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Published: 2019-10-10 18:23:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1638; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description So in case anyone forgot, way back in Volume 4 when Yang's prosthetic arm was first introduced they made a point of showing that Yang was very reluctant to put on the new arm. Also, probably to keep the prosthetic a surprise all of the Volume 4 promotional material depicted Yang with one arm. That actually got me thinking: what if as part of her recovery process Yang took longer to accept the new arm, like she felt unworthy of it, and trained to fight without it and even learned to fight with her stump. Sort of a way for her to come to terms with her loss and accept her new arm as just another tool/weapon and not something she could not live without...
And I will just drop the facade right now, I just really wanted to see Yang beat someone senseless with just her right arm stump because that sounded simultaneously hilarious and badass. I am not criticizing how the story actually progressed, so if you plan on commenting just to bitch about the writing do not. I decided I might as well draw this scenario since it is looking less and less likely it will ever happen in the show proper. I also took the opportunity to knock some humility into Jacques Schnee and make what I feel to be a long overdue Red vs. Blue reference. For those wondering, I am referencing this classic bit ( youtu.be/ZFsRYd-9thg ).
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FLASHFAN123 In reply to ??? [2019-10-21 09:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Yang: (walking out of the room, groggily and tired)
Weiss: Well, well, well. Look who finally decided to join us.
Yang: Sorry, I haven't been feeling myself since I gave birth to Holly. All these hormones are killing me. Plus I still really need to shed some of this baby weight.
Ruby: Uh, yeah we... we could... (looks at Weiss) we could ALL stand to lose some weight.
Blake: Yeah. Some of us more than others.
Yang: Yeah, some of us have really let ourselves go.
Weiss: Are... are you all talking about me?
Ruby: Yeah, we didn't want to say anything.
Yang: That's why we said something.
Weiss: Well, excuse me! I've been under a lot of stress lately. I've been carrying this team for months.
Yang: Carrying us where? To the buffet?

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-21 18:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Professor Port (approaching the group): (smirks) Afternoon, students: what are you all doing this fine day? (blinks upon noticing Wizard and Boomstick) ...and who are these gentlemen?
Wizard: (smirks) We're just visiting, sir: we just have to wrap a few things up and we'll be on our way*1*
Boomstick: (grins) Hey, nice blunderbuss! I'm more of a shotgun guy, myself, though I'm liking the battle ax...
Professor Port: (chuckles) Well, what do you know? Someone with an eye for the classics
Boomstick: (smirks) Oho, you better believe it!
Professor Port: (sighs) You know, you remind me of someone: almost like the nephew that I...never got to meet: between us, I suspect his father never wanted him, much to my anger and sorrow...
Boomstick: (chuckles) That's funny: I was about to say you remind me a bit like the Pappy I never had: when I was a kid, he ran out on us to join the army and never came back
Professor Port (quickly connects the dots, and frowns): (nods) I see: if you'll excuse me, there's a cousin of mine stationed in Blood Gulch*2* that needs a stern talking to (pauses before he leaves; looks to Boomstick) If you like, we can talk some more over some drinks: I've a whole library's worth of stories that you might want to hear
Boomstick: (smiles) You had me at drinks (watches a satisfied Professor Port walk off, not quite realizing that everyone else is looking at him in shock; sighs) What a nice guy...

1) slight allusion to the previews that play at the end of every "Death Battle" episode
2) yes, this IS supposed to imply that Professor Port and Sarge, and by extension Boomstick, are related: I'll leave it to you whether this is canon or not

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-21 21:02:47 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-22 04:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Boomstick: (currently in the middle of the analysis with Wizard, having just gotten to the part where they're talking about Cinder/The Meta's Domed Energy Shield*) It can block bullets, explosions, and even shells from tanks: allow us to demonstrate (places a Domed Energy Shield around Jaune) Here's Jaune inside an Energy Shield
Jaune: (quirks an eyebrow) Yeah, so?
Boomstick: (looks to Nora getting inside Sheila) And HERE'S a tank operated by Nora
Nora: (smirks) And what could go wrong?
Jaune: (pales) Oh, shoot...
Nora: (smiles) If you say so: fire in the hole in one! (fires a shot)
Jaune (cringes at the sound of the tank shell being fired only to realize nothing's happened): (breathes a sigh of relief upon realizing that Nora managed to miss the Domed Shield entirely) That was a close one...
Boomstick: (looks to Nora) Let's try that again, fellow legbreaker...
Nora: (smirks) Sir, yes, sir
Jaune (pales as the Energy Shield runs out of juice): (panicked) Wait: it ran out of... (screams out in pain as he's hit by the tank shell, though thankfully his aura managed to protect him)
Boomstick: (smirks) Now if the Energy Shield HAD been there, Jaune would have been fine
Nora: (chuckles) Wow: science is fun!
Wizard: (shouting from off-screen) I've said it for years!

