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Published: 2015-11-27 23:37:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1313; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 3
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crookedkind is now the rightful owner of Cloverstem!! they won with a beaut application!
This is Cloverstem! She's Beetlestar's sister, and she's up for adoption!
Anyone can try out for her character; to try out, all you need to do is finish the application to the best of your ability. I'll choose one after a while, and that person will be able to use Cloverstem as a playable character.
Only her name, age, Clan and kin are set in stone. The rest is up to you! Just copy and paste the application below, and link me when you're done!! I already have the image form filled out for her, since those details are unchanging, and I will send that image file to the winner once the winner is decided.
To submit your application, you can post it as a separate deviation and repost this image as a filler (as long as you credit me!), with your unique form in the description. Or, you can fill out the application in a journal and send that to me instead, so that you won't have to worry about the image.
(please comment if you're planning on filling out the application, so I know that yours is coming)
Character
Name: Cloverkit | Cloverpaw | Cloverstem
[Prefix] - Reasoning
[Suffix] - Reasoning
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 30 moons
Rank: Warrior
Gender: Female
Appearance details: A black-and-white she-cat with feathery fur and black-tipped ears. Her eyes are pale green, and she has small paws.
History
-Please write more than just a few sentences! An appropriate size is about ~300 words or more. Please keep in mind the groups history and write out the history accordingly!
About
Personality:
+ 3 Good
> 3 Neutral
- 3 Bad
Likes:
Dislikes:
Other Information:
Relationships
Orientation: (Sexuality, who theyre looking for in terms of gender)
Looking for: (Looking or not? What kind of relationship?)
Ideal Relationship and Traits:
Mentor:
Apprentice:
Crush:
Mate:
Ex-Mate/s:
Kin: Beetlestar
ExampleClan
Exampleclaw | @ | - Relationship Description
Roleplay
(Sample goes here!)
Preferred methods:
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Comments: 58
AAHH NO WORRIES, IT LOOKS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! i've shared it with the mods, and now i think we're ready for choosing the winner!
just one last thing; in addition to having a link to the extended history, do you think you could write a short summary beside that link as well? i hate to make you add even more, but some of the other mods feel that it's best to include a shortened, abridged version of cloverstem's history on the regular form, since the actual history is pretty lengthy. the summary doesn't have to be anything too extravagant, just a quick recap of what you'd written in the separate doc so that anyone skimming through doesn't have to hunt for the major tidbits.
again, thank you so much for applying!
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Okay yeah I can totally do that! Do you want me to do it now or should I wait to see if I even on to do it?
I can't wait to see who the winner will be aaaaaa
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i suppose you can wait if you'd like!
winners should be announced v soon :>
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OOOHH MY GOODNESS...................
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL....!!!! everything is so eloquently written, i think you've captured cloverstem extremely well! i've fallen in love with your interpretation of what she's like ;; she seems like a very well rounded character!
so far i only have a couple of comments to make! first of all, it says that one of her past apprentices is a cat named crowcall, and there's already a cat in shadowclan named crowtint, so the name would have to be changed.
secondly, as much as i adored reading the beautiful history (i'd never actually thought much about how the parents met before, but the way you made it into a story is AMAZING, and i have absolutely no objections as to how you did it), it's very long and doesn't mention cloverstem herself quite yet, which should be the focus. i know that it's still a work in progress (i assume you'll be addressing the whole "she's experienced a lot although she's still young" deal in more detail) but i'm just concerned about having to scan for where cloverstem's actual history begins. i encourage you to keep what you've already written, but if possible, do you think you could move the parents' history to the bottom of the form and just focus on cloverstem's life in the main history bracket? i hope this i'm coming off as too pushy or anything ;^;
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YEAH I SOMETIMES (oops caps) i have an issue where i get too invested in the parents story and it takes me ages to write about the actual character, i kind of use the parents history as a warm up/build up to get me ready to write about the main character
i can totally move the history around and focus on her instead!
and yeah i might just take the apprentice out and have her be assigned one if i manage to get into the group
and nope ur fine, i asked for your thoughts and feedback and you gave me just that!
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that sounds great! like i said, i'd still love for you to keep the parents' history in the form, since it's definitely interesting & beautifully done, but just as an addition to the bottom of the form instead of being the bulk of cloverstem's personal story.
i'll update you with the winner as soon as they're chosen!
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alright! ill resend the link when ive finished the history!
