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GhostCamelion — Cloud Strife WIP -HELP-
Published: 2008-04-09 14:59:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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HELP PLEASE!I need some serious, major, big-time, you name it CRITIQUE here. There is something wrong with the pose/anatomy of this, and it bothers me like none other. I want it fixed, but my abilities leave something to be desired. Namely, I can't see the problem.
But thiiiiiiis would be another one of my big projects....Sketched it a while ago, and just kinda...stopped it. Started working on it again with some prodding from 'ignasia. I really didn't want to have it viewed before it was done, but I am stuck bigtime.
GAHHHH.
-edit- shipped off to scraps
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ZAX IS HAWWWWWWWWTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
ehe.... yeah.
anyhoo, onto our fave chocobo-headed bundle of kawaiiness......
indeed, i think the back leg is too small....
OTAY! GOT IT! you need a background... FAST. you have to find the horizon point! the picture looks okay now, but its out of proportion because you dont have a horizon!
i do really like his arm though... definitely awesome...
yeah.
hope that helped!
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STOP RIGHT THERE! cliche but... *sniff* DO IT! PLEASE!
yeah, i like that idea... as sad and cliche as it is, i love it.
GHOSTY KAWAAIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!! XD
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i wouldnt know where to look...but your watchers should do something! WHERE THE HECK ARE THEY?!?!
im sure you could grab a generic midgar background from google, or something, and just add that as a layer, and use it as a reference...
LUVS YOU HARUHIIIIII!!!!!!!
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Some of 'em showed up XD I'm not great enough of an artist for people to start caring just yet....Which means, I go around and ask for critique's.
Hmm, I kinda had an idea for the background....tell me what you think of this: He's on the rocky hilltops, and grassy areas where you know...Zax....
:[
and where Cloud put the Buster for a shrine. With Midgar kinda sticking up faintly on the horizon. Annnd Nightime? What'cha think? With of course a hovery ghosty Zax :]
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Well, the backleg was intentional, cuz ChocoboHead is angled somewhat. Though, I probably screwed THAT up....and I am shot for background ideas. Was gonna get to that once I finished Cloud and Zax....
Thanks though, senpai :] Tis appreciated. I'm kinda gathering ideas of what needs fixing up....but there's no definite picture yet. Just hoping I can get some person with alotta expertise and experience and a really good eye to glance this over. I've been looking around, seeing if I can do some recruiting lD
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CLOUD! -glomp-
Hmmm... I see what you mean. I think the problem is in the legs but I can't point it out....
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XD Love him. I think I intend to throw Zax in the picture too, but, well....gotta get Cloud set before I even go anywhere else.
Hmm, possibly....*bang's head* Its frustrating! I'll have to tweak the legs...
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Zax? You mean Zack?
Sounds like a good idea...
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Yup :] That's how I say his name....that or Zacks XD Ever watched any FF7 in jap? Listen closely.
This picture makes me incredibly frustrated! *growl*
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I've only seen FF7 in japanese. But there's this kid at my school that looks exactly like Cloud. It's really freaky. They even have the same facial features.
I understand that fustration....
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Yeah, it's just becasue of the Japanese accent. Hmmmm.... I might be able to get him with my phone if I am sneaky around the teachers.... but I don't know how to get it off my phone......
Yesh.
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I like the accent :] Hmm, do you have bluetooth on the phone?
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Awww, crud, any other ways to take pics?
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You go on any class trips? Maybe you can bring a camera?
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As if. The only class trips my school district is allowed to go on, or has the money to go on, is the junior high students (7 & 8 grade) going to the high school (like, 5 feet away) to see a play.
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Awww dangit. I really wanna see a picture of this lD
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lol xD I don't know his last name so hoping he already has his pic on the internet is off...
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Ahh, crud! Well, maybe you can find out his last name? Gahah, I'm a leeeetle bit obsessed here. It just fascinates me extremely is all. Boy, am I pathetic!
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We all have our weird obsessions...
vampires...
lol
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Ever notice they say names differently in jap? Zack sounds more like Zax, and Cloud's like...Cloudo or something. Oooo, really???? That's pretty tight. Could you, say....take a picture of him and send it without looking awkward/creepy/stalkerish? XD
*vigourous nod* The kind that makes you wanna rip out your hair. Or just stare at the computer and repeat the mantra "I suck".....
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