* hey, there's nothing saying that Atlas COULDN'T develop something like this; also, for the record, I am NOT going to go out of my way to insert the Death Battle analysis from this episode, but I couldn't help highlighting this scene in particular seeing how it always got a chuckle out of me, you know?

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-23 00:40:58 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-23 13:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Fox: (approaches his team with a smile) Hey, guys, check out the armor one of the Atlas specialists lent me! Sure he was a bit hesitant at first, but I managed to wear him down; anyways, what do you think?
Velvet: (nervous) Fox, we all respect you, and you KNOW that we don't hold your blindness*1* against you, but that armor...how do I put this?
Yatsuhashi: (deadpan) It's pink: your armor is PINK!
Velvet: (winces) Yeeeah: THAT
Fox: (blinks) Wait, what? That can't be right: why would they give me pink armor?
Velvet: Well you DID say the specialist you got it from was hesitant to give it to you: maybe this is why?
Fox: (nervous) What, no, I'm sure he was just concerned how the higher ups would react...and besides, maybe it's not even pink: more of a...lightish red
Yatsuhashi: (sighs) Fox, they already HAVE a color for lightish red: you know what it's called? PINK (Velvet just pats Fox on the back in sympathy as he groans in annoyance, though where that annoyance is aimed is still up in the air at the moment*2*)

1) yes, Fox is physically blind: he uses specialized equipment to help in this regard; don't believe me? have a look:  rwby.fandom.com/wiki/Fox_Alist…
2) at this point, he could be annoyed with HIMSELF for getting into this situation in the first place, the specialist for not just telling him the armor was pink in the first place (though to be fair, said specialist might not have realized the student asking for the armor was BLIND), or Yatsuhashi for being so blunt/crass about the whole thing...or all of the above: that's always an option too

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-24 00:36:54 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-24 14:42:20 +0000 UTC]

Dr. Merlot*1* (currently dressed similarly to Trifa/Agent Blue*2*): (growls even as he points his gun at his wounded adversary, despite his own, far more severe injuries) Yang Xiao Long, daughter of Raven Brawnwen, and JUST like her mother, BOTH of them, QUITE insistent of interfering in business that doesn't concern her: I KNEW that I should have killed you the moment i set eyes on you*3*, DESPITE the respect my late comrade had for them!
Yang (having filed away that bit about her mother, both of them, for later): (snorts) Hey, the way you choose to dress up as her, I suspect she was MORE then a "comrade"*4*...but that actually raises the question: what ARE you up to that BOTH of my mothers would be meddling in your affairs?
Dr. Merlot: (gives a bitter chuckle) Doesn't matter now, because I'm going to kill you...and then I'm going after your SISTER next!
Penny: (floating over to him) Over my dead body!
Dr. Merlot: (quirks an eyebrow) Whatever you are, what can you POSSIBLY do to stop me? (pales as Penny's eye starts to glow and he realizes what's about to happen) Oh, son of a...
Penny: (glares at Dr. Merlot's corpse) My name is Penny Polendina and you will fear my laser face!
Yang: (smirks) Ooh, hell yeah! That's what you get for thinking you can mess with the daughters of Raven Brawnwen and Summer Rose!
Ruby: (gives a happy clap) Penny, that was awesome: how'd you do that?
Penny: (moves as if to shrug*5*) I'm not sure, really: I just got really mad and it just...happened
Weiss: (shudders) Note to self: be EXTRA nice to Ruby and Penny from now on

1) in case you need a refresher on who this is:  rwby.fandom.com/wiki/Merlot
2) because of her hair color; also, yes, this DOES mean that Dr. Merlot plays the Insurrectionist Leader who takes up the identity of Agent Connecticut/C.T./Connie after her death, albeit for different reasons in this world; oh, and in case you need a reminder of who this is:  rwby.fandom.com/wiki/Trifa
3) for the record, I still haven't fully decided what Raven's role in the story is, but I just can't shake the idea that she'd make it a habit of messing with anyone and everyone who messes with her family
4) just referencing the relationship between C.T. and the Insurrectionist Leader in the original script, though for the record, in this version of things, Dr. Merlot just took up Trifa/Agent Blue as a way of gathering information as well as a show of respect for his fallen comrade, despite not understanding at all why she managed to form a legitimate friendship with Summer Rose and Raven Brawnwen
5) just a reminder that Penny/Church is a floating robot orb at this point in time