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sounds great!
when that happens, would it be okay with you if i showed the application to the other mods so that they can help me decide?
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Yeah that's fine with me : )
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I AM RUSHING SO HARD TO FINISH MY TRYOUT NASNMSNMASAS
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ITS OK!! after you turn yours in, i'm going to close entries (since yours will be the 5th)! i didnt really have a set time limit anyways so you're good ^^
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Okay that's such a relief bc I'm like bursting with ideas for her but I got sick and I haven't worked on her for like 2-3 days and I was like I GOTTA FINISH
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unfortunately not (unless you wanted to do a female-to-blank gender transition!)
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*crawls out of the writing pits of hell waving sta.sh file*
Finished it!
sta.sh/0vbo30afhyp
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AAAAH THIS IS SO WONDERFUL!!!! thank you so, so,, so much for trying out! there's one more application that i know of on the way, and then i'll announce the winner and i'll make sure you're notified!
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Awesome ^-^ I look forward to seeing who gets this lovely lady
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aaaahh, this is wonderful! thank you for trying out, the application is very well done! i'll post an announcement with the winner once everybody has gotten their applications in -- so far you're the second to try out, and there's one more on the way, to my knowledge!
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Glad you like it! I can't wait to see who wins
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I'd really love to try out she's soooo pretty but ugh I doubt I have the time
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ahh, that's too bad! i'd love to see you try out but if you dont have time, i understand!
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Ah screw it I'm gonna try and if I don't get it done in time oh well ^^
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you have time! two tryouts have already been submitted but i didn't really set a time limit on when they can be turned in; as long as i know that yours is coming, i'll wait until you have it in!
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Oh awesome! I'm working on it now and I might have it some either by sometime late tonight or tomorrow morning...hopefully
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how long will this be open for? id like to try maybe bc the group looks super cool!
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ahh thank you! i'd absolutely love to see you join the group; the roleplay hasnt officially started yet, so now is a good time to make characters / turn in applications if you want to!
truthfully, i didnt really think about how long she'd be open... after i'm sure that there isn't anybody else who wants to try out, i'll probably make my decision!
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do you have a preference about which of them is older? and if they were from the same litter also
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ah, yes! i have written on the image app that she's 30 moons, same as beetle (although i didnt include that part in the screenshot, sorry ;; ) and i'd like them to be from the same litter just for simplicity. in beetlestar's official application, i purposefully didnt include anything about his kin, so anything else that you may come up with, i'd be happy to go in and add those things to beet's bio once it's all done!
the only things set in stone are her age, clan, name, physical appearance & kin -- history and personality and other preferences are completely up to you. i cant wait to see what you come up with ^^
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okay! im gonna make her older (but in the same litter) then ty! uvu
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thank uUUUU! m gonna try to get it done tonight if the lord gives me strength closes my eyes weakly
but ok! good to know uvu
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temmmptiingggg
i've really wanted to join this group for a while aah ;u;
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YOU SHOULD!!! roleplay hasn't opened up yet, so you have time to make an application and junk before it starts! i totally recommend it :3c
(you can have up to 3 character slots, so if you were to try out for cloverstem here, you'd still have the opportunity to make other characters of your choice!)
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How many character slots are free in this group again.
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members get 3 slots! ^^
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3 slots free? And we try out by drawing her and doing the full app?
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yes, when you join the group, you have 3 character slots (not including NPCs)!
to try out, all you need to do is fill out the application! you can draw her if you want, but it isn't necessary, and it won't count as extra points or anything. besides, i already have the app drawn out and ready, so i'd prefer if the winner used the one i've already prepared anyhow.
to submit your application, if you want to try out, you can just repost the image provided here with the filled-out description attached.
i hope that answers your question~!
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Just one more thing because it's late and my mind isn't working right. I post the description here in the comments or to the actual group?
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you can upload it as a separate deviation (or to your stash, if you don't want to make it public) and share it with me! you can send me the link by posting a comment on my page, on this deviation, or even by noting it to me.
either way, i'd prefer that you send your tryout to me directly instead of to the group. i hope that makes sense--!
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yup! i'll make up a tryout tomorrow.
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wonderful, i absolutely can't wait!
(i just thought of this, but another alternative would be to fill out the application in a journal instead so that you won't have to worry about the image at all!)
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don't need a pic in sash
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If you use the stash writer, you can have it as only a text file.
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oh, okay! well, whichever way works for you
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