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Published: 2017-08-05 19:22:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 9607; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 7
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here is my improvement over exactly one year! i created this account and drew felixandra for the first time on august 5 2016, so its not only my account's birthday but felixandra's as well : D as you can imagine im very excited to see all my hard work pay off.just look at how bad my first drawing on this website was. i think its safe to say ive improved a bit. i stopped relying on bases and learned to draw anatomy and poses by using references. screw everyone that was rood and tried to bring me down! but thank you so much to everyone that supported me and encouraged me to keep doing art! :3
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shining-char In reply to ??? [2017-08-11 04:11:52 +0000 UTC]
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K whatever u want bro
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MokiMonsterDraws In reply to ??? [2017-08-09 19:58:16 +0000 UTC]
Opinion/critique in a way. Sorry for cussing. And sorry for being a total dick.Β
Not amazing. But at least you crept out the world of bases. Not gonna lie I've never used bases in my art journey. Maybe you should stop using eye bleeding colours. I'm not saying you have to give her natural coloured hair. But do try and make it seem like it's made of fucking plastic. Sorry for cussing. By the way on the original picture you said you LOST THE BASE. How the fuck do you lose a base? Maybe you should of GONE BACK TO WHERE YOU FOUND IT. No shading what so ever. Please try shading. And the one final thing I think you should know and improve on... WHERE THE FUCK. ARE. THEM. FINGERS?!?!!?!?!?!?? Did they fly off to space? Did you throw them in the ocean? Did she cut them off WITH A BLOODY CHAINSAW?!!?!? PLEASE. GIVE. THEM. FINGERS. I don't care how hard fingers are to draw JUST TRY PLEASE. Don't care if their shit. JUST WHERE ARE DA FINGERS?! WHERE DEY AT?!?! I NO SEE EM!Β
Sorry that was me rambling about the fucking fingers... I need a cup of tea I'm done with this shit all together...Β
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JamalKitten In reply to MokiMonsterDraws [2017-08-11 02:52:30 +0000 UTC]
Lol she's a joke account
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MokiMonsterDraws In reply to JamalKitten [2017-08-11 12:26:54 +0000 UTC]
I don't think she is sorry to disagree.Β
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JamalKitten In reply to MokiMonsterDraws [2017-08-11 12:28:49 +0000 UTC]
No, she is XD her and another joke account (thisisasupersecret) Joel around all the time
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AzuraTheSkeleton In reply to JamalKitten [2017-08-22 15:31:15 +0000 UTC]
They are not joke acc
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MokiMonsterDraws In reply to JamalKitten [2017-08-11 12:30:50 +0000 UTC]
Nah this is real. You can believe what you believe I'm just here to make critiques. Just saying.Β
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JamalKitten In reply to MokiMonsterDraws [2017-08-11 12:41:37 +0000 UTC]
Ok it's fine!^^Β
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to MokiMonsterDraws [2017-08-09 22:02:51 +0000 UTC]
dude relax. its just a drawing
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MokiMonsterDraws In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-09 22:30:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm just sharing my opinion and trying to help you improve. I don't see what's wrong with that.Β
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to MokiMonsterDraws [2017-08-09 22:54:21 +0000 UTC]
you were very rood about it
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MokiMonsterDraws In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-10 17:18:53 +0000 UTC]
I doubt you are 13 with your grammar. And the fact you can't spell rude. Not trying to be a jerk.Β
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to MokiMonsterDraws [2017-08-10 18:25:29 +0000 UTC]
stop saying you're not trying to be a jerk. you're obviously not trying at all
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MokiMonsterDraws In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-10 20:38:56 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't actually expecting you to reply to me. Actually let me rephrase that. I was praying to God that you would not reply to me because I hate interacting with other probable humans.Β
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to MokiMonsterDraws [2017-08-10 21:17:40 +0000 UTC]
why would you even leave the comment then?
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MokiMonsterDraws In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-10 21:24:29 +0000 UTC]
I wanted you to improve. I'll admit. Yeah, I was being a bit rude and kind of a dick. Welcome to DeviantArt my friend, where you can't escape criticism. But at least I didn't do this......................................................... "U SUCK OMG LEL DIS IS AWFUL HA HA I AM DYING OF CRINGE" Because OBVIOUSLY that's a smart thing to tell someone and definitely should of done that. (SARCASM BY THE WAY IF YOU COULD NOT TELL WHICH YOU PROBABLY COULD TELL)Β
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NiashXia In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-10 10:46:05 +0000 UTC]
He's not being rude he is trying to help you improve your art Criticism can Help you like me someone criticized me about Anatomy is off so yea it helped me I searched about Some Anatomy's and poses too.
Criticism can helped to Improve your art
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to NiashXia [2017-08-10 18:24:49 +0000 UTC]
ive seen lots of people critique without being an asshole like him
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RoboRaptorYT In reply to ??? [2017-08-09 10:16:38 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty, first things first -Β
Use another hair color, this one is eyebleeding
Yea, your anatomy improved a bit
Why tf do u made clit like that? Jeez, how weird are you
Where are the fingers?