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-24 20:56:49 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-25 00:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Yang (currently glaring at Raven, despite how she just helped them win an especially hard battle): (scoffs) I suppose this is normally the part where I show my appreciation, but you've got another thing coming if you think it's going to be that easy, RAVEN
Raven (briefly winces, already realizing that's going to be some time before she'll have the right to be called "Mom"): (sighs) I...I know, and I know that it'd take more then a simple apology to undo everything that I've done, but I willing to be a part of your life again: we don't HAVE to be family, but I'm willing to be a friend for right now
Ruby (remembering some of the stories Taiyang and Uncle Qrow had told them about Team STRK): (looks to Yang) Well, from what we've heard, there is ONE way to know that she's sincere...
Raven (already knowing what she's referring to): (sighs) I would just like everyone to know that I suck
Yang: (blinks, before nodding) And?
Raven: ...and that I'm a baby*
Ruby: (nods) What else?
Raven: ...and I'll need help feeding myself later and am in need of a diaper change
Yang: (smirks) Huh, Dad was right: it IS satisfying to watch
Raven: (gives a bitter chuckle) ...but a PAIN to be deliver

* yeah, to be honest, I doubt that you'll find this in the RvB narrative, but I felt the need to make a gender neutral version of the infamous "Surrender speech", if you know what I mean... 

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-25 01:30:42 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-25 16:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Cordovin*1* (growls as she approaches Qrow and Raven) I don't know how you two deal with these idiots: I'm ready to send some of them to the front line without any backup
Raven (having noticed that her gaze briefly turned towards Yang and Ruby*2*): (growls) If you even THINK about hurting them...
Qrow: (nods, giving his own glare) Can't believe I'm saying this, but I'm with her: you need to stop before you say or do something you regret
Cordovin: (sighs) Okay, perhaps that was a BIT harsh, but honestly, I just CAN'T get them to listen to me: it's like they're incapable of following orders at all!
Yang: (approaching them) Hey, Mom: we've started decoding those files like you and Uncle Qrow requested, but some of Adam's soldiers are causing a ruckus again: Winter, Velvet, and some of the other eggheads have the technical stuff down pat, but a few of us, myself included, having been itching for some action for a while and Adam and his soldiers just happen to have a set of VERY punch-able faces: permission to show them Brawnwin battle technique number 22*3*?
Raven: (manages a stern expression) Permission denied (gives a teasing grin) As appropriate as it might be, we don't have the chickens*3* (looks to Qrow) How do we look for number 47*3*?
Qrow: (glares) You REALLY that you can just...?*2* (pauses as he absorbs the current situation, before humming a bit in contemplation) I was thinking something more along the lines of number 38*3*: we ARE in an enclosed space after all*3*
Yang: (shrugs) Right, thanks for the suggestions: I'll report back later
Cordovin: (flabbergasted) How...HOW did you get results like that?!
Raven: (shrugs) As strained as my relationship with my brother is, and how I'm STILL working some things out with Yang, Ruby, and the others, I know that leadership is all about give and take: you like to do a LOT of taking, but you're not too fond of the "giving" part
Qrow: (chuckles) Again, can't believe I'm saying this, but she's right: if you start believing in THEM, maybe they'll start believing in YOU
Mata*4*: (currently driving the Warthog) Excuse me, vehicle coming through
Qrow: (sighs) PLEASE tell me that wasn't Mata... (cringes as the sound of a crash resonates throughout the halls)
Jaune: (looking at the wreckage) How?! How is that possible?! You were going like 5 miles per hour!
Mata: (cringes as he climbs out of said wreckage) I'm sorry: just bad luck, I guess...
Cordovin: (gives the Brawnwin siblings a deadpan expression) Forgive me if I struggle in that regard...
Qrow: (sighs as he watches her walk off in a huff) Worst part is, I'm not entirely sure if my semblance is to blame for this (it says a lot about his emotional state that he doesn't even comment when Raven gives him a comforting pat on the back)

1) my best guess as to who'd be playing the role of Kimball
2) at this point in time, Raven has managed to make enough of a connection with Yang and Ruby that the former is comfortable calling her "Mom" again and the latter has taken to calling her "Auntie Raven", though needless to say Qrow hasn't quite forgiven her for everything
3) just for the record, Yang and Raven have run through a few drills that the latter went through back when she was leading the Bandits as a way of bonding: Ruby occasionally joins in, while Qrow keeps a close eye on things to make sure that the kids are safe and/or that Raven doesn't try anything malicious (don't worry: they are, and she hasn't); side note: I'll just leave it to you what those battle techniques entail
4) I don't know why, but I can't unsee him being the resident Jensen

