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Gaboris — 'Shooter' test design
Published: 2010-07-30 00:09:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2031; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 14
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So here is my first equipment desing(try at least
) for my main game idea Futurebie(may change). This one took me almost THREE weeks with designing and drawing. How could it take so long when it's so lame? Well cuz of a few things:1: This was my greatest (first actually) trial and error project so far and that's why it looks like it was put together from different styled parts.
2: My summer job won' let me work on it for days sometimes.
3: I'm working with GIMP and a MOUSE, so no tablet and no natural drawing.
4: I'm an unconcentrated lazy bump so even if I have time for it I finish a part and then somethin shiny distracts me and I'm done for. XP
So to say a few words about the design itself not just about my whining:
This is the basic gun for the futuristic class of my game, it doesn't look much since it is just a type of chaneller device so it can stay simple.
If you look at it (with good imagination) you can see some bolts on it witch means it's collapsible and I'll do a motion design on it once I get the hang of it.
May say a few words about the game itself later on, but I'll just have to see to that later.
This was a test to figure out how textures work and since I couldn't do a good job on it I'd be happy if you'd have some tips for me for my next projects.
Hope I wasn't boring you and healthy criticism is always a good way to say "Good work".
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Heh, thanks it's real cool that you liked it.
Wish I could actually draw these properly, but so far I didn't get around to draw again after these were done.
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This is far beyond my comprehension sooo I really don't know what to say..... but it's pretty good!! 
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Heh that's nice, thx for the watch. I'll be postin somethin new soon, so I hope you'll like that one as well. :3
If plans go well I'll make a journal about the game that would use these so take a look later if ya think.
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Wow, this is really awesome, and I love the detail and realistic appearance
As for criticism, the only thing I'd say is that the black part needs a little shading or definition
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It's not SO detailed yet, but I'll work on it in the next version.
Hmmmm... darn, I thought that was right, but it's too dark then I guess, right?
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Ah right - that's ok <3
I don't think it's too dark, I just think it needs a bit of highlighting and shading
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The concept is down, so I'll start drawing it soon.
Hmmm... so a bit more detail on the shades right? Kay, I'll see what I can do. :3
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Awesome - and I hope it goes well
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Okay the finished work itself is not done yet, but I put my designing pages up for show, hope you'll like those as well.
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Cool then, thx for the double fav.
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Cool.
Keep ya updated on next work so just wait.
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Thanks - I'll check it out when you tell me it's finished
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Hehe, köszi kedves tőled. :3
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Ha gondolod maj nem olyan sokára tervezem a következő elkészítését szóval ha gondolod azt is meg lehet maj nézni.
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Na akkor ha nem gond, feltettem pár tervezői lapot. Ha gondolod nézz rá, érdekelnek a vélemények. :3
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Oh WOW! 
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It's not THAT good, but thanks a lot. I'll try and make the next one even better. It'll come soon so keep lookin for it.
I wish I could do stuff like you so that's that. XD
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That's an interesting and cool design. The perspective is lost on me however, especially with respect to the clear part.
Don't be worried about not using a tablet, i only ever use a mouse (i've tried using a tablet and i think they are overrated).
I think do away with the scanned background and throw in a simple light gradient instead, perhaps have the instruments shadow cast on the background. Then it will be some sweet concept art.
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Wow, thank you. It's so great hearing this from you.
So you say I got the perspective wrong or it just doesn't fit this picture? I think it's a too close view or somethin.
Heh yeah I can't figure out how they use those things. XD
Yeah the BG was a quick thing, didn' have time to try and make some tests on how it would look right, but I'm thinking about making the next one like a blueprint and a perspective view, so I'll try your idea out. Thx for the help and I'll try to make the next one soon, hope I can ask your thoughts on that one as well.
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hmm...very interesting! what do you use to colour your pictures?
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Well since I don' know any good tools or ways to do this yet I normally make an outline with the path tool and let the program draw it around. Select the inner part with the magic wand thing and I use a simple fill tool with a color or rarely with a pattern. But since the magic tool is too sensitive it always leaves a white or transparent line between the outline and the fill. Then I get the smudge tool and use it from the fill to the outline. Then I just mess around a lot with the burn and blur tools to make the fill less "flat".
Hmmmmm... sorry this got a bit too long, just thought I'd ask your thoughts aboot this since I'm at it... sorry. XP
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Wow thats really smooth work for something just done with a mouse. Does energy travel through the clear part that is behind the handle?
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A mouse and GIMP's path tool. But it was still a pain in the back of my head.
Hehe nice thinking, but that's just a stabilizer and it also redirects the heat from the build up chambers cooler (Plus so that the cooler can be seen. :3 (May change it to a non transparent one don' know yet.)).
The energy comes through the handle it just can't be seen from this angle (couldn't design the connector to the output on the users palm yet(I think I got that idea when I saw the trailer to Singularity. XD) that gives off the basic energies).
If ye're interested I'm already workin on the "Snipeshooter" and the "Shocker" and "Forcer(May change this one.
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Sounds awesome^^ keep me posted :3
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Still not done with the journal on the game but I put up two sketch dumps (or I don' know what) of mine ya could talke a look at.
As far as I got to know you you're the one to ask about these designing things. :3
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Wow, nekem is nagyon tetszik *¸*
Nemtom megmagyarázni mi tetszik benne, meg hogy miért, de nagyon bejön 'xD
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Ok mindjár elpirulok. X3
Szóval érdekes az ötlet? SÜTI! Remélem a következők is érdekesre sikerül majd.
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Mond te tudsz valamit erről a print cuccról a képek feltöltésekor, mer nem engedte, hogy anélkül rakjam fel a képet és nem nagyon tervezem árulni őket.
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Nemtom, nálam ilyet nem szokott csinálni :/ Én csak egyszerűen feltöltöm, utána kijönnek ezek a méretek, amikben nyomtatni lehet őket, v nemtom, és ennyi. Utána én már nem csinálok semmit :/
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Jaja, addig eljutok, de azokból kötelezően választani is kell egyet és nem tom van-e valójában értelme? :/
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Ha ezekre a printeléses dolgokra gondolsz, azokat nem kötelező o.o
De ha kinyomtatod, akkor sem vesztesz semmit : )
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Hmmm... na akkor maj meglátom a legközelebbivel, de végül is igaz nincs komoly veszélye annak, hogy valaki kinyomtassa a munkáimat. XD
Megkérdezhetem, hogy felétek milyen az idő mer itt tökéletes strandidő van széllel, hideggel meg jó nagy borulással. XP
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Hehe, nálunk is ilyen jó strandidő van xD
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Bezzeg ma már attól saját levembe megfőlök, hogy nem állok egy ventillátor elé, hát még ha a konyhán csücsülök.
APÁM mennyien voltak ma is, majmegdöglök, de legalább ma hazamegyek és holnap tudok pihenni. X)
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Olyan meleg van? xD Én meg még az előbb fáztam is xD
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Hejj kis szerencsés, de gondolom te nem tűző napsütésben dolgozol hanem a jó árnyékos szobában. XD
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