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Hello everyone coming at you with another commission and story pitch, this time a Loud House Boxing Au.This commission comes to us from the amazing Sonson-Sensei he does amazing art, not just of the Loud House, but Steven Universe, and many other series as well. And I do endorse him. If you like what you see here give his page a look and if you really like what you see there, then ask for a commission he deserves the business. And if he's reading this, then Thank you so much for this amazing art.
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Now for the Pitch itself, this AU will focus on the ships of Ronnie/Lincoln and Clyde/Lynn. Taking inspiration from the first Rocky film. The characters are now in their late twenties and all surrounding characters show that as well Lori would be in her early to mid-thirties, while Lilly would be starting her freshman year in College. Also in this AU Lincoln, and Ronnie never met at a young age and are meeting for the first time now.
In this Ronnie is her regular tough self she works at her family's shop in the city. Bobby left to look for work to help out the family, he still calls and sends money back home. The shop is getting by but barely, everyone is pitching to help keep it afloat including Ronnie. Ronnie Anne boxes topless at a seedy bar in the city late Friday Nights for cash, she's actually really good at boxing and can beat any opponent who steps in the ring with her. But she doesn't because the real money comes from throwing the fights. The Bar has a little betting ring where patrons bet on who gonna win the round or the whole match. Ronnie has a setup with the owner where based on the bets being made she'll either win or throw the fight for a small bit of the winnings.
This is her life, but there's also something else. The Boxing happens in the back room of the bar, but before she goes in the back of the bar there is this White haired man every Friday just drinking by his lonesome. Lincoln Loud is an aspiring comic artist and writer who is currently working at the comic store he loved at as a child. And Ronnie is smitten with him, but she's too scared to approach him. Despite the tough act and her strength Ronnie thinks very little of herself, she believes if she tried to go for greater things she would fail. Which is why she never tried to leave the bar to become a real boxer since it's obvious her skills are above that place. And why the only way she can interact with Lincoln is by going to the Comic shop and buying comics she doesn't even want. Eventually through Shenanigans Ronnie does end up talking to Lincoln and he admits that he did notice her at the bar, but assumed that she was out of his league. The two laugh at their collective stupidity on the matter and start hanging out eventually going to a relationship.
Meanwhile, Lynn is living the dream, having become The Woman's Middleweight champion of the world and has held onto her title undefeated for quite some time. Most contenders barely make it round two with her, while the lucky ones get to round 3. Lynn loves being the Champ but is bored with all the easy wins she's been getting, though she has something else to keep her occupied. Clyde Lincoln's childhood friend had become Lynn's Manager and a very good one at that. Though they go beyond a working relationship and have a "Friends with Benefits" situation going on, that both do enjoy very much. But Clyde is hoping for something more because he does love Lynn and is sitting on the idea of proposing to her.
But that will have to wait because Lynn's popularity is dropping which is not good for her sponsors. Due to all the quick KO's many are assuming that Lynn is being fed weaker opponents or that the others were paid to take a fall. Lynn is of course pissed by this since she worked dang hard to get where she is and she never even consider paying someone off or fighting someone she didn't think would last. And this kinda goes to a Fear Lynn has throughout the story, Lynn is the over-achiever, she has her classic ego and overconfidence and she's a bit obsessed with showing everyone that she is the best, holding onto her title and that she's earned it fair and square. No shady dealings, no steroids or performance enhancers, just good old fashioned hard work. Lynn has this fear of falling behind and not being good enough being forgotten, that all her hard work was for nothing. She's on the verge of having a crisis, she's in her late twenties and she knows about how people can't be sports stars forever. She spent so much time training to be the best and the idea that one day she won't have enough scares her. So with Clyde, they will tackle that fear and come closer together.
But Lynn is coming back home to Royal Woods and her promoters think this is a good time to set up a match to get her back in the public good graces, a match against the best in the middleweight class. They had everything set up and ready to make an announcement until her opponent got in an accident and hurt her arm putting her out of commission for a few months longer than what it would take to make this happen. They already had everything in place and it was all going to go to waste if she didn't have an opponent. A lot of the other top boxers are busy with their own things and most of Lynn's previous opponents are rushing to have a rematch with her, some having already tried. So things were looking bleak for this, but then they came up with the idea of giving a title shot to a local boxer in Royal Woods. Lynn is coming home and its a perfect gimmick.
As they search the town, they mostly come up with nothing every viable contender on the same boat of "So you want me to get in the ring with the world champ, so I can get my ass kicked for a round in front of my friends, family, and probably the whole country. No thanks." So it wasn't looking good, until they got to Ronnie. She initially gave the same answer, but the promoters did some research on her and knew of her shady dealings. Thus knowing she can take a punch and a fall they offer her more money than usual if she can make it to the third round. Ronnie seeing this as another paycheck agrees.