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-25 20:26:43 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-25 22:23:25 +0000 UTC]

Winter (fighting a difficult battle against some mercenaries alongside Qrow, Raven, Yang, and others): (sighs as the fighting draws to a close) Is that all of them? (freezes as one of the remaining enemy soldiers tries to do a kamikaze attack on the Specialist, only to have his head separated from his shoulders by...)
Raven: (smirks as she sheathes her sword) Yes, that's all of them
Qrow: (glares) Don't think for a MINUTE that this means that I...
Raven: (scoffs) Oh, I'M sorry: I didn't realize that "saving your life" was a criminal offense
Yang: (nods) Give her some credit: she's at least TRYING to make up for her abandoning me and Dad and then nearly getting me and Ruby killed while selfishly trying to escape a criminal record that's looking more and more like something one might actually deserve (glares at her uncle) Oh, wait: that last part would actually apply to YOU, wouldn't it?*1*
Qrow: (growls) That's not... (sighs, as deep down, as much as he hated to admit it, Raven and his niece had a point) You're right: that's not what we should be focusing on right now (looks around) Speaking of "we", where's everyone else?
Winter (readies her weapon, as two of the enemy soldiers that had been knocked out of the fight started to regain consciousness): (huffs) At the moment, working on our extraction: they actually should be here right about... (lowers her gun as a Warthog, driven by Nora and the rest of Team JNPR while playing some VERY familiar music, comes barreling over the hill, taking out the two soldiers as it does; Winter gives a nod) NOW!
Nora: (turns off the radio and looks to the group with a smug smile) Sup?
Raven: (nods to the downed soldiers) Not that we don't appreciate the timely arrival, I thought for sure that the rest of...Yang's team*2* was right behind you
Yang: (looks around) Yeah, Mom's*3* right: what happened to Ruby and the others?
Ren (not quite noticing the annoyed and pleased expressions on Qrow and Raven respectively*3*): (quirks an eyebrow) That's odd: they were supposed to be right behind us
Neptune (currently the other Warthog carrying Weiss, Ruby, and Blake up to the base slowly and methodically while playing a Bolivian Orchestral Mash-Up*4* on the radio): (smiles) We're here!
Jaune: (deadpan) WOW: nice entrance, buddy: VERY thrilling
Ruby: (scoffs) Yeah, we're never letting him drive again...or if we do, we're riding with YOU guys
Weiss: (nods) Strange as it might sound to hear ME say this, I agree with Ruby (glares at Neptune) I can't believe you stopped at the train tracks!
Neptune: (frowns) It's the law!
Blake: (growls) We were under fire!
Neptune: (sighs) It's still the law...
Yang: (groans) Neptune, only YOU would find a way to make a high-speed chase BORING
Qrow: (nods) All those in favor of taking away Neptune's driving privileges? (needless to say, Neptune himself is the only one who doesn't vote in the affirmative)

1) in this version of the narrative, things got a little messy while Qrow was trying to clear his name, to put it lightly, which needless to say it greatly hurt Yang and Ruby's ability to trust him afterwards: "Say what you will about your sister, BRAWNWIN: when push comes to shove, she at least manages to still have something resembling a sense of honor!" was what was said by RUBY of all people after she nearly had her head taken off by her Uncle's scythe during a particularly ugly confrontation between them and enemy forces
2) like I mentioned before, Raven is trying to start over with her family and thus is trying to be cautious with how she interacts with the others, in particular being hesitant to refer to Yang as her daughter
3) needless to say, trust is a shaky thing within the group of Raven, Qrow, Ruby, and Yang, but while Qrow is still a bit hesitant to trust his sister again, Yang and Ruby have learned to open up to her a little, to the point where the former will occasionally let the word "Mom" slip into conversations, though not always
4) I'll leave it to you how it sounds

