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I can see so much dialog here.

Option 1:
Ash: "I'm sorry May, it's not you it's me."

Option 2:
Ash: "May...I'm not who you think I am...I'm really one of the clones Mewtwo made years ago. I don't know what happened to the first Ash. I think he's still frozen in stone..."

Pikachu in the background: "Pika?!?!??"

Anyways...enough fooling around. I've been playing a lot of Pokemon Platinum and Pokemon FireRed version. And I once made a fanfic of Pokemon before. Hell here's the first chapter I'm so bored...
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Ash, Misty, Brock and Pikachu walked silently through a patch of forest together in the Hoenn Region. May and Max were with their father at the Petalburg Gym.

The Time Has come.

"Huh?" Ash stopped, looking around.

"Ash? What is it?" Misty asks, her red hair in it's usual ponytail, though her outfit was more up-to-date.
Brock too had stopped and looked up from his Guidebook at Ash.

"I'm...just not feeling too good...." Ash mutters, sitting against a tree nearby, quite pale. Something about that voice had scared him, but he didn't know why.

Pikachu jumped off Ash's shoulder and sat in front of him.

"Pika..." It said, seeming to also be upset.

"You heard it too pikachu?" Ash asks softly. Pikachu nods it's head and curls up in Ash's lap.

Brock looked at the two with a raised brow before finally proclaiming...

"I think they're just tired and hungry. We have been walking for quite a while."

"No, Brock...I'm not really that Hungry..." Ash says, and Brock nearly falls over.

"But you're always hungry, Ash!" Misty says, in shock, "Why aren't you now?"

"I told you....I don't feel too good..."

"Hrm...you haven't been yourself since the whole Lucario thing Ash...What happened at the Tree of Life...?"
Ash didn't respond. He didn't want to.

Brock frowned while Misty asked, "Lucario? What's that?"

"An ancient Pokemon that was trapped and freed by a staff Ash held at a festival." Brock says simply.

"Oh. Wow! You guys have cool adventures whenever I'm gone...." Misty sighs.

Ash seems to nod off as the two continue to talk. Brock and Misty pity poor Ash and make their camp a few feet in the forest and shake Ash awake, get him to move to his sleeping bag where he lays with Pikachu, covers Pikachu with a blanket and falls asleep again.

Brock smilies faintly and makes some soup quietly. He serves himself and Misty, leaving enough for Ash if and when he got up hungry.

Long after Brock and Misty finished talking and huddled in their sleeping bags around the fire, falling asleep, did Ash wake.

He sits up, stretching quietly, Pikachu shakes its head and yawns climbing up onto Ash's shoulder as he pulled on his shoes and walked wearily over to the fire where the soup sat over. He grabbed a bowl and filled it with somewhat warm soup. He ate it silently and slowly, chewing the pieces of chicken and savoring the chowder Brock had put in it.

He hardly noticed when his spoon scraped the bottom, but Pikachu did and nudged him.

"Pika." It says softly and Ash starts, and puts the bowl down.

"Right I should get you your food too." He goes over to Brock's bag, using the light of the fire to find Pikachu's food. He got out a plastic bag and poured some into it before putting the container back into Brock's bag. Ash shivers and gets his sweatshirt and puts Pikachu on the ground as he straps his belt with the pokeballs on. Pikachu prodded the bag.

"In a sec, Pikachu." Ash Whispers, "We're going for a walk. I can't stay over here for too long. I feel like walking around the forest."

"Pii." Pikachu cocks is head and shrugs as Ash picks up its bag of food. Pikachu climbs up to his shoulder and Ash starts feeding it bits at a time.

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I can see so much dialog here.

Option 1:
Ash: "I'm sorry May, it's not you it's me."

Option 2:
Ash: "May...I'm not who you think I am...I'm really one of the clones Mewtwo made years ago. I don't know what happened to the first Ash. I think he's still frozen in stone..."

Pikachu in the background: "Pika?!?!??"

Anyways...enough fooling around. I've been playing a lot of Pokemon Platinum and Pokemon FireRed version. And I once made a fanfic of Pokemon before. Hell here's the first chapter I'm so bored...
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Ash, Misty, Brock and Pikachu walked silently through a patch of forest together in the Hoenn Region. May and Max were with their father at the Petalburg Gym.

The Time Has come.

"Huh?" Ash stopped, looking around.

"Ash? What is it?" Misty asks, her red hair in it's usual ponytail, though her outfit was more up-to-date.
Brock too had stopped and looked up from his Guidebook at Ash.

"I'm...just not feeling too good...." Ash mutters, sitting against a tree nearby, quite pale. Something about that voice had scared him, but he didn't know why.

Pikachu jumped off Ash's shoulder and sat in front of him.

"Pika..." It said, seeming to also be upset.

"You heard it too pikachu?" Ash asks softly. Pikachu nods it's head and curls up in Ash's lap.

Brock looked at the two with a raised brow before finally proclaiming...

"I think they're just tired and hungry. We have been walking for quite a while."

"No, Brock...I'm not really that Hungry..." Ash says, and Brock nearly falls over.

"But you're always hungry, Ash!" Misty says, in shock, "Why aren't you now?"

"I told you....I don't feel too good..."

"Hrm...you haven't been yourself since the whole Lucario thing Ash...What happened at the Tree of Life...?"
Ash didn't respond. He didn't want to.

Brock frowned while Misty asked, "Lucario? What's that?"

"An ancient Pokemon that was trapped and freed by a staff Ash held at a festival." Brock says simply.

"Oh. Wow! You guys have cool adventures whenever I'm gone...." Misty sighs.

Ash seems to nod off as the two continue to talk. Brock and Misty pity poor Ash and make their camp a few feet in the forest and shake Ash awake, get him to move to his sleeping bag where he lays with Pikachu, covers Pikachu with a blanket and falls asleep again.

Brock smilies faintly and makes some soup quietly. He serves himself and Misty, leaving enough for Ash if and when he got up hungry.

Long after Brock and Misty finished talking and huddled in their sleeping bags around the fire, falling asleep, did Ash wake.

He sits up, stretching quietly, Pikachu shakes its head and yawns climbing up onto Ash's shoulder as he pulled on his shoes and walked wearily over to the fire where the soup sat over. He grabbed a bowl and filled it with somewhat warm soup. He ate it silently and slowly, chewing the pieces of chicken and savoring the chowder Brock had put in it.

He hardly noticed when his spoon scraped the bottom, but Pikachu did and nudged him.

"Pika." It says softly and Ash starts, and puts the bowl down.

"Right I should get you your food too." He goes over to Brock's bag, using the light of the fire to find Pikachu's food. He got out a plastic bag and poured some into it before putting the container back into Brock's bag. Ash shivers and gets his sweatshirt and puts Pikachu on the ground as he straps his belt with the pokeballs on. Pikachu prodded the bag.

"In a sec, Pikachu." Ash Whispers, "We're going for a walk. I can't stay over here for too long. I feel like walking around the forest."

"Pii." Pikachu cocks is head and shrugs as Ash picks up its bag of food. Pikachu climbs up to his shoulder and Ash starts feeding it bits at a time.