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GeertY In reply to DZ-Arts [2010-02-18 22:02:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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sellavision In reply to GeertY [2010-12-15 10:50:43 +0000 UTC]

The B should be tilted back a bit, now it's like its falling forward. Also, the 2 u's are different. the first one is crooked, the second one is nice. And one last thing (hey you asked for critiques) the UL at the end looks like its falling off!

I hope you dont take this the wrong way, I'm just trying to help and give some pointers!

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GeertY In reply to sellavision [2010-12-15 14:51:52 +0000 UTC]

ye this one is almost already a year ago i already improved my style it's more different that this one
but i understand the critiqs thanks

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