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Published: 2007-06-15 19:17:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1881; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 21
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Sorry, its huge.You all thought I was lying didn't you? You all thought "Oh she isn't really going to make a comic. She didn't even finish her Star Trek one!" Well ya know what? I have page two of that complete except for one panel! And technically I am a lyer because I told you I wasn't going to make a comic out of these.
Anyways, I hate how the cave came out in that big panel down there. I really rushed it though. The reason the grass in the first panel is long and then suddenly magically changes to short grass is because there is long grass along the hillside to hide the cave from view. It gets short at the top of the hill. Feel free to critisize and point icky stuff out.
We are going to first watch how Van gets killed, for reasons uknown to you. Then the real story begins!
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Yeah, but It will be a long time before I bother with the next page. I'm waiting for the "All wolf comics belong to Kayfedewa!" thing to die down. Not that I blame her, I blame her crazed fans.
And your avatar is scaring me. What is it?
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It's my signature-symbol with which I often sign my art, also as a watermark. I made it moving because it looks boring if it doesn't.
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Good job! I like the character development. Is Germandark the one with red hair?
I really like the white pup. I hope they don't die like in my comic. They are TOO CUTE!!!
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Oh wow thanks! Germandark isn't even in this comic. (We couldn't pay her enough, the little tramp) She is in the one with the shark dogs. He is HungarianShadow my crazy wittle pup with a fear of birds.
And "At the end of this day, one shall stand, one shall fall"-Optimus Prime. If that says anything about the puppies' situation. And thanks again! Your comment means alot.
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Alriiight thanks for the hint! Looking forward to the next page..!!
btw I forgot to write this in my last comment, but in the last frame, hungarianshadow's pose is perfect. it makes him seem curious but also hesitant. So I think you deserve extra kudos for adding subtleties like that!!
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Thanks! I tried really hard to get him just right.
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Yay, I'm lurved! Thanks!
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Thanks, I love that people actually are enjoying this already. And I love your avatar! That dog has some crazy ears! Or is that spiky hair. Either way its cool.
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thanks . but it is a sears
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oooooooohh, what happens next? I want to see what happens next! Post up the second page darn you!
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Make me phaser hater. I can tell your right now, its not a happy ending. But then again anyone who looks through my galler should already know that!
There are no such things as happy endings in GermanDark's stories...
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You're so negative. I dont think I want to read your graphic novel now...............
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I was just kidding! Its full of unicorns and hot guys and Gundams eating Transformers! Its your kind of comic! Its also full of puppy killings, stuff going KABLAAAMMM and blood. Lots of blood.
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Now that's my kind of comic. minus the unicorns and hot guys. I have a boyfriend and I dont like unicorns.
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Yes well, unicorns are stinky and hot guys are only good to look at. Transformers can't be defeated by Gundams anyways. We retriet when against Gundams so we never loose!
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Wow this is really good! You must post the 2nd page soon I really want to know what happens... I remember the cave painting from the BBA forum, it is really beautiful ^_^
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Another, copy and paste thing. I will probably end up using every picture of my dogs and backgrounds in my gallery and scraps in here. I love copy and paste...
And thanks! I'll try to get pg 2 up soon but Its not even drawn yet. Its mostly just written out...somewhere. I lost the script months ago. I'm sad now and I'm just going to wing it till' I remember what I was doing!
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Hehe there is nothing wrong with a bit of copy and pasting ^_^ Well I will wait patiently for the next page, and however dark and sad it is I am sure I will love it ^_^ Sorry about loosing pg2 tho, that really sucks.
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Copy and Paste, Copy and Paste GermanDark likes to copy and paste! Were do you think I got those puppies from...?
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