao crappy tho... I should've finished them and whatnots, but my time was running out so... //slapself
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LunaBell In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-04-29 11:31:17 +0000 UTC]
this is better than what i can come up with
i didn't even do it o.o
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fuicchi-nee In reply to LunaBell [2012-04-29 11:33:57 +0000 UTC]
don't say that...
then do the Meme, girl.
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LunaBell In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-04-29 17:15:38 +0000 UTC]
right i will.... right now!
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lolli-pocky [2012-04-29 01:44:46 +0000 UTC]
MY GOD!!!!! What is this epicness?! You did good,what did you mean by 'butcher' ?
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fuicchi-nee In reply to lolli-pocky [2012-04-29 07:06:35 +0000 UTC]
No lolli nooooooo I mean, I didn't finish it, so...
I thought I would give it my best, but...
Besides, they're not as cute as you guys draw them originally, so I did butcher them. Tomu even said that Kazu's manry... I cannot draw cuties...
B-b-but I'm glad you like.
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lolli-pocky In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-05-03 20:24:33 +0000 UTC]
I don't like it - I LOVVVVVEEEEEE IT!
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fuicchi-nee In reply to lolli-pocky [2012-05-04 10:03:59 +0000 UTC]
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lolli-pocky In reply to fuicchi-nee [2012-05-06 20:48:13 +0000 UTC]
And I love Kohaku-him all in one piece!
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E-wGeo [2012-04-23 18:03:21 +0000 UTC]
Come on it's good for a start, but I'm sure the revised one will be better I'm looking forward on seeing it. I'm also going to post a preview of my comic this week hopefully. Keep on drawing.
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fuicchi-nee In reply to E-wGeo [2012-04-24 15:29:39 +0000 UTC]
Kpffffft Like always, never fail to comment.
And thanks, be waiting for your comic too!
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