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Ritualist [2009-07-31 22:22:06 +0000 UTC]
didn't had time from all deviations in my watch, just dropped by to say that these are real good. keep em so.
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Speedslide [2009-07-29 22:13:24 +0000 UTC]
Solid effort, man. If I hadn't been previously engaged to taking care of Suzanna and the symbiotes plus brooding over Joe's apparent demise, I'm almost certain Virtus would have gone of after Steppenwolf as soon as the Canadian had ordered it.
Yeah, inarguably, this has been the least productive chapter of our whole run. But I'm sure that will change once we see some fresh faces in Chapter Six.
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Gaston25 In reply to Speedslide [2009-07-30 08:48:01 +0000 UTC]
I agree, sometimes you need a little drama to get the action flowing again.
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zephrania [2009-07-28 09:21:19 +0000 UTC]
YAY, finally Steero isn't the devil spawn around here anymore.
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Inveighed [2009-07-28 07:31:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Someone finally acknowledges Steppe's existence! And his nefarious deed.
You manage to get so much story across with only a few panels. It's a skill I envy. The Canadian's inspiring speech on the previous page was very good, too.
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Gaston25 In reply to Inveighed [2009-07-28 16:15:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, glad you like it! I have been trying to add in as many characters as possible, but there are so many.
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Inveighed In reply to Gaston25 [2009-07-29 06:29:15 +0000 UTC]
So, so many. And even more on the way! I think I'm going to start forgetting who people are soon.
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Calvin228 [2009-07-28 01:20:48 +0000 UTC]
Yoy didnt mention my hero. He also died as well.
(send a note to chat)
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Calvin228 In reply to Gaston25 [2009-07-28 05:08:26 +0000 UTC]
Nah its all cool. you could make it in the next page. lol
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Kostmeyer [2009-07-27 22:11:11 +0000 UTC]
Great page and a major plot point set out for those who haven't been paying attention! Wonder if anyone will follow up on this?
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Inveighed In reply to Kostmeyer [2009-07-28 06:22:19 +0000 UTC]
I seriously doubt it. I asked at the beginning of the chapter if anyone was planning on hunting him down, and only one person even bothered to reply.
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Kostmeyer In reply to Inveighed [2009-07-28 09:35:50 +0000 UTC]
Well people all have their own agendas this chapter I guess... and we can always steer the story in that direction for the next chapter if no-one takes it up this time (and if you'd want that of course!) I could move Canadian's speech to the end of the chapter and use that to set up the heroes' mission in Chapter Six. I'll admit I'm getting a bit worried about the lack of entries so far though - how are you getting along with yours?
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Inveighed In reply to Kostmeyer [2009-07-29 06:26:38 +0000 UTC]
That would be great. I don't think the villains can keep getting away with doing evil stuff for too much longer...
Hmm. I'll avoid answering that question to avoid giving you any more grief.
To be honest there's a whole lot of nothing going on with Charybdis and Jansen this month. At least something vaguely interesting happens to Steppe.
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Kostmeyer In reply to Inveighed [2009-07-29 09:57:44 +0000 UTC]
Well you have a week left! It would be good to work in a character scene if possible. I think if no-one picks up on the 'hunt for Steppe' storyline we'll make that the focus for the heroes in the next Chapter - Lee's speech from the Canadian was too good a set up to ignore! What do you reckon?
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Inveighed In reply to Kostmeyer [2009-07-29 10:21:22 +0000 UTC]
There is something happening with Char and Jansen, it's just not really about them. It's all Team Normal's character development.
I reckon it's a great idea. You're right about it being a brilliant set up.
I'll make sure Steppe's still out on his own at the end of this chapter.
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Kostmeyer In reply to Inveighed [2009-07-29 10:47:50 +0000 UTC]
Team Normal have been pretty quiet too this chapter (There's something I never thought I'd say!) OK - we'll go with 'the hunt for Steppe' next chapter! Send me a note if you can think of anything you want to work in!
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Inveighed In reply to Kostmeyer [2009-07-30 05:24:06 +0000 UTC]
Hah, quiet. You haven't seen the plan. I had a huge argument/debate with WTHIT over one part of the script, it was way over the top.
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Inveighed In reply to Kostmeyer [2009-07-30 05:36:43 +0000 UTC]
I'll send you the script... I keep thinking someone will have already sent you one, but apparently not.
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Kostmeyer In reply to Inveighed [2009-07-30 10:15:25 +0000 UTC]
That would be nice thanks - I don't need to see scripts usually, but as the deadline is so close and there are no pages yet from this group it might be handy for me to see so that I can get the next chapter going as soon as possible.
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Kostmeyer In reply to Gaston25 [2009-07-28 05:29:38 +0000 UTC]
lol! It's not been our greatest month has it? Some of you are doing fantastic work of course, but there are a lot of absentees...
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Gaston25 In reply to Kostmeyer [2009-07-28 16:16:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I agree. Some of the pages are hard to follow too, maybe a smaller exclusive group for the next go around...
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Kostmeyer In reply to Gaston25 [2009-07-28 22:38:13 +0000 UTC]
It's all a learning curve, isn't it! I think you're right though - a less ambitious story with six to ten people who are actually committed to doing it would be fun next time around. Still - not writing this off yet! Lots of twists and turns to go and we have new people arriving in the next two chapters too...
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Gaston25 In reply to Kostmeyer [2009-07-28 22:54:34 +0000 UTC]
New people?! Looking forward to it, and I do agree with you that there is some neat stuff happening. Virtus is evolving into something new, and there are a lot of plot twists happening every month.
I am enjoying myself!
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Kostmeyer In reply to Gaston25 [2009-07-28 22:56:40 +0000 UTC]
That's great to hear! This thing will only work as long as it's fun!
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