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ghostinafogso be it
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Description some of us are content
      sketching out proofs in chalk,
      elbow-deep in the guts of mechanics
where sparks fly
     in a flood of associations/
          torment of carnations bursting
with the precision of an abstract language
                                which never
works            when some things clearly do:
a crystal clear sound,
a 7am fog

i don't understand; & i try harder
 with different starting points,
different trajectories
    looping off in mad hare tracks,
but it seem like it always converges
 
      to a cardinal landing  
                on a puffy pine branch.

in a few years, wordworts
              will sprout no new cones,
  all i hope for are new arrangements
of the herbarium
     i'll present on my deathbed.

in a few years, none of us will remain
                   but the creek will,
so i whisper secrets
        into charged particles of water
& close the book.

and if i convince one man of the value of sunrise's milky froth
                                            in west coastern dew,
so be it.
and if this is how the days' cement will settle, golden and uneasy,
so be it.
and a roommate snores in ancient swells
           like the red loam that lines this gully,
old, reliable
           breath.
so there's something we can count on
        between now and the next blink
and if that's enough,
so be it.
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Comments: 19

westernwinds [2016-12-09 00:55:49 +0000 UTC]

nice!

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Rynneer [2016-12-08 01:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done

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Lintu47 [2016-12-05 16:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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ghostinafog In reply to Lintu47 [2016-12-09 17:18:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Lintu47 In reply to ghostinafog [2016-12-12 17:42:09 +0000 UTC]

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Battlepants05 [2016-12-05 03:39:35 +0000 UTC]

Great piece of literature, deserved every bit of your DD.

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ghostinafog In reply to Battlepants05 [2016-12-09 17:18:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you - honoured to hear that :3

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Archaicdawn [2016-12-05 02:05:00 +0000 UTC]

This is some great writing. Well done!

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ghostinafog In reply to Archaicdawn [2016-12-09 17:18:11 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks!

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ArtisticRebelWolf [2016-12-04 00:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow ....That was Awesome!!!

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ghostinafog In reply to ArtisticRebelWolf [2016-12-09 17:17:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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LeviaDraconia [2016-12-04 00:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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ghostinafog In reply to LeviaDraconia [2016-12-09 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Nnaly [2016-12-03 17:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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ghostinafog In reply to Nnaly [2016-12-03 22:41:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3

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LindArtz [2016-12-03 15:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work!! !!  Congratulations on your much deserved DD!  Enjoy the limelight.

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ghostinafog In reply to LindArtz [2016-12-03 22:41:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks! 

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wolfteritory [2016-12-03 14:17:59 +0000 UTC]

Very wonderful I loved it ^.^

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ghostinafog In reply to wolfteritory [2016-12-03 22:41:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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