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FunkySockMonkey — If Only I were a Goth :Remake:

Published: 2013-06-07 20:33:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 392; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Description Hello Everybody!

I recently asked my watchers which picture(s) they would like to see me remake from my gallery, and for those who actually commented (thank you.. ) said they would like to see "If Only I were a Goth" redrawn.  


So Here is the original  

And now onto this piece! The whole idea for the original and this piece, was based on the song "If Only I were a Goth" by Thou Shalt Not. I  knew I wanted to keep the graveyard at night theme and just move a couple of things to get sense of foreground, middleground and background. I also played around with Eri's pose and position on the page, along with the background and foreground. I also messed around with the exposure in photoshop to get the nighttime feeling. I also used a faded brush to give Eri's eyes a light glow. :3 I really have no idea how to explain my process and idea behind my drawings.. OTL
BUT! I can draw backgrounds! I just need the motivation and inspiration to do so..Plus I always have such a hard time thinking what to use as a background.. but pictures like this one shows I'm very much capable to draw a background! HA!

I realized that there are a few mistakes and everything isn't perfect, but I'm going to have a critique option for this picture since I worked really hard on this and actually seems like I put effort into it. I just ask to be respectful even if you don't like it. 

Enjoy!
Comments & faves are nice.
No stealing or hating please!


Eri & Art © Me, *FunkySockMonkey
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Comments: 16

Ryonosuke00 [2019-12-20 02:02:56 +0000 UTC]

I like 

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FunkySockMonkey In reply to Ryonosuke00 [2019-12-23 03:24:57 +0000 UTC]

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Ryonosuke00 In reply to FunkySockMonkey [2019-12-24 00:05:26 +0000 UTC]

  

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Grim-Grinning [2013-06-08 16:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow *o* I think it's crazy how much you've improved since the previous piece. It really shows that you've got a better grasp of anatomy and character development; I just love the seductive pose (: I just totally love her outfit >w< And the glowing eyes were a great touch! I noticed it before I even read your comment, and I just kept asking myself 'Are her eyes really glowing, or is it just me?' haha~ Wonderful work (:

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FunkySockMonkey In reply to Grim-Grinning [2013-06-09 04:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It's really helpful for your input and very much appreciated! <3
haha I thought it would be too! I'm glad that others think it's a great touch as well!
Thank you so much again! <3

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Grim-Grinning In reply to FunkySockMonkey [2013-06-11 23:33:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome c:

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STEAMHOUND60 [2013-06-08 12:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Such improvement

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FunkySockMonkey In reply to STEAMHOUND60 [2013-06-09 03:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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STEAMHOUND60 In reply to FunkySockMonkey [2013-06-09 12:01:53 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Sakokii [2013-06-07 22:34:38 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh! Improvement! //touches.
Your anatomy has improved and your new way of drawing faces!
I really love this piece! *v* I like the pose and that skull is badass..xD
The foreground,background, is nice too ;v; I definitely see depth here >w< And the night effect and glowing is cool.

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FunkySockMonkey In reply to Sakokii [2013-06-08 00:20:07 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you! <3
I kinda messed up on the skull.. OTL
haha I thought so too! <3
Thanks again!

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fire-freak94 [2013-06-07 21:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes yes yes yes yes! <3 Exactly what said! And with all of the prep you put this piece through with photoshop for the added effects, you really made this a bang-up job~ Great work! <3

I'm in love with her dress and boots and entire outfit. Welp, looks like I'm just going to have to strip her to take it for myself

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FunkySockMonkey In reply to fire-freak94 [2013-06-08 00:22:58 +0000 UTC]

haha Thank you! I'm glad that it turned out so well! <3

She won't mind that, she'll probably would encourage that x.x
I do as well! <3

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serenofariane [2013-06-07 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome!!! You can definitely see your improvement!! ^.^ The original is good but this one is GREAT!! Your attention to detail in this one is more noticeable as well.

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FunkySockMonkey In reply to serenofariane [2013-06-08 00:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! <3
haha yeah, I'm starting to do more details, not a lot, but some.. XD
Thanks again!

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serenofariane In reply to FunkySockMonkey [2013-06-08 00:39:17 +0000 UTC]

You are so very welcome! ^.^

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