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-25 23:13:26 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-26 12:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Penny (currently a hologram): (looks to the group) ...not that it's not good to see you guys again, and I appreciate you getting me out of that memory unit, but I get the feeling that my rescue isn't ENTIRELY because of our friendship, or in the case of Yang, Ruby, and Weiss, a sort of pseudo-sibling bond*1*
Winter: (quirks an eyebrow as she looks to Weiss) Pseudo-sibling bond?
Weiss: (shrugs) Hey, Yang and Ruby are like the family I never had, and from what we learned, Penny WAS based off of some of Summer Rose's thought patterns*2*, who even though her visits to our home were brief was more of a mother to me then Willow was after she shut down after a certain disastrous birthday, so...
Winter: (nods) Touche, though I hope she isn't too offended that I'm not in too much of a hurry to call her "sis"
Penny: (quirks an eyebrow) Oh, so YOU'RE Winter? Odd, you don't quite match Ruby's description...
Winter: (gives a flat look) Oh? How DID she describe me?
Ruby: (slightly panicked*3*) Th...that's not important right now! (clears her throat) Anyways, to answer your unspoken question, Penny, Winter here wants to find her father, who seems to have gone into hiding in recent years: seeing how he implanted some of his memories into you*4*, you might know where he is...
Velvet: (blinks) Wow, she actually summarized that fairly well: from what Blake told me, I thought for sure that there would be something that you might not have underst...
Ruby: (smirks) ...and when we find him, we can have a nice family reunion and resolution between him, Weiss, and Winter like we had with Yang and Auntie Raven*5*
Velvet: (sighs) ...and THERE it is
Weiss: (gives a sad smile) Ruby, I love you, but there's a BIG difference between Raven and JACQUES*6*: as many mistakes as she's made, even QROW can't deny that unlike our deadbeat dad, she ACTUALLY cares about people other then herself
Qrow (glares and moves to deny that statement, before freezing, actually comparing Raven and Jacques in his head): (groans) Dammit, she's right: between the two, Raven's actually the better person...
Yang: (shares a smirk with her mother) Nice to know you can admit that she's not a JACQUES
Penny (ponders the situation even as everyone else groans in response to Yang's pun): (nods) I'll do what I can, but it'll take some time: I might have Mr. Schnee's memories, but I don't exactly remember how to access them, if that makes sense
Winter: (nods) Qrow DID warn me that you had suffered some damages so I'm not TOO surprised: for now, let's get going

1) at this point in time, the gang has learned that Penny was intended to be the A.I. child of Summer and Jacques, and have acknowledged that she has become something more and it shouldn't change anything within the team dynamics
2) long story short, Project Maiden needed a starting point for the artificial Summer Maiden they were creating, thus Summer Rose had offered to let them make a copy of her mental patterns prior to her death, though needless to say Jacques threw a monkey wrench into things
3) I'll leave it to you how Ruby choose to describe Weiss' older sister to Penny back when she was "Penelope"
4) in this version of things, Jacques implanted a copy of his mental patterns into the mix to try to control what he thought would be his "perfect" daughter, though needless to say things didn't quite work out that way, in no small part because Dr. Polendina did his best to keep Penny, well, PENNY, if you know what I mean...
5) to be clear, Ruby hasn't QUITE forgiven Raven for EVERYTHING that's happened, but she's gotten used to having her around, so while she'll never refer to her as "Mom" (something that Raven has come to accept), she's a lot faster to accept her as family then her sister and ESPECIALLY her Uncle
6) needless to say, things are rather strained between the Schnee daughters and their father

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-26 16:34:34 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-27 11:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Penny (currently running away from an enraged Pamela inside a tank alongside Jaune): (quirks an eyebrow) I don't understand: how did you know that was going to happen?
Jaune (feeling a sense of relief now that the timeloop is over): (smiling) Because of Tyrian: you know how Summer said that how everyone who has an association with Project Huntsman had an A.I. and a special ability? I think that HE could loop us through little segments of time, and he just kept doing it over and over until he won
Penny: (pales) Wait, what? How many times did we loop?
Jaune: (shrugs) Not sure, but why does it matter? He's dead now
Penny: (shakes her head) Yes, but don't you remember when we came here to begin with? I got stuck in a loop, and every time I went back, I left a bunch of... (freezes as she and Jaune come face to face with multiple duplicates of Tyrian/Agent Black as they round a corner; Penny gulps) ...copies
Tyrian/Agent Black (all of them): (gives a malicious smile) Hello (proceeds to give a maniacal laugh)