Lynn, however, is not on board with this idea "You want me to step in the ring with some nobody, so I can kick their ass for a round? When everybody is thinking I fight weaker opponents to look good". The promoter pitches the idea as a way to boost her popularity by giving a title shot to a low-rank boxer. And convince her to have the fight last three rounds to make her look good. She's not happy about it since this isn't how she wants to do things, but see's the benefit and agrees. But due to this, she thinks very little of Ronnie as a boxer when they first meet and as you guessed when she figures out her little brother is dating this loser she is not happy at all.
So the two immediately start to butt heads leading up to the match. Ronnie suddenly getting a shot in the arm by Lynn's provocations and looking back at her life. She decides to train up and give it her all during her match to prove to everyone and herself that she is somebody, with Lincoln helping her. While Lynn is having her crisis and Clyde is helping her with that, showing her that she has more to give and that her legacy can be more than a belt. Eventually leading to the big match where the two will square off. Who will take the belt in the end, I don't know because I haven't decided yet.
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This is the base of the idea I have, not sure if it will become something in the future. But hey I like putting this stuff down to look back on. And maybe I'll come back and do it or inspire somebody else who knows. If you like this little pitch or have idea's for it you like to share leave a comment lets get a discussion going, I'd love to chat with ya.
And again this art was made by Sonson-Sensei
Check out his page, give him all the faves, all the comments, all the commissions. They deserve it.
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Comments: 91
Gadgetboy197 In reply to ??? [2018-09-22 15:50:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah check him out, I totally endorse him.
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GwoppyTrai In reply to ??? [2018-09-22 04:40:17 +0000 UTC]
This is the fight of the century!
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FlamesOfDestruction4 In reply to GwoppyTrai [2020-04-03 02:20:04 +0000 UTC]
My money's on Lynn.
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Justblaze03 In reply to GwoppyTrai [2018-09-22 13:52:20 +0000 UTC]
This is gonna be one hell of a show!
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to GwoppyTrai [2018-09-22 13:50:21 +0000 UTC]
That it is.
Who would you want to win here?
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-22 14:28:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah going with the show canon she definitely would.
I was leaning towards a draw with them like in the first Rocky film. Lynn keeps her title but Ronnie shows that she could go the distance.
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GwoppyTrai In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-22 14:16:39 +0000 UTC]
I could go either way. But I think realistically, Lynn would win because she has more experience.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to GwoppyTrai [2018-09-22 14:29:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah going with the show canon she definitely would.
I was leaning towards a draw with them like in the first Rocky film. Lynn keeps her title but Ronnie shows that she could go the distance.
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GwoppyTrai In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-22 15:56:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I can see that happening.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to GwoppyTrai [2018-09-22 20:02:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, they both are gonna give it their all.
Both probably gonna have to be carried out the ring.
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FlamesOfDestruction4 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2020-04-03 02:20:09 +0000 UTC]
My money's on Lynn.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-22 13:51:57 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the artist did a great job.
I really liked the show and the Rocky films are some of my fave films. The mash up just clicked in my head.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-23 13:07:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
Who would you want to win?
For the story, I was thinking of going for a draw. Lynn keeps her title, Ronnie proves herself, and they all go home having earned respect and learned something.
But I wanna get your opinion.
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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-24 09:07:08 +0000 UTC]
Good idea. Maybe it ends in a double K.O.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-24 12:41:04 +0000 UTC]
That certainly would be dramatic.
Both of them are gonna end up being carried out of the ring, but I think they wouldn't really mind.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-25 12:33:56 +0000 UTC]
"Would I sound crazy, if I said I wanted to do that again?" Lynn groaned with a smile on her face bandaged as she laid in a hospital bed
"I already think you're crazy, and maybe after you regain the ability to see out both eyes," Clyde says sitting at her bedside
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"Wow, I have never seen my sister fight that hard for someone she wasn't pissed at." Lincoln says impressed sitting at Ronnie's bedside
"I'm pretty sure I did piss her off with that first knockdown." Ronnie groaned
"Oh yeah totally, but she seemed to get over as the fight went on." Lincoln said with a smile
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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-26 09:17:15 +0000 UTC]
"Heh, yeah, you're right. Still, after this match, I doubt any of my 'official' challengers will stand a chance. Mmm... maybe I'd challenge the male champ in my weight division, to see if I can beat him up." Lynn chuckles slightly
"I already feel bad for him." Clyde rolls his eyes, smiling.
