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DOWNLOAD FOR FULL VIEWHow many of you feel like I trolled you?
SO, I am EXTREMELY proud of this.
Anyway, by the end of "Broken Spirit" (which will be over in just one epilogue!
This is actually based off a collaborated story I'm writing with my friend.
EDIT: The well known MickeyMonster got permission from me to do it in his own style!
BROKEN SPIRIT CAN BE READ HERE~ Broken Spirit - Chapter 1 "Okay, one more time!"
A collective groan was the only response. One pony's slightly annoyed head rose out from behind the lay out of flower sandwiches and delectable still steaming cookies. "Seriously, Rainbow Dash, enough! Just eat!"
It was already beginning to near sundown and yet barely an entree had been touched. The five ponies were exhausted, sweating, laying splayed out over the picnic blanket. Just a usual occurrence when Rainbow Dash was in the mood for a nice race. Being that the fields outside the palace stretched forever, the race was tedious for some ponies.
"No more racin', Rainbow. I feel so dizzy now; I don't think I c
All characters © Lauren Faust
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Comments: 104
Mickeymonster In reply to ??? [2013-08-13 21:51:35 +0000 UTC]
The idea is yours so, the honor should go to you
( extremely late little response here 8'D;;; )
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gembutterfly In reply to BigJohnnyCool [2012-07-05 07:22:27 +0000 UTC]
I might make it into one
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IzayaGraeme In reply to ??? [2012-07-05 05:10:52 +0000 UTC]
Now watch him get on EQD while I'm left in the dust.
On the brightside I saw your original because he got on EqD xD.
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gembutterfly In reply to IzayaGraeme [2012-07-05 05:13:56 +0000 UTC]
*snorts with laughter* Oh my God, I knew it. XDDD
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dutchscout In reply to ??? [2012-07-05 05:08:32 +0000 UTC]
If it helps, I came here from MickeyMonster. Great idea!
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MrBastoff In reply to ??? [2012-07-02 14:47:27 +0000 UTC]
Awesome idea, the ending was pure gold.
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DolphinBuster In reply to ??? [2012-07-01 13:19:00 +0000 UTC]
I was about to cry, then the last panel. D'AW!
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aceline1996 [2012-07-01 04:42:27 +0000 UTC]
OMG, i am so scared
*reading the last board*
oh actually tee hee hee
8/10
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bloodsuckingmonster3 [2012-06-30 06:34:18 +0000 UTC]
I didn't see that coming. Then I saw your icon and everything made sense.
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zaiali In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 20:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Knowing you, I knew that something was wrong when I first saw it.
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strangeanimal08 In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 18:24:49 +0000 UTC]
At first I was like and then I was like
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Mickeymonster In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 17:29:19 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW MAN, why didn't I think of this!?!?
Seriously, I thought this was gonna be really gritty, dark and serious! I love it, and I was pleasently surprised by the end! GOD, if only I could've done this obvious idea myself, but then again, can't have all the good ideas. It'd still love to try to draw this, but, then I'd be taking credit for your work here! ;3; Seriously, I'm loving this a lot, it made me smile.
Wonderful work!
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gembutterfly In reply to Mickeymonster [2012-06-29 18:35:25 +0000 UTC]
I was like "cool, Mickey commented on my stuff!" I'm a huge fan of yours, even though I sort of keep to the sidelines. XD But I think I've talked with you a few times.
I'll be honest, this and the RP I'm doing with your friend has been inspired by your awesome "Squeezin" comics. I was looking at your work the other night and thought "I wonder if anyone has thought of making a grimdark fake out tickle comic yet..."
And honestly, I'd LOVE to see your interpretation for something like this--you have no idea how much! Yours would probably be even cuter! I do ask you maybe link my comic in your description if it's alright, but I reeeeally want to see you try something like this.
I'd love to see it--love love LOVE! (And did I mention love~?)
(Off topic, but I've been thinking of drawing Sweetpea sometime. She's such a little darling~! )
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Mickeymonster In reply to gembutterfly [2012-06-30 08:26:31 +0000 UTC]
Pfff, I'm just a regular guy. My memory is not very good, but we've probably had a few chats.
A friend of mine? Who may that be? o3o
XD Ooooh, thank you! I knew this looked a little familiar somehow! Glad to be of service!
Oh, but of course! I'll remember to credit you once it's finished!
Thank you very much!
( I'd be honored! Please go ahead when you feel the motivation )
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Erika-Aro-Jaguire In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 16:46:41 +0000 UTC]
Eeee~! This is so cute!! Please please please please PLEAAAAASE post the story!!!! o3o
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Sada-Pazaki [2012-06-29 14:59:47 +0000 UTC]
I knew it! The mentioning that they 'lost' Pinkie pie had me suspicious...but anyways:
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Nakedmuffins In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 14:19:03 +0000 UTC]
This was fully unexpected!
I like this comic a lot!!! <33
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NoctusKerobian In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 14:10:28 +0000 UTC]
*Pokes with a feather duster* You cut that out!
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animallubber In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 13:41:50 +0000 UTC]
Dude that creeped the crud right out of me! However it is very cute and creative
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Greenrob In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 13:28:19 +0000 UTC]
you know is there was a way for discrod to become good. but i think thta may not happen.
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Jackie-SugarSkull In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 12:43:45 +0000 UTC]
Nice grimdark fake-out!
This was really sneaky... but clever.
Great work!
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Magmashift101 [2012-06-29 12:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Y'know, for some reason, I expected Pinkie to be the one getting tickled to death by a monstrous dragon...Is that weird?
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Ziblink [2012-06-29 07:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Best. Use of grimdark. Ever.
I was wondering just where this was heading I would have been very disappointed had this been played straight.
Now for the revenge, the terrible, unspeakable revenge. They will get him when he is sleeping. And all it will take is a bucket of warm water...
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Zetsumeimaru [2012-06-29 07:07:20 +0000 UTC]
I was trolled and hard. It was dark. It was gritty. It was a tickle fight?
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FaithFirefly [2012-06-29 06:38:03 +0000 UTC]
Uh-huh. XD I had a feeling "lost" didn't really mean "lost".
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gembutterfly In reply to FaithFirefly [2012-06-29 06:40:15 +0000 UTC]
Well of course YOU knew this was coming.
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FaithFirefly In reply to gembutterfly [2012-06-29 06:42:55 +0000 UTC]
Well hey, I didn't know what new story you had here.
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gembutterfly In reply to FaithFirefly [2012-06-29 06:44:00 +0000 UTC]
Well you at least knew I'd never draw anything malicious with Discord
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FaithFirefly In reply to gembutterfly [2012-06-29 06:46:59 +0000 UTC]
I actually wondered if it was a sneak peek of Maelstrom.
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