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Published: 2012-02-07 21:07:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1674; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 31
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Overall, this is a really well done piece.
The spine and back seems a bit off to me. With the way the shoulders are turned without moving the spine over in relation it makes it look like the left side of the back is larger than the right. The bottom of the spine also seems to be too far to the right. Without the extra curve/slight warping of the back from the turned shoulders I can't quite see if it is supposed to be the whole body turned slightly towards the viewer or if it is supposed to be straight facing away.
The leg feels a little bit disconnected, but that may be from the pose of the arm. It also seems a little misshapen coming down from the knee, as it comes straight down from the knee and then bends in a bit.
The open-mouthed expression is a little odd, but overall not bad.
The rain effect looks awesome and really well rendered. The background overall looks fabulous.
The greyscale color scheme really adds to the melancholy mood and is very well done. The contrast is really nice. Too often greyscale pieces end up a muddy mix of medium greys that can be hard to read but this one really pulls it off well.
Great job!
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Taela's critique was spot on. This is a really good piece, despite those few things. There's a lot of emotion here. Keep at it, really glad my friends pointed me your way.
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Very lovely piece, but the form seems a bit off along with the face. Mainly the back seems iffy, the tail is a bit too high, the trees lack in texture. But still a very lovely piece with the mood. I absolutely love the mood in this piece
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