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GatesMcCloud β The Rightful Heir: Issue 2 - Page 15
Published: 2014-04-25 01:14:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 20823; Favourites: 115; Downloads: 65
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The tale of the rightful heir, Prince Orion, and his return to claim what is his.WARNING! INCOMING TEXT BOSS! WARNING!
The Rightful Heir will be on hold next week, I have to pen out the rest of the issue. Wow, I penned all of these back in november, same for the text hence the blocky look. So next week will be the adventures of a certain happy go lucky lunar princess through a nightmarish land filled with terrors. YAY!
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fair enough, it's just last time you pointed out that "we" as the people viewing your work, failed to point out a grammar error. That's all.Β
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Wait, last time? What? I'm not aware of when I said that. Atleast in the case you're referencing. When was that? I like to poke fun for some of the errors going by unnoticed, but thats just it. Usually. I dunno in this case you're talking about. Was it me poking fun, or was it something else? Cuz I don't remember.
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probably just joking. you said something like this " you guys can spot a pair of eyes in a bush, but not a simple grammar error" when general star was talking about the treaty with the griffins. I guess I just over reacted. I take everything too seriously, it's my major weakness.
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Aaaaaaaahhhh, I see. Thats perfectly fine, I'll just make a mental note of that for future engagements.
But yah, I like doing throwing out the aj in a bush thing whenever anything isn't spotted. Till this day, no one noticed Luna was missing her horn in the lost prequel. I had to point it out when it was at eight thousand views. Buuuuuut no, everybody spots two pixals in a bush seconds after I upload the damn page! AAARGH! Um... Yah... Ummm... So yah. It's something I like to do.
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Fair enough.
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Have fun storming the castle!
Anyway, Dashie, there's one big difference between this and your fight with the changelings: fighting the changelings was never a plan. It was just something you suddenly had to do, because there was an invasion force all around you. This time, you've got the luxury of a little time to come up with something better.
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But you skipped over why he was banished to the stars in the first place. What did he actually do to receive that punishment?
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Huh, I never directly mention it in the comic. Never noticed it. I hinted at it, it wasn't exactly a punishment. Its explained in the written version.
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Equestria needs compassion more than power? So you'll portect your borders and people and allies with ... compassion?
YEah, right ...
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You know, even though Celestia has successfully led her country for two thousand years. Yeah, right.
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What do you mean, "Yeah, right"? O_o I don't get it.
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You spoke on Celestia protecting her borders, people, and allies with compassion, witch gave the implication that it was a dumb idea. My response (and yeah right) was that Celestia has led her nation successfully with compassion, because evidently, it's still standing after two thousand years under her rule. So her "compassion over power" ideal is working out fine. That's what I meant.
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She's lead her nation successfully? Of course. With compassion only? Hmm ... doubtful.
Compassion over power? How compassion will stop an invasion force, exactly?
Who says she didn't use force?
(Thanks for the reply 
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I never said that she led it with onlyΒ compassion, but she clearly uses a lot of it.Β
Her brother's problem is that he is using nothing butΒ power, instead of compassion as well.Β
(welcome)
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She uses a lot of it, that's for sure.
"Her brother's problem is that he is using nothing butΒ power, instead of compassion as well."
Aye. Methinks he is not king-material. Meh. The impudent amateur. :-P
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rainbow remembers they lost to the changlings right?
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Do you remember that the Channies got defeated in the end?
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nothing to do with twilight and company
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Yep. But they still got defeated.
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yes but it still wasnt the mane six doing the defeating, Rainbow Specifically says "oh come on its no different from when WE fought the changlings"
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Hmmm ... fair enough.
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Shuuuush, don't tell her!
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Oh, and as for the changelings, I think the only reason why 100 of them fall was because they were mostly workers while the soldiers fought the royal guards.
And on sidenote, mane 6 beat 100 of changelings but were defeated later on, it was a proof that as strong as they are, they cannot fight armies, so fight against army of trained pegasi have even smaller chance of succeding, not to mention how useless and pathetic it would make guards look (not only they never help or are useless during the threat while 6 mares do all the job, but now they betrayed and will fight against those who always saved their flanks).
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Great, so mane six will fight entire army and powerful alicorn alone, once again Equestria is on the shoulders of six mares, come on.
