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GenesisArclite — WIP - Caius Ballad

Published: 2012-07-29 17:09:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 305; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Finished Version now up + shading here: ----->[link]

I moved this original version to Scraps because the new, completed version is such a vast improvement that I decided to just upload the completed version and call this a "work in progress". I apologize for the apparent spam of the finished artwork, but I am NOT double-posting.

Now brighter and more detailed. Comments on the changes are welcome, as well as what else needs to be improved upon.

Points commissions are open. Click here for more information

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I'm seriously in love with this drawing. I consider it the best I've done in years.

In the whole franchise, Caius is one of the most unique characters - not pretty, not emo, not shallow, not obnoxious. He also makes purple look REALLY COOL.

This took me HOURS to finish. The most trouble it gave me were his eyes and his lips. They're such distinct features - wide mouth, full lips; small but not too small eyes - so I had to keep erasing and redrawing them until they FINALLY looked right. Kept giving him semi-Caucasian features by accident - kind of got used to drawing Sephiroth, I guess.

I am quite pleased with his eyes. I love how it seems he's gazing back at the viewer, and how there seems to be three or four different emotions in them depending on how you look at it...

I consider this a vast improvement over my first drawing of him: [link] It's the same angle, but I paid special attention to how his face is structured this time. He's more masculine than the reference for his facial structure----> [link]

As for why his outfit is different (and why that headband is higher up), it's because this is how he appears in Divisions of Time . Also, I only realized it was too far up after it was too late to do anything about it.

Drawn on 14" x 17" paper with a no. 2 mechanical pencil. Cleanup done and words added in Photoshop CS2.

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Caius Ballad, Final Fantasy XIII-2, and all related entities (c) Square Enix Holdings Co., Ltd., Tokyo, Japan

Divisions of Time and all original entities belong to me.
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Comments: 5

hefeigal [2012-08-21 23:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Nice work! The proportions are great, and i like how you did his hair.
Might I make a suggestion? I would suggest drawing the lower lip, like ~f1utterby3 advised, as well as making the lines a touch lighter.
I do really like how you did the feather, though. The little fibers are done very well!
I feel as if his jaw is a bit angular, though. I wouldn't suggest making the curve so drastic, or so dark.
But overall, this is a great piece. The eyebrows and eyes are striking!

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GenesisArclite In reply to hefeigal [2012-08-21 23:09:19 +0000 UTC]

There's an improved version up now with some of these issues taken care of. As for his jaw, believe it or not, that's just how he's built. Also, I'm aware my style certainly isn't for everyone, and me trying to change it to something less manga/cartoon-ish ==> fail. But thank you anyway, I really appreciate it!

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hefeigal In reply to GenesisArclite [2012-08-21 23:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay.
I really like your style!

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GenesisArclite In reply to hefeigal [2012-08-21 23:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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f1utterby3 [2012-08-21 21:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Your lines and details are very good in this piece. I didn't see the earlier version, but I still think this piece could use a little bit of brightening to improve the quality of the picture.
I really like the way you've done his eyes and the angle on the face is very well done. A couple suggestions I have are: the bottom lip is practically non-existent and I think that the nostrils could be darker. Other than that, the only thing I think this piece is missing in shading. The hair is uniform and his face is stark white.
Good work!

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