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How many of you feel like I trolled you? Now how many expected this from me? ....That's what I thought.

SO, I am EXTREMELY proud of this. I worked on it for a few days and I REALLY wanted to get the first part of the comic to have a horror-like feel to it. I think I succeeded.

Anyway, by the end of "Broken Spirit" (which will be over in just one epilogue! ) this is pretty much Discord's relationship with the six: Playful torment (What, he's slightly redeemed!), but of course he'd make it as ominous as possible.

This is actually based off a collaborated story I'm writing with my friend. If this comic gets good reception I might post the story

EDIT: The well known MickeyMonster got permission from me to do it in his own style! Now watch him get on EQD while I'm left in the dust.

BROKEN SPIRIT CAN BE READ HERE~ Broken Spirit - Chapter 1  "Okay, one more time!"

A collective groan was the only response. One pony's slightly annoyed head rose out from behind the lay out of flower sandwiches and delectable still steaming cookies. "Seriously, Rainbow Dash, enough! Just eat!"

It was already beginning to near sundown and yet barely an entree had been touched. The five ponies were exhausted, sweating, laying splayed out over the picnic blanket. Just a usual occurrence when Rainbow Dash was in the mood for a nice race. Being that the fields outside the palace stretched forever, the race was tedious for some ponies.

"No more racin', Rainbow. I feel so dizzy now; I don't think I c

All characters © Lauren Faust
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gembutterfly In reply to ??? [2016-06-06 22:08:43 +0000 UTC]

IT totes is

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Emerducks [2014-11-12 04:45:50 +0000 UTC]

You completely trolled me. Good one! I just LOVE it! I really like how you put it together!

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Djjacob1954 [2014-07-17 06:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Twilight said Everyone, instead of Everypony the second time.

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Blackfoxx777 In reply to Djjacob1954 [2016-06-06 22:48:52 +0000 UTC]

The term "everyone" has been used in the show."

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Djjacob1954 In reply to Blackfoxx777 [2016-09-04 00:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Really?

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Blackfoxx777 In reply to Djjacob1954 [2016-09-09 23:38:06 +0000 UTC]

I think so

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The-Kinky-Hobbit [2014-05-23 02:48:57 +0000 UTC]

GAHHH! So cute!! :3 <3 

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aracnea [2013-05-18 16:20:53 +0000 UTC]

is it just me or do they look alot younger than they normaly do?
hummm...and with that, i may have an idea for an elsworld story

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gembutterfly In reply to aracnea [2013-05-21 20:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha, nah, it's just my style. They're the same ages

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aracnea In reply to gembutterfly [2013-05-21 20:53:16 +0000 UTC]

oh...still might do that idea though

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BigJohnnyCool [2013-02-09 07:00:05 +0000 UTC]

I still believe this should be animated!

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gembutterfly In reply to BigJohnnyCool [2013-02-09 07:16:05 +0000 UTC]

That would be fantastic. Once I get an animating degree in the next few years I will set right to that~

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trinson [2012-10-21 03:42:59 +0000 UTC]

I gave Mickey a critique (if he lets it get posted that is). His originality points go to you as it was your ideal and art, that his sprang from. While your art styles differ and many ways, your art is no less great. It does lack in some places. Not cause the style is not like his, but do to it lacking a couple things that he did add. Like the light source (twi's horn) and a few prospect angles that make the individual scenes pop better.

With out those, your version is still very good. Good enough to make another artist want to copy your work. For someone to want to copy you is a sign that you are doing something right. Great work on inspiring others and I hope you never stop producing such wonderful and imaginative art.

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thps48 [2012-09-18 09:06:41 +0000 UTC]

A decent amount of views. :j

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YesImDeadpool [2012-08-13 01:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Some things aren't what they seem with Discord. XD

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Vespayik [2012-07-29 12:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Great idea for a comic!

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cfruge444 [2012-07-12 23:30:19 +0000 UTC]

** Why's he seem to be playing favorites with Dashie and not even going for Twilight?

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-13 02:55:52 +0000 UTC]

My friend and I have come to a conclusion that Rainbow has the best and most hilarious reaction to being tickled.

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-13 03:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Pinkie Pie's element is still laughter and Scootaloo's cuter than Dashie to some fans. Your argument is invalid.

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-13 03:16:05 +0000 UTC]

How is it invalid when it's my opinion?

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-13 03:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Just trying to make sense of chaos.