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-27 14:47:53 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-27 19:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Neon (having finished helping Yang to deliver her baby): (whips some sweat from her forehead with a smile) Congratulations: it's a girl... (looks over the child a bit) ...uh, I think: I've never actually SEEN a half-grim child before*1*
half-grimm child (currently unnamed): (looks to Yang) Mama?*2*
Yang: (gives a teary-eyed smile) How can something so potentially dangerous be so precious? You look so delicate, but I can already tell that you'll grow to be a fighter, just like the rest of your crazy family: NO ONE will touch you unless they go about it gently, just like the holly bushes we have back on Patch (gasps) That's it: how do you like the name "Holly"?*3* (the newly christened "Holly" just gives a smile in response)
Blake: (looks to Weiss) Is it weird that I find this to be a bit cute?
Weiss (knows that she's referring to how Yang is just flat-out ignoring the fact that her first child is half-grim): (gives a shrug) If it is, then I'm weird too (glares) Don't even think about it, Coco
Coco: (pouts) You're no fun (clears her throat) Anyways, not to interrupt the heartwarming/creepy moment, but the Manta should be here soon
Fox: (scoffs) Please, it's coming all the way from Atlas: it could be days before it shows up, or weeks, or months, or even years! (flinches as the Manta very nearly lands on top of him)
Penny: (smirks) Ship's here
Ruby: Shotgun!

1) just to be clear, Holly IS actually a girl: I just figured that I throw this in there for a brief bit of humor
2) for the record, Holly knows how to say two, maybe three other words at this point: being half-grim means that it develops at a slightly faster rate then most humans, but it IS still just a newborn at this time, you know?
3) yes, this IS how I've come to envision Holly gets her name and/or how she'll be like when she grows up: like a healthy holly tree: beautiful to look at, helpful to those in need, but quite painful to those that don't know what they're doing, if you know what I mean...

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-27 19:59:28 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-28 12:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Raven (winces as the hunters/huntresses and her bandits continue to fight against each other): (sighs) Ruby, I'll be honest: I don't know how we're going to deal with this (lowers her head in shame) I guess it's true what they say: you can't go home again...
Ruby: (shakes her head) No, wait, you had the right idea earlier: if we're going to survive what's coming, we've ALL got to work together: the only problem was you execution: you were trying too hard to appeal to one group or the other, but not both at the same time, sense from what I've seen, they'll BOTH respond to an empathetic individual that's in touch with their dark side, but not overly so
Raven: (ponders this, before nodding) You might be right, but one problem: YOU got the empathy and I'VE got the rough edges around my personality, but they've already made it clear that they won't listen to me in this state, and I doubt you can get angry enough for you to be convincing
Ruby: (sternly) WRONG: you saw how I was with Paulette in my head: she couldn't have gotten me that way if I DIDN'T have some anger in me, so I just need to tap into some of it
Raven: (nervous) I...I'm not sure this...
Ruby: (growls) I just need to focus a bit on the things that I hate: spoiled milk, burnt cookies, rotten strawberries, people who hurt my friends and family... (does this for a few more moments before she suddenly gives off an anguish filled roar that stops the fighting below them in it's tracks; Ruby drops down, knocking out a few of the bandits and a few hunters/huntresses that she's been annoyed with in the past, before growling) My name is Ruby Rose, and I. Hate. Broccoli!
random bandit (missing a tooth*): (panicked) It's Blondie's kid sister! (quickly drops his weapon) Stand down, everyone: we don't know what she'll do now that she's adopted the Brawnwen way!
random Beacon student (one who is on good terms with Ruby): (shakes his head) I somehow doubt it's that: she's likely just angry we're fighting among ourselves, and being honest, she has a right to be: we've got bigger things to deal with (drops his own weapon) Still, as much as I never thought I'd say it, the bandit's got the right idea: everyone drop your weapons: we don't want to provoke her more then we already have: after all, you know what they say: beware the anger of the gentle soul
Raven (watches as the bandits and hunters/huntresses start to drop their weapons, with Ruby quickly taking out the ones that refused to): (gives a proud smile) She truly IS Yang's sister...

* I'll leave it to you whether or not this is the same bandit that Yang ran into during the events of Volume 5

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-28 21:33:12 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-29 00:26:28 +0000 UTC]

(*Nods* it shows: admittedly, part of me DOES wonder what "01001" means, but not really a deal breaker for me)