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shining-char In reply to ??? [2017-08-09 08:56:02 +0000 UTC]
Your anatomy has improved a lot! and it looks much better without a base :>
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MelodyDreamyArt In reply to ??? [2017-08-08 15:01:34 +0000 UTC]
Your anatomy poses has definitely improved and I'm glad that you stopped using others bases so good job!! However I think the next step for you is to learn how to color hair and shade~ you're gonna come a long way if you keep up your hard work!!
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to MelodyDreamyArt [2017-08-08 15:21:27 +0000 UTC]
thank you! :3
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MelodyDreamyArt In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-08 15:54:15 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^ w ^
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FrangipaniElephants [2017-08-08 02:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Well, I do kind of see the improvement, and you did draw your own base...
However, the lines are a bit inconsistent. If you have lines for the base, I suggest you put lines on the clothes and hair too. Just a thought.
And the colours are a bit too...bright...
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Bored-ARTlST In reply to ??? [2017-08-08 01:47:56 +0000 UTC]
................
I dont know.
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Bored-ARTlST In reply to Bored-ARTlST [2017-08-08 02:09:45 +0000 UTC]
I feel like you could improve a bit more....
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XavierTheHedgieXx In reply to ??? [2017-08-07 18:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Nice art work doe 10/10 >.>
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retrodogs [2017-08-07 08:48:38 +0000 UTC]
this is pretty mice! Maybe try drawing a dress on her next time! Or what ever she's wearing <33 Nice improvement! Keep it up!
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Interdemensional In reply to ??? [2017-08-07 02:50:08 +0000 UTC]
it looks sorta ok, real improvement is being shown here
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ultracatclaw In reply to Interdemensional [2017-08-07 03:06:46 +0000 UTC]
Wow that's really good improvement! I actually did I redraw today too that I've been doing since 2014. Keep working hard and you will be great one day!
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to JaidenSquirrel [2017-08-06 21:50:41 +0000 UTC]
so? better than not improvingΒ
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JaidenSquirrel In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-06 21:59:40 +0000 UTC]
(I'll be honest here my "Art style" hasn't changed much since i first started using FireAlpaca and to be honest it's still pretty bad. And i congratulate you for making your own base, but one of the things that i don't like is that the lines are really pixel-y)
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xxxdarknesloverxxx In reply to ??? [2017-08-06 20:13:50 +0000 UTC]
still Β rocking that camel toe ;b i love this you improved so soooo much !!!
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to xxxdarknesloverxxx [2017-08-06 20:16:54 +0000 UTC]
thank you friend!! camel toes for life! >:3
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xxxdarknesloverxxx In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-06 20:18:18 +0000 UTC]
YAAAS LONG LIVE THE CAMEL TOE >:3
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to xxxdarknesloverxxx [2017-08-06 20:28:19 +0000 UTC]
preach it girl!
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ReniiRewn In reply to ??? [2017-08-06 19:57:26 +0000 UTC]
hi there i see lots of signs of improving in this piece !!<3 this was not ment to be rude but here i goΒ
You might want to tone down the colors of ur oc like sorta in the gray-ish not to much this well help ur art look much real not eye bleeding colors !!
Ur lineart is much cleaner and nicer then from u first started but try lining the hair or the clouthes use refs its helps the folds of clouthes. Or hair strings
Also pixs are not very nice touch to the picture looks likeΒ
Paint netΒ
ms paint
Those are the programs that would not recommendΒ
i would recomment these free programs
Gimp
Fireaplaca
krita
Those are completely FREE programs the well help with better drawings lineart colors and the most importain layers
I hope this helped i would look forward to more of ur art improvemtΒ
less people cringing of it AND OF COURSE TAKE CARE AND HAVE FUN!!!
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to ReniiRewn [2017-08-06 20:18:34 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the advice ^w^
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ReniiRewn In reply to funkytwilightsparkLe [2017-08-11 16:46:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah anytime sweety <3
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geekyglasses In reply to ??? [2017-08-06 19:09:39 +0000 UTC]
tecnically it dosent count as a base if you made it and use itΒ
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to geekyglasses [2017-08-06 19:23:00 +0000 UTC]
i suppose you are right
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Wxff In reply to ??? [2017-08-06 08:32:59 +0000 UTC]
Nice! Good to see that you're improving, keep it up and you'll be even better Β Β
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PassTheBleachNow In reply to Wxff [2017-08-06 12:52:20 +0000 UTC]
Hey can I draw one of your oc for you?
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funkytwilightsparkLe In reply to PassTheBleachNow [2017-08-06 20:18:45 +0000 UTC]
yup :3
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LiamNightmare In reply to ??? [2017-08-06 07:09:38 +0000 UTC]
Really nice. May I give some criticism? (I promise you I won't be rude so don't worry ^^ It's gonna be short and simple ^^)
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