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-13 03:21:29 +0000 UTC]

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-13 17:59:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, also, the time Discord told Fluttershy "Now we're even." is a load of horse apples. Reason being: even though he got revenge for their revenge, he still got them first. So, they should dish out another round of payback. Though, to be blunt, the fact that he got revenge at all irks me. Yeah, I know this is Discord we're talking about and he vowed it, but that just brings back rage-filled memories of this one fanfic on here featuring my [former] worst enemy and [ex-] best friend and just makes him 20% less cool (not that I thought he was cool to begin with).

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-13 18:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh God, was that fic called "Vengeance"?

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-13 18:24:08 +0000 UTC]

No.

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-13 18:28:41 +0000 UTC]

What was the fic?

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-13 18:30:46 +0000 UTC]

I'd tell you, but you might not get the reference.

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cfruge444 [2012-07-12 01:14:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, given that Pinkie's element is laughter, she should be enjoying that the most. But, I can see why the rest of the Mane Six would enjoy that (After all, you can't make me believe that Fluttershy and Angel, Twilight and Spike, Rarity and Sweetie Belle, Applejack and Applebloom obviously (reference the grape juice scene from "Sisterhooves Social"), and Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo don't indulge in that once in a while.) I'm still kinda weirded out that Discord would go for something so soft-core and arguably non-chaotic, though. Princess Molestia's probably getting a wingboner from that and eating a banana while the trololol song's playing - whether or not she even knows.

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-12 01:21:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, this is based off my fic "Broken Spirit", basically a long story of Discord breaking out a third time, but ends up in Fluttershy's care after getting seriously injured. He goes through a slight redemption process, and eventually becomes an obnoxious/pranking friend/ally to the mane six eventually. His torment then is basically playful, like tickling/wet willies, that kinda thing. Thus he's tickling them here.

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-12 01:23:05 +0000 UTC]

No comment.

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-12 01:59:46 +0000 UTC]

Um...okay.

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-12 02:03:19 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* Now I'll have to make sure that he's not listening in and/or watching whenever I do/get into any tickle RPs on here.

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gembutterfly In reply to cfruge444 [2012-07-12 02:19:06 +0000 UTC]

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cfruge444 In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-12 02:23:35 +0000 UTC]

He's still my least-favorite character on the show, though, and he needs to learn some [pardon the term] chaos control.

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decoherence [2012-07-08 23:01:44 +0000 UTC]

So what, did Discord put on pyrovision goggles at the end?

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Neilikkaa [2012-07-08 03:12:47 +0000 UTC]

dawww thats adorable!

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Audiophillie [2012-07-06 10:37:36 +0000 UTC]

No being left in the dust for you! Love your original idea, and it was done well
(...though he DID get on EQD... )

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Sierra627 [2012-07-06 01:23:42 +0000 UTC]

so much trolling xD wooooow I fell for that one

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umbreon75 [2012-07-06 00:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Aww He did get the EQD but a lot of us clicked the link and saw the original as a result, great comic.

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gembutterfly In reply to umbreon75 [2012-07-06 00:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, we both got featured. Still a tiny bit bummed, but hey, I'm glad my concept got EQDed.

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Allanpike [2012-07-05 23:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Nicce!

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me-zimm [2012-07-05 19:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Kind of an inverse to "Meet the Pyro"...

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gembutterfly In reply to me-zimm [2012-07-05 19:28:46 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea what that is.

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RainbowRapsberry [2012-07-05 19:22:30 +0000 UTC]

LOL until I read Faith in Pinkie I knew there is a turn in the plot xD

But last panel is so cute ^^

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anzul [2012-07-05 18:09:30 +0000 UTC]

hahah great concept for the comic XD

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Ophiel004 [2012-07-05 16:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha this is freaking amazing

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hewhewje [2012-07-05 08:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Welp, both going into my faves.

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gembutterfly In reply to hewhewje [2012-07-05 08:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Robopengwin In reply to gembutterfly [2012-07-05 10:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Look at your edit; I guess you can predict the future.

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gembutterfly In reply to Robopengwin [2012-07-08 03:56:00 +0000 UTC]

It needed little predicting. The concept of the entire comic is pretty good in my opinion (although I hate patting my own back usually), and MickeyMonster is amazing. So of course he go featured. I may have gotten featured if I had been the only one to do the comic, but in a way I still did. I'm proud of both of us

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