Robot Army: (moving out of the base...VERY slowly) CHARGE!
Paulette: (groans) Oh, for the love of...will you hurry up?! (looks to Ciel) I find your work to be VERY disappointing, Ceil: I won't be able to hunt ANYONE down with THESE slowpokes?
Ciel (currently outfitted a control chip*1*): (smirks) Vous avez dit que je devais vous construire une armée de robots: vous n'avez jamais dit que cela devait être rapide! (translation: You said I had to build you a robot army: you never said it had to be fast!)
Paulette (realizing that her human minion is continuing to resist her even now): (growls) Why you...I'm giving you 24 hours to make my army as efficient as possible, and if you even THINK of sabotaging anything, I'll...
Ciel: (glares) Tu feras quoi? Je pourrais être forcé d'obéir à vos ordres, mais vous ne pouvez pas me faire SOUMETTRE à vous! (translation: You'll do what? I might be forced to obey your orders, but you can't make me SUBMIT to you!)
Neon (Paulette's current host): (gives a nervous smile) Hey, look on the bright side: they might be slow but they have EXCELLENT posture (gives Ciel a grin even as Paulette growls) A for effort, Ciel
meanwhile...
Raven (looks upon the gathered robots alongside Team RWBY): (nods to the others) I don't care HOW slow those things are: we're not properly prepared to take on a group that size: might I suggest a tactical retreat?
Blake (nods) Not a bad idea: gives us an excuse to check out that distress signal we picked up a while back
Raven: (smiles) Starting to understand what Yang sees in you: now everyone in the jeep
Weiss (feeling uncharacteristically playful): (smirks) Shotgun!
Yang: Shotgun! ...fuck!
Ruby: (smiles) Shotgun's lap!
Raven: (shakes her head even as Weiss blushes at that declaration*2*) Sorry, but the jeep doesn't have enough seats for everyone: SOMEONE is going to have to stay behind
Ruby (noticing Yang getting ready to tear into her mother for suggesting abandoning her teammates, AGAIN, and noticing that the robots are starting to pick up their pace*3*): (sighs) I'll do it*4*
Yang: (blinks) Wait, Ruby, no: I don't care what Raven thinks: abandoning your friends is never...
Ruby: (glares) I'm not abandoning ANYONE...and for the record, your MOTHER is right (points to the robots, which are just over the next hill) SOMEONE needs to make sure the rest of team can warn the others about what Paulette is planning and I KNOW I'm fast enough that I can give you guys plenty of time to get away (gives her sister a smile) Don't worry: I don't plan on getting into trouble
Yang: (tears up, but gains a smile nonetheless) You never do, but somehow that always ends up happening (gives a bitter chuckle as she gets hit in the shoulder for that remark before giving her sister a quick embrace) We're coming back for you, okay?
Ruby: (nods) I know: you're like your mom, BOTH of them in that regard: you never leave your family without a reason
Yang: (sighs) Alright, I get it: I'll have a heart-to-heart with Ra...with my mom after we're done telling the others what we've found out
Ruby: (smiles) That's all I ask (breaks the embrace with her sister only to get caught in another one, courtesy of Raven; Ruby blinks, even as she returns the hug) Not that I'm complaining, but what's this for?
Raven: (shakes her head, tears in her eyes) Nothing, just...you remind me SO much of Summer right now...
Ruby: (nods in understanding) Don't worry: I don't plan on dying today (looks to Blake and Weiss) Don't do anything stupid while I'm gone
Weiss: (snorts even as she tears up a little herself) How can we? You're taking all the stupid with you, you dolt (gives her partner a quick hug) Don't try anything TOO crazy, alright?
Ruby: (shakes her head) No promises (looks to Blake even as she also gives her a quick embrace) What: no commentary?
Blake: (pauses) Actually, I do have ONE thing to say (glares) If you die before we come back for you, I'll kill you
Ruby: (gulps) Noted (loads her sniper scythe even as gains a steely expression as her team drives away and the robots approach) Great: now it's just me and the robots (takes in the sheer numbers of the robots; gulps even as she gets into a battle stance) Great: now it's just me and the robots... 

1) seeing how Ciel (aka Remnant Lopez) isn't a robot, I needed an explanation as to why she'd align with Paulette (aka Remnant Omega/O'Malley), and in the end, the only answer I could come up with was "she wouldn't, at least not by choose", thus I came up with a scenario of how Paulette would force her into her employ as well as an explanation as to why she would be speaking French for a majority of her scenes in this script when we've seen that she CAN speak English: let me know what you think
2) I'll leave it to you whether or not there's any infatuation connected with this blush
3) long story short, Ciel more-or-less has been given control of the robots and is able to input commands: despite her best attempts to resist Paulette's commands, eventually those robots ARE gong to start running...
4) I KNOW that this isn't how it worked in the original script, but it just fit Ruby's character much better, you know what I mean?