I hope that at least Luna will asist them in this fight rather then stay on sideline while mane 6 once again save the day in infair battle.
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Did you not read the description?
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Oh okay sorry. But isn't the next week over already?
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Lulamoon usually has the weeks schedule, I've been posting updates on each weeks page.
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Hi onion seems you will fail as a ruler anyhow you dont act like your sister and half of equesrtia will suicide in fright. and you wll be all alone. and your parents will hate you.Β Β Β
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Why did you post that twice?
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I accidently put it in the wrong place and i put it in the right place could you delete one of them that seems like it is in the wrong area?
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Nah, can only hide it.
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Well, let me take a look.
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UGH when will there be a new page?!?
Β When I get released from my brothers idiotic grasp
Well that's not very helpful
Β Of course not. unless Gates writes a new page saying I'm released by Twilight and her friends........
Then that's that!
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Oh, I think not. So long as that disembodied voice doesn't make a new page you'll be sitting there. Time to go remind him that he needs to release pages of that alternate Luna that where penned in november. Myah hah hah hah!
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Hi onion seems you will fail as a ruler anyhow you dont act like your sister and half of equesrtia will suicide in fright. and you wll be all alone. and your parents will hate you.Β Β
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My parents disappeared 2000 years ago, and they're not the hating type... So the rest of your arguement is invalid.
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NOt the hating type? Even after that racist coup d'Γ©tat you're leading, where non-pegasi are second-rate citizens?
How can you know this is what they'd want? That's a bit too easy to assume what lost ponies would want: they're not here to say "you're wrong.".
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You again and your assumptions. Racist how? Care to prove such hateful words? It is easy to assume what lost ponies would say, as you've been assuming with ease. They aren't here to say you're wrong, but only as much as they were to say you're right. You have a slippery argumentative point, one I can push in the other direction with ease. Try not to fill your statements with soo much assumption.
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Racist? Easy. Your rebel army is made of pegasi, and only pegasi. If you were anywhere close to a decent ruler for Equestria, you'd make an army with all of the three races, not just one, not just two. All of them. If you were a true ruler, you wouldn't consider earth ponies and unicorns as second class. I heard you fancy pegasi as "the finest tribe". I know you said that, besides slandering princess Mi Amore Cadenza, Ruler of the Crystal Empire, ally of Equestria, and also your niece, if I'm not mistaken.
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*smirks, then goes back to stern*
You don't know what power interviews can have. One other proof you are no prince-material.
Assumptions? I'm just stating the fact. You are just trying to evade your way out by pushing away opinions that don't fit in your blasphemy of a dream.
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Leader of pegasi military is my biggest support, my attack required surprise and quick maneuvering from the sky as Canterlot is located on the side of a mountain, my attack also required staging areas to be present nearby which only cloud forts could fulfill. You are painfully ignoring facts to support your flawed assumption. Just like your assumption about me thinking nonpegasi are second class. Nowhere do I say they are. I would never think such a thing. I may have my favorites but we are all still ponies. You have no proof what so ever, you simply have an agenda to try to discredit me and are trying to fling mud on me hoping something with stick. Sorry, that doesn't work. I can call the pegasi "the finest tribe" all I want. They are my favorite, and simply that. The only thing that it proves is that I like the pegasi. The proof you seem to present doesn't exist, and no, Cadance isn't my niece. And no I do not deny poking fun at her. Last I checked that doesn't make one a racist despot.
I don't know what power interviews have? Oh no, I do, I also know when to spot when someone has an agenda, and you do. I also look at facts, which you don't, painfully made obvious as you've ignore several critical facts. All you have are assumptions, opinions are not facts, and I'll push them away all I please. So please, stop pretending you're championing the cause of the downtrodden, you aren't. A real interviewer wouldn't conduct an interview with a bias.
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Still you will be all alone with LUNA! and maybe Maud since she is a rock god. Β
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Oops put this in the wrong area
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I've got to say this page explains a lot of things about the various characters, as to the whys and whats.
It does raise speculation what risks happening if Orion is crowned... Prince,, isn't it? Anyway, from what I can gather is that there is a good balance between the two parties, as both are believeing they are doing the right thing.
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