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Published: 2018-11-17 06:09:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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"she looked herself over, seeing something she did not want to see. Gears and wires made by her greatest enemy implanted in her. She brought her hand up to her chest, feeling the open scar, her gloved hand sticking right into her own body. Her right hand brought up to her face, feeling something different. Everything was replaced, eye and all. Tears came to her left eye as she fell to her knees, now her own greatest enemy: THE COGS"Toontown thank you for your infinite amount for creativity.
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Oh no! Cog-if-if-fied! Not lovealot!
Creepy cool GH! really creepy cool!
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I have the story being written too if u wanna read it
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I do!
Let me know when it's done.
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read it now its kinda gonna be updated like dystopian art.
docs.google.com/document/d/1Pxβ¦
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WOW! That is violent... I love it 
now is trying to kill off her old friends. I got to page 15 and will continue when I get more time. I really like this story. You are very descriptive
when a scene turns into a battle. I like that. It makes it easy to visualize what is going on. Also there is a ton of emotion going on in this and thatΒ
is a good way to keep someone interested. If you get folks to care about characters then they will want to keep reading to see if things will
get better. Great story so far GH!
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Thanks! Also I realized that I'm more of a horror writer when it comes to feelings and pain. I love it.
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You are good at it! I like it a lot.
Now I see that you are truly a tortured soul. Write what you know and
you write emotional torment well.
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Keep it up friend! I'm a sucker for the feelieo's!
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God this is such a dark and cool concept... I really feel bad for her but I canβt help but think itβs cool??
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I'm a dark person, and I can send you the story if you wanna read it.
And yeah it is a permanent thing I'm drawing for my main toon so yeah ofc I think it's cool too.
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Ay yo thatβs totally fine with me! And sheβs id love to read it!!
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heres the story: (its still being written so yeah...)
docs.google.com/document/d/1Pxβ¦
anyways i hope you enjoy it
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Your artwork looks super awesome! π€© That even happened just like the other toons; Slappy Quackintosh and Primrose.
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Thanks!
And yeah. Man, poor toons...
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