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Published: 2004-01-15 18:15:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 13030; Favourites: 383; Downloads: 416
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Description i'm still toying with what title to give to this fic so...for now, it's just untitled.

naruto teaser: better known as "the fic that's taking me forever to write"
disclaimer: Naruto (c) Kishimoto Masashi

note 1: I wrote Night of Secrets [link] a long time ago because I've always wanted an ItaNaru (and perhaps, one day, it'll turn into a NaruIta). So yes, this little vignette I just wrote moves in the same timeline. Night of Secrets needs a revision, particularly the ages (but there's something really wrong with the ages anyway).

note 2: just a clarification, why I used "IT" in this vignette is because Itachi acknowledges Kyuubi. not Naruto. (for now)

note 3: yes, that pic is for this future fic.
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i apologize for the long text

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He had not seen the boy after the day that they had successfully captured the demon child. It had been days of people coming in and out of the east wing where it was. Not once did he try to pay a visit. He had noticed how the air thinned when he was within the same room. His mere presence provoked something and it was easier to take it down when it wasn’t as furious when he was around.

The door creaked open and slammed closed behind him. Then, his gaze fell at the far wall inside the darkened room. He didn’t need any light to know that it was looking straight at him.

Imprisoned like a criminal. Chained like an animal. Sedated like a monster. And it belonged to them, to him.

Who would not be attracted to such strength?

With every step he took, there was a reply of soft sounds from metal grinding metal. He knew that it was trying to break free from the bounds. A futile attempt as the chains themselves were made of the same material as Kisame’s Samehada, it fed on chakra.

“Naruto-kun.”

“Itachi,” the name was interlaced within the hiss.
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Comments: 36

everhearted [2012-05-24 23:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Whoa intense
I like
-Nana

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SASUKE11822 [2008-09-22 18:51:55 +0000 UTC]

OMG its so cool i love it <33

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fuileachd In reply to SASUKE11822 [2008-11-03 10:45:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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ayqdragon [2008-07-29 15:24:52 +0000 UTC]

naruto and itachi still looks cute!!

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soulfightersu [2008-01-26 11:52:07 +0000 UTC]

cool! i like the pic and the teaser to your fic. i could imagine the shiver going down your back if you heard Naruto speak with a hiss. O.o

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ToonTwins [2007-12-18 14:52:06 +0000 UTC]

That's cool. I like how you drew Naruto ^__^

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Lo1001 [2007-10-17 23:15:44 +0000 UTC]

So Itachi chained him down with "Chakra Binding Chains".. But Narutos fox is to string for them! haha! good fun anyways.! AWESOME picture! ESPECIALY naruto.

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coldninja [2007-10-11 16:01:16 +0000 UTC]

love how naruto looks! good job

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mxrbidsins [2007-10-08 22:35:29 +0000 UTC]

ooo he looks so evil!!! i luv that dark hate filled stare... *o*

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Daisie2819 [2007-09-28 00:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I say Naruto could break free

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mangastudent [2007-09-22 22:19:21 +0000 UTC]

cool!!!the story add to the tension too!!

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nennisita1234 [2007-09-14 03:35:19 +0000 UTC]

OMG nice *x*

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kyubigirl [2007-05-16 00:54:52 +0000 UTC]

WOW AWSOME JOB

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Corralfur [2007-05-05 22:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Um....When your done with the fic can you post the link?

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EirikHasRegrets [2007-05-04 16:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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AdorableNinja [2007-04-24 23:26:47 +0000 UTC]

love da drawing its really good o i read Night of Secrets its really good

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Scarred-Eye [2007-02-28 02:10:45 +0000 UTC]

What is it with Naruto that Itachi wants? Is it Kyuubi?

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Ankh-mage [2007-01-13 23:05:06 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, I love how you did it.

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LoZfanchick [2007-01-07 00:59:53 +0000 UTC]

i read your fan fif Wow it was amazing!!! and this picture and its dialouge awsome seriously cool.

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xxmistressketaxx [2007-01-04 06:10:14 +0000 UTC]

I really like the teaser and picture for the fic. When will you be making it? I'd really like to read it.

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KuagariKitsune [2006-12-13 01:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Awsome job, keep it up!

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BoBoSkiRottn [2006-11-30 00:56:59 +0000 UTC]

coool!! is the fic out yet??

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blue-mirage [2006-10-11 11:28:18 +0000 UTC]

awsome picture when to you think you will release the fanfic

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ToonTwins [2006-09-28 23:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Naruto in chains is a nice touch

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NarutoFan19 [2006-07-20 19:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Cool pic. Is the more to the story?

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sylphstarwind [2006-05-09 04:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Rough pic but pretty cool. And I like what it's about. I'll try to check out the fic soon...

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throne-of-skulls [2006-03-16 05:37:45 +0000 UTC]

ItachixNaruto = xD

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d4nny-phant0m [2006-01-07 19:28:17 +0000 UTC]

is there more to this fanfic?

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kitten-chan [2004-09-21 21:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Maaaan that is jus sooo cool!! I luv the menacing aura Naruto gives off and Itachi-kuns is jus soooo condescending...yeah!! Coolness!! I love your gallery it rox!!

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ladyfish [2004-01-16 14:44:28 +0000 UTC]

cool. cant wait to read d whole fic!!!!

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blitzkerieg [2004-01-16 06:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, cant wait for that fic me like it already nice pic, the one on the left looks cool

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warui-shoujo [2004-01-16 02:30:04 +0000 UTC]

OH yea, I just noticed the chain links are too blocky as well... you shuld have aslo added shading on his body fom th chains too.

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warui-shoujo [2004-01-16 02:28:50 +0000 UTC]

I really like the guy on the right. The design of the clouds is cool. narturo needs a bit of work... i really don't like the solid black for the shadow on his face. it just seems un-natural even though mangas do it alot.

nice job otherwise

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fuileachd In reply to warui-shoujo [2004-01-22 14:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Actually, Naruto's face wasn't supposed to have that black thing but the ink blotted around his eyes T_T so I just edited

Also the chains...I tend to get lazy with details but I'm working on that slowly ^_^ Thanks for the help

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Chikako [2004-01-16 02:15:59 +0000 UTC]

This looks great. ^_^
Great job.

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gummypocky [2004-01-15 18:29:57 +0000 UTC]

ooo... nice the pic as well as the teaser to the fic. I like how Naruto looks in the pic. Really awesome!

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