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Published: 2008-08-30 03:50:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1921; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 17
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well I wuz looking in my how to draw manga book, and I tried to draw a head of one of the ppl in there and I put a body on it, and I liked it so I put it on here. XD not much, and I like constructive critisism (I didnt spell that right did I?) I especially like the sleeve, Im very proud of that little thing right there
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oh thank you so much! lol old picture
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I absolutely agree with what everybody else here is saying!
Anyway, try studying the human anatomy when drawing people, and also, add shading and some more wrinkles on the shirt and pants. Oh, and why are her hands circles??
You did a good job, though.
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teehee yeah at that time when I drew that, I was afraid of hands more or less XDDDD ums yeah the anatomy thing, definately something to study. could you recommend anything that could help me? and wrinkles on clothes- got it
thank you!
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You're welcome!
Oh, if you want, go to an art store near you, and buy an art book about anatomy!
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yeah I should totally do that! actually... i think I have one somewhere in my bookcase...
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Aww! Really cute!
U should try shading (if U want), it'll give U're drawing a more realistic look
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oh yeah Ive been meaning to take shading lessons from but I havent gotten to it yet... I completely fail at shading XD but thanks for the fave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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lol!
I bet U'll get better with practice!
U're welcome!
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yeah... something I cant stand XD Im like a perfectionist 
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and like looking at art like and yours makes me super jealous XDD
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lol!
I don't really blush in real life, but I get that awkward-ish feeling 
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lol well yeah I do that to people too XD
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aw thanks! you can go to ~psychopathicnone if you want to see some earlier drawings
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Cute! Try to work more on proportion.
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lol yeah Il think about that, your the first person who has said that 
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very cute!
you sure are improving!
although, i would like to give a few suggestions.
i noticed that the body is basically the same as your other pictures. to give it a more lifelike look, i would suggest
1. shading it in the hair at least a little, like giving it a very light shade of grey, and leaving the sun-spots white and all that
2. try showing more of her body. her head is staring at the point of direction, although her body is facing away. try and make her lean more towards the camera a little. this could mean making the body a little wider and showing a little of the other breast.
3. as well, try making her ears bigger. i've noticed that my ear goes from the top of my eyes to the bottem of my nose.
4. bend her arm! do you know anybody who make their arms as straight as the can in pictures? no! the arms are bent.
5. also, just try adding a little more detail to everything. things like this dont look like the generic manga in the comics because they dont have as much detail as the manga. i noticed that the pants had no features. It looked like she had no pants on. (lol)
6. try curving her legs a little. i've always liked the characters with a little more hourglass figure and i think a lot of other people would agree with me.
7. when the hair goes down, give little points, like tiny curves to show that her hair does go out a bit.
8. look at you hand. when it's closed from the backside. it looks like there are little ridges on your hand, right? it's really simple to add that to the picture, and it makes it look more real.
9. bigger feet, please xD
10. be creative with your artworks! make each character have a distinguishing factor about them. bigger breasts, taler, shorter hair, a smaller head, just something that sets them apart from the rest of the generic manga girls.
i hoped this helped at all. if not... then phoey
sorry for any spelling mistakes
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oh why yes, it helped me alot. thanks a lot. (XD a few suggestions) oh and for the hand thing, I actually draw a circle instead of a hand cause I cant draw hands. so its not like she is making a fist, its that I cant draw hands XD but thanks a lot for all the word you put into giving me suggestions
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alright, would you stop stalking me? and thank you for the comment but just leave me alone already! or Im gonna have to block you so I would be able to get some peace already
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okays, I aint stalkin you!!!! I just wanted to see the drawing/check if there was one. and fine, I won't like it then.
and fine, block me 
ok now I'll shut up.
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you can like it and stuff, but just leave me alone
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oh thanks lol I thought the shoes sucked. sugestions?
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np lol hmm.. try not to make the legs so straight and try some different styles with the hair
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wow it's a definite improvement, the expression is great!
all I have to say is improve the small stuff and you have yourself a great picture. like if you made actual hands instead of circles, and if you made the ends of the hair a bit more realistic, and worked a little more on the anatomy. The thing that could probably stay where it's at for quite a while is the eyes. You've got a way with eyes, I tend to suck at them. :3
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lol thanks for the doctorate on it, um anatomy? and lol just like you suck at eyes, It hands. and the ends, Ive been trying but dont rly know how to do it. and lol I just love doing the eyes, the first thing I always do is the eyes. all of the things I do build around the eyes XD
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you're supposed to do that, really.
anatomy, meaning how well you know the body. (in the non-disgusting way)
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ah lol yeah now I see... yesh I definatly have to work on that
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yeah but just about everyone has to work on that. I have to work on that.
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oh lol I wuz talking about hands but ok
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I like it, very cute.
I would recommennd mor curve in the legs.
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oh thanks, Ill keep that in mind
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