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Published: 2014-06-13 08:20:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 6554; Favourites: 175; Downloads: 104
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This is what happens when you bring computers and TVs into Equestria...
10TH VECTOR PARTEH!
SVG: sta.sh/02cyfqvpq7ns
From: S01E09 - Bridle Gossip
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From this, Twilight was used in kremant.deviantart.com/art/Obs…
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Hi! I noticed that you wanted some criticism, so I snaked out a ton of errors for you to fix up.
Please refer to this for help: sta.sh/02fr9vkumzrm
(If you're unable to download it, just right-click on it and press anything that's close to "Save Link As..." and then save it in a folder! I say this because your SVG link is broken, and I wasn't able to download it unless I right-clicked on it.)
I'll list out the errors from Rainbow Dash to Spike. I'll start from Rainbow's tail and go in order from there.
Rainbow Dash:
1. This might be the pickiest find on this vector, but the color doesn't fill Rainbow's tail all the way, but that should be a super easy fix.
2. The lines on the cutie-mark cave in too much, thus making them too small.
3. The stroke on Rainbow's hoof clips through the body color.
4. Rainbow's hoof is too pointy.
5. The mouth needs to have the triangular teeth stroke, and the main stroke needs to be straight.
6. The stroke on the nose is a bit too big. Just make it smaller and it should look good. The same goes for the ear stroke.
7. The ear is too pointy.
8. There is a curving error on Rainbow Dash's hoof.
Twilight Sparkle:
1. Just... what happened to the second part of Twilight's mane? Where are all the hair details?
2. The mouth here also needs the teeth strokes.
3. The nose strokes, along with the ear strokes, are also too big here.
Spike:
1. The only problems I circled here were that there seems to be opacity on these parts when I'm pretty sure there isn't opacity.
Please don't be offended by this! I think that you did a great job, but there were a few errors that I think should be an easy fix. You definitely have great potential in making vectors. Just keep up the great work! If you'd like me to critique more of your stuff, just let me know and I will be happy to fetch out errors for you.
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what would be funny if this actualy happened. equestria needs webcams that they can use
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BWAHAHAHAHA! Yes Dash, Twi and Spike we can see you. And all the trouble you get up and IN to. BTW: Dash + Apple + Cinnamon (food not Pony!) = New Iron Pony Competiton (Or Bad idea/Joke/etc.)
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- TWILIGHT DO SOMETHING!
- Heh heh...hello...
- Seriously, Twi?
- Wait...if this thing make others see us then maybe...and just maybe
- They can see my awesome tricks!
- *shoves Dash out of the way* HUMAAAAAAAANS!
- AM I THE ONLY SANE ONE?!?
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annnnnnnd Spike went to drugs.xD
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Has Rainbow been hit with the poison joke again?
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Dammit!
Fixed, as usual...
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