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"Well, she didn't become a champ out of dumb luck. Your sister is quite strong; much tougher than any of my other opponents."Ronnie smiled slightly. "Another reason why I'm glad we're together; I have some very cool in-laws."
"And the other reason would be that I'm a good massager?" Lincoln smiles as he gently caresses her shoulders.
"Mmm... that's another good one.... and too bad my jaw hurts or I'd be smiling more..."
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-26 13:00:36 +0000 UTC]
Nice Follow Up
They both left the ring with a huge amount of respect for each other.
Lynn didn't think much of Ronnie at first since she was a no-name boxer her manager picked out for a marketing stunt. After so many victories against higher named opponents, she thought this was gonna be the easiest. And it didn't help that Ronnie was dating her brother.
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(After Ronnie accepts the fight with Lynn)
"I thought my family was crazy, but 10 sisters. Seriously?" Ronnie asked with a laugh
"Yeah it gets crazy, but I wouldn't change it for the world." Lincoln says with a laugh
"How do you keep track of them all?" Ronnie asks "It's easier than you think. There's Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lola, Lana, and Lily." Lincoln says
"Wow all L names, your parents are....... wait was that name again?" Ronnie asked
"Lily?" Lincoln said
"Higher." Ronnie said
"Lori?" Lincoln says
"Lower." Ronnie says
"Luna?" Lincoln says
"IN-THE-MIDDLE!!" Ronnie yells annoyed
"Oh Lynn. Yeah the family sports freak." Lincoln says
"Brown hair in a ponytail, freckles, really like red and the number 1." Ronnie says her heart sinking
"Yeah that's her. Not surprised you know her, she's a big sports star now like she always wanted. She's coming back home for awhile, though knowing her there's probably another reason besides." Lincoln says
"YOUR SISTER IS LYNN 'SANITY' LOUD!!" Ronnie yells
"Yeah.... you didn't know that? We have the same last name." Lincoln says
"So does Arron Smith at the copy shop, but that doesn't mean he's related to Will Smith. Oh my god, your sister is Lynn 'Sanity'." Ronnie says breathing heavily
"Yeah what's up. You a fan?" Lincoln asks
"Does this look like the face of a fan?!" Ronnie asks
"No, it doesn't. Why are you freaking out, are you intimidated by her? Relax she's not gonna throw you in the ring for dating me." Lincoln says
"......... Lincoln..... remember that job proposition I told you about?" Ronnie says sweating
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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-27 04:19:28 +0000 UTC]
"... Uh... yeah, you mentioned it like, a dozen times yesterday. You were very excited about fighting a strong professional to finally show your true capacity."
"Well, guess who'll be my opponent?"
"...." Lincoln gasps. "No. Way."
"Yes. Way." Ronnie gulps again. "Your sister is a beast, and I'm not saying that as an insult, but as someone who can recognize a pummeling machine!!!"
"No kidding!! You know that she sometimes has private matches with professional male boxers? All of them heavier than her? And champions too? And SHE CRUSHES THEM ALL?!"
"NOT HELPING HERE, LINCOLN!!"
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-27 04:41:01 +0000 UTC]
Again nice
How do you think Lynn will react when she learns her opponent is dating jer brother?
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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-27 07:49:35 +0000 UTC]
"I heard some very good things about this Ronnie girl." Lynn tells Clyde as she gets ready for a training spar.
"Oh, she's quite good; you can just ask Lincoln. I mean, he's dating her."
"Hold on... my opponent is LINCOLN'S GIRLFRIEND?"
"I thought you knew already." Clyde shrugs.
"No, I had no idea... But, well, that doesn't change anything. I'm still fighting her at full power, and I hope my bro is dating no weakling." Lynn comments as she enters the ring. Her sparring partner is the male light-heavyweight world champion, and, unlike Lynn, he's wearing full protective gear.
"Oh, don't worry, she's quite tough." Clyde gives her a quick kiss before the round starts. Clyde cringes as Lynn pretty much pulverizes the guy, despite him not holding back either. "I just hope she's tougher than this dude... OW, THAT'S GONNA LEAVE A MARK!!"
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-27 13:06:28 +0000 UTC]
Eeesh, feel sorry for that guy. I think Lynn is a bit more upset than she's showing.
Them meeting together is gonna be tense.
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(Staredown in the ring)
Lynn looked at Ronnie with a strong and almost frightening glare. Ronnie was glaring back at her with a determined face, but she was breathing a bit heavier than usual. And Lynn focused on a bead of sweat rolling down the side of her face. Lynn gave a disappointed sigh looking at Ronnie.
