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Published: 2008-10-19 02:11:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 349; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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If you were fallingWouldn’t you want someone
To hold their hand out
And catch you?
Wouldn’t you want a friend
To help you out
When you don’t know
Which path to choose?
If you were alone and sad
Wouldn’t you want someone
To sit with you
And cheer you up?
Wouldn’t you want a friend
To help you out
When you’re feeling bad
And can’t put a smile to your face?
If you were exhausted
Wouldn’t you want someone
To keep you awake
So you wouldn’t slip away?
Wouldn’t you want a friend
To help you out
When you’re about ready
To give in and give up?
If you were stressed
Wouldn’t you want someone
To calm you down
So you wouldn’t hurt yourself?
Wouldn’t you want a friend
To help you out
When you need to sit down
And just relax?
If you were going too fast
Wouldn’t you want someone
To stop you
And tell you to slow down?
Wouldn’t you want a friend
To help you out
When you’re pushing yourself
Above your own limits?
Wouldn’t you call them your best friend?
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Comments: 19
xxNothingisEternalxx [2009-03-25 18:42:54 +0000 UTC]
Cool, my bff so is like that, but this makes me kinda sad since now that I am sick and my grandfather is having problems she is away and I am so alone!
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fuzzyofdoom973 In reply to xxNothingisEternalxx [2009-03-26 22:17:51 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. this person used to be my best friend...a while ago. I hope you get well soon. i hope your grandfather's problems lessen. Don't worry, things will get better! They have for me!
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xxNothingisEternalxx In reply to fuzzyofdoom973 [2009-03-26 23:34:35 +0000 UTC]
My grandfather was talking today so he seems a little better. Thanks for your concern and I hope you find some new friends!
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fuzzyofdoom973 In reply to xxNothingisEternalxx [2009-03-28 01:28:16 +0000 UTC]
That's great! You're quite welcome, and anytime you need someone's concern or care, you can tell me.
Thanks, I have! They're the best a person could ask for!
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xxNothingisEternalxx In reply to fuzzyofdoom973 [2009-03-28 01:54:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for caring! I am glad you found a friend, my friend will be back on monday and i think all have her read this poem!
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fuzzyofdoom973 In reply to xxNothingisEternalxx [2009-03-28 01:55:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Oh really? Wow, thanks! That makes me feel really important!
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bendwater88 [2008-10-19 14:33:33 +0000 UTC]
amazing job! i like how everythings a question, and then that one final line.. its very very good
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Daxmentio [2008-10-19 03:44:16 +0000 UTC]
Thats so awesome!!
I love your writing skilz, they're epic. >w<
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roseuntildeath [2008-10-19 02:25:32 +0000 UTC]
oh, beautiful work! I love my friends too.
Emi
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fuzzyofdoom973 In reply to roseuntildeath [2008-10-19 17:22:57 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!
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