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FLASHFAN123 In reply to Mr-Astounding [2019-10-29 01:30:22 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Astounding In reply to FLASHFAN123 [2019-10-29 03:19:35 +0000 UTC]

(so long as the chip is inside her head, yes: Ciel IS only able to speak French due to a malfunction; once it's taken back out around the time of Paulette's defeat, she DOES regain the ability to speak English again, though her continued resistance against said chip HAS conditioned her to slip into French vocabulary whenever she's angry or stressed; that said, she DOES get over this a little with the help of some therapy, and a few members of the group *Weiss, Winter, Ren, Velvet, and few others I haven't decided upon at this time* HAVE started to learn French to ease the confusion during times of battle, so if you see her speaking English in the coming scenes, that's why; with that out of the way...)

Winter/Agent White: (groans) My head... (grunts as she tries to get back up) I...I have to...*1*
Patricia: (glares) Do WHAT: get yourself killed!? I bet you don't even have a plan!
Winter: (growls) Yes, I DO: take down the abomination that THINKS it's Summer Rose before she kills stabs everyone here in the back like the pawn of Jacques Schnee she is!*2*
Polly: (shakes her head) You mean like how YOU stabbed Maria in the back, quite literally, I might add*3*? Oh, sorry: "All Project Huntsman operatives must refer to each other by their code names", which would make HER "Agent Silver", wouldn't it?
Winter: (flinches) That...that's not...
Polly: (huffs) What: you think that just because you're his first born daughter means that you're the only one whose allowed to take him down? What would you have done if it was WEISS that was blocking your path?! (shakes her head) I'm sorry, Agent White...WINTER, but you'll never be truly happy if revenge is the only thing you live for
Patricia: (nods) She's right: if you continue like this, you'll spend the rest of your life drowning in your own fears
Priscilla (having had Cinder sneak up on them during this whole conversation): (gives a dark chuckle) Oh, she's not afraid: not YET
meanwhile...
Summer/Agent Rose (having just dealt with the Summer Maiden...PENNY): (whips a tear from her eye) Rest well...my daughter*4* (looks to where she left Winter...and pales) What are you doing?! (sprints forward as Cinder/Agent Crimson, now wearing armor with an unusual symbol painted on it, holding Winter up by her neck, blood dripping on the ground; Summer begins to panic) Nonononono! (Cinder clenches her fist around around the microchips containing Polly and Patricia's core programs before throwing Winter off the cliff they were standing on) NO! (watches helplessly as Winter, barely hanging onto her consciousness, attempts to use her glyphs to slow her fall, landing in the snow below, though Summer is uncertain if she's still alive...but she knows she doesn't have time to worry about that as Jacques is already making his move, having witnessed all this from a helicopter; Summer just growls, before activating her com-system) Winter, if you can hear me, I meant what I said: we can still team up: believe me: I want to see Jacques fall JUST as much as you do; for now, I'm going to try and lure Jacques and Agent Crimson away from your location*1*
Priscilla (appearing on Cinder's shoulder alongside Polly and Priscilla, who are currently attempting to comfort each other): (gives a dark chuckle as Summer runs off, opting to mold her sisters to her liking at a later time*5*) You can run all you like, Agent Rose: we are the Meta, and we WILL find you

1) just for the record, I decided to expand on the original script: let me know what you think
2) as I mentioned before, Winter and Weiss have met up with Summer once or twice in this version of things, so it goes without saying that the former would eventually realize that the woman following her father's orders was NOT the (adoptive) mother of Yang and Ruby (whom she had heard stories about from Qrow and the ORIGINAL Summer Rose); this would later lead into a private investigation where she would learn just what the deal was with THIS version of Summer...and immediately draw all the wrong conclusions due to her own stubborn pride and paranoia, something she would admit to regretting later down the line
3) don't worry: she made sure not to hit any vital organs (and I'll be sure to expand on this if/when I get to doing that scene)
4) just to be clear, she hasn't forgiven Jacques for what he did, but she CAN acknowledge the bond that she would have shared with Ruby, Yang, and herself, and truth be told, if given the chance, she likely would have welcomed Miss Polendina into the family with open arms, as she was just that kind of person...but I'll get more into this if/when I get to doing that scene
5) needless to say, being the embodiment of AMBITION and creativity gives you a bit of an ego and a sense of certainty of your own supposed perfection; ironically enough, Jacques managed to succeed in making Penny and/or her fragment(s) more like himself when it came to Priscilla, if you know what I mean...

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ReximusProductionsYT In reply to ??? [2019-10-10 18:54:17 +0000 UTC]

He deserves it!

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GhostBear3067 In reply to ReximusProductionsYT [2019-10-10 18:58:14 +0000 UTC]

But not the dignity of an actual fist, prosthetic or otherwise.

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