"All right, Santiago these people are expecting good, clean fight. I dance slow with ya in the ring, I pull my punches, I'll even keep you standing for a bit. We both know why we're here so let's get this over with and both go home happy." Lynn says
Ronnie knew she was being talked down to, but couldn't say anything. Lynn was right, Ronnie took this job for the money. She trained to her limit and was taking the fight seriously, but that didn't change the fact that she was just an accessory to Lynn at this moment. She was just some Low-rank boxer being given a shot to make someone better look good. Ronnie's eyes left Lynn's as uncertainty grew inside her.
"Listen to me Santiago." Lynn says her voice more serious and cold sending a shiver up Ronnie's spine
"I'm not the smartest around, but I can see there are some serious coincidences to you standing here right now." Lynn says glaring at Lynn
"Any low ranked boxer would gladly take an ass-kicking for the publicity their getting right now. You were pretty lucky." Lynn continues
"I know about your past, your dealings in that bar, the falls you've taken. If there's one thing I really don't like, it's people who give up before even trying and cheats." Lynn says
"But I want to make one thing very clear. If I find out, that you used my brother to get here." Lynn growls making Ronnie's eyes widen upon hearing that
"I've seen how he looks at you and If you hurt him in any way. In the ring or out of it, I'm gonna have you eating through a straw." Lynn growls baring her red mouthpiece
"I would never do that." Ronnie whispers making Lynn raise an eyebrow
"I would never do that to him!" Ronnie says meeting Lynn's eyes again, this time there was no doubt in her eyes but determination and anger
"I don't know what mental gymnastics you did to get that little theory, but it's wrong! I would never hurt Lincoln like that ever. And the fact that you think I would pisses me off." Ronnie growls
"Forget the slow dancing and holding back. I'm coming at you with everything I got, and you better too. Because if you let up even for a second, your kissing the canvas." Ronnie says determined
Lynn looks at her surprised able to feel the seriousness and determination in her voice. This made Lynn smile
"I just may, Ronnie. Now at least." Lynn says raising her gloves
The two tap gloves and go to their corners
"Heh, that was a pretty dumb theory." Lynn laughed to herself leaning in her corner
"OH MY GOD, I JUST DID THAT!" Ronnie thought to herself panting as she faced her corner
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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-30 09:23:27 +0000 UTC]
(True. Also, sorry about the delay)
"Wait... she just used Psychology on me?" Ronnie thinks before looking back at Lynn's corner, seeing at the Loud girl grinning and nodding at her while pounding her own gloves.
"... Wow, she really thinks like Lincoln; she comes with crazy ideas to help others even if it might hurt them in the end... literally, in this case." Ronnie smirks back and pounds her gloves too, very excited and determined now. "Well, Lynn, I'll not disappoint you."
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-09-30 13:40:08 +0000 UTC]
(It's cool we have lives beyond DA)
Taking a bit from the 1st Rocky film, Ronnie stuns everyone. The audience, Lynn, and even herself by scoring the first Knockdown in the first Round. Lynn was still holding back a bit and Ronnie showed that she shouldn't if she wants to make it through.
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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-10-01 03:55:07 +0000 UTC]
Lynn stood back in 5, grinning and pounding her gloves when she stood back.
"Good. That was a freebie. Time to fight you for real."
"Bring it, Loud." Ronnie smirked.
Lincoln, at ringside, stared at her.
"That sounds VERY different when she says it to me... Then again, she says it in private and wearing red lingerie."
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-10-01 04:06:24 +0000 UTC]
Nice one.
I hope I can do this story in the future.
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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-10-01 05:52:16 +0000 UTC]
I do too. You do a very good job writing stories around the pics.
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FirstDrellSpectre In reply to ??? [2018-09-21 15:47:25 +0000 UTC]
I imagined their fight for long. I think Lynn would win, because she's more athletic and more experienced.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to FirstDrellSpectre [2018-09-21 16:00:31 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I agree with that logic. I haven't decided on an ending for this yet.
I think Ronnie can last until the very end with Lynn winning by decision.
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Mattwurm99 In reply to Gadgetboy197 [2018-09-21 17:33:30 +0000 UTC]
What kind of stances are they in?
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Mattwurm99 [2018-09-21 17:43:24 +0000 UTC]
Lynn's appears to be Orthodox, while Ronnie's looks like a Southpaw stance.
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Gadgetboy197 In reply to Mattwurm99 [2018-09-21 18:17:27 +0000 UTC]
Happy to answer questions.
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