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GenesisGoBoom — Naruto: Small gestures Pg:02
Published: 2007-08-12 10:03:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 13758; Favourites: 77; Downloads: 63
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second page of what i hope to be alot... if I dont get lazeh... this is just for fun. no critique nessasary Thanking you ^-^Thoug if there is anything screamingly wrong and you know how to fix it, pionters are welcome
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lol i doubt naruto even know sasuke is watching him lol great story line ^^ more
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XD its soo odd for me to get comments on the early pages^-^
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lol it cos i was busy and didnt see them and they really good so i like to comment 
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Yay my turn again. honey you really need more comments! *goes and rounds up a horde of crazy people and forces them all to comment*
XD now WHAT is Sasuke doing here? hmmmm *speculates. I guess i'm find out soon enough!
first panel- I'm not sure what to make of it. It;s... a little square with flap flap in it XD oh and poof and land. *giggles* sound effects XDDD The light green thing - the vine - stands out a lot and i dunno it that good or bad. if you were aiming it bring it out then it;s good - but if not it can be a tad distracting. A little technique i learned from watching artists is the change the color of things when they want to make the watchers take notice of it - like it it;s going to be something that'll be seperated from something else - like a section of a wall or whatnot' it;s color is detatched even if its subtle.
Heh but don;t listen to me i'm just rambling. what do i know haha
oh! it took me a little while to figure out what the poof meant! naruto's clone went bye bye! XD i guess thats true it is a poof sound.
second- Naruto looks like he;s about to attack his own clone. which considering what Sasuke says later is probably very true haha. Hehe Sasuke's hair looks... fun XD.
third- I have no idea which one to take as the third haha. Naruto's got this 3-D effect going on here -m which is totally awsome both perspective wise and antomy wise. nice job on rasengan too and his expression is awesome. This may just be me though but aren;t Naruto's eyes darker then that? Squee i lvoe the headband!
fourth?- yeah i think the fourth is Sasuke though Naruto kinda supersedes over it haha. XD he just is trying to get the spotlight! Oh more dialogue whee! I'm liking those eyebrows hehe. I like this shot a lot truthfully. It;s simply yet well done and well placed.
next page!
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I do Agree! I would love to get more comments! I love getting comments!!
XDDD My layout skills were BAD here, though it was still ver experimental, this was all a learning curb for me
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Well thats the nice think about Goujinashi's is it really trains you
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jupjup that's naru, almost eveyrtime training ^^
and he's gonna be the best hokage ever some day
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He Totally is!!! YAY for Naruto Hokagage!!!
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Lol, naruto's face scares me!! xDDD
(don't take it badly!)
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its probably a good thing?
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nice layout, but isnt n's rasengan hand on backwards? Also, the head looks like its on sideways... it might just be me misreading the image, but I'd think having it almost straight on (but down a little to the left like you have) with the eyes showing the greatest difference in direction would be a little better.
Just my brain, probably thinking of a specific something from dragonball etched onto my brain. ignore me if you like.
Sausageke in the bottom panel is well done too.
You're good at the page layout thing... did you say before it was a weakpoint, or was that someone else?
I know this looks SUSPICIOUSLY like a crit, but it wasnt meant to be...just typing...
THIS gives me an idea for a pic...Hmm.
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yes it is my weak piont, I have been working hard on it in the last few weeks, and YES GAWD!! I had so much trouble with the hand, its not backwardwm it just doesn't have a thumb LOL I will be honest with you in saying I kinda like the tilt personally, but then thats just me XDDD
Idea for a pic you say?
And Seriously hun, i dont mind pionters from you ^-^ its just the... 'his eyes are weird' kinda crit I can do without
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i would say its paying off, thats one thing that caught my eye, the layout.
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Thanking you ^-^ *makes happy noises*
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Le awesome~
Great pose, tiz very dynamic. I really like the simplicity of Sasuke's bangs and eyes in the last panel~
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Thank you very much hunneh!!! Glad you like it!!
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Do you realise how annoying a comment like this is?
Because if you don't.....it's really very annoying.
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i realy love it so-far please update soon ^^
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New page up today
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Thank you very much hunneh
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