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Published: 2003-11-14 18:54:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 35; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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started this yesterday.. an i want to add a lot more descriptive words to it ^^Related content
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I'm not very good at giving comments to poems (being I usually hate reading them and probably only wrote 3 good personal ones in my life) but hey, I still read them, I just find it hard to give them comments ^^;
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thats ok ^^ i used to HATE poetry and would avoid it at all costs lolz
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oooooohhh...nicee, u captured the feeling of reading a good book perfectly!!!!!!!!!
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thx ^^ tho this one still needs a little descriptive work if you ask me.. when i get internet back i ll go to rhymezone.com and find some good synonyms for a lot of the adjectives there ^^
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edits: 3rd line is supposed to be watery depths
hey.. thats all.. pretty good for not looking it over until now after typing it lolz
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