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Published: 2014-11-01 23:59:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 674; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Broken heartForgotten love
A piece of my past
A hope for the future
Dull memories
Lost in thought
And a burning rage
Within my soul
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Comments: 39
Emo-tion-Emilie-fied [2014-11-17 09:22:46 +0000 UTC]
Makes me feel the feels I've been trying to not feel. When you hurt, but burn to hurt back. Though find yourself incapable of stooping low to the level of revengeβ¦.
It didn't seem like much to me when I first read it, but a few times over I realized more meaning behind it. Props
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Emo-tion-Emilie-fied [2014-11-17 23:20:05 +0000 UTC]
Sorry if it brought back bad memories. And thanks.
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EvilScarrlett [2014-11-12 18:28:00 +0000 UTC]
i can relate. but for me the rage is not so much...more like apathy.
I like the poem as a whole though XD
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to EvilScarrlett [2014-11-12 20:01:18 +0000 UTC]
I guess people can relate on different levels.
Thanks
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EvilScarrlett In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-11-12 20:31:28 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to KingfisherSilentArmy [2014-11-05 19:52:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
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KingfisherSilentArmy In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-11-06 09:31:25 +0000 UTC]
Welcome
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KingfisherSilentArmy In reply to Deadfish-SilentArmy [2014-11-05 11:57:51 +0000 UTC]
aww
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99-Revolutions [2014-11-03 19:11:30 +0000 UTC]
I like it. It's pretty right and I like the second verse.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to 99-Revolutions [2014-11-03 19:16:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. The beginning of the poem is my favourite part as well
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99-Revolutions In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-11-03 19:34:00 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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angeluchiha7 [2014-11-03 02:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Β this way I feel , its like read my heart -sigh-
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to angeluchiha7 [2014-11-03 03:19:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry you feel this way.
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wolfgirl2403 [2014-11-02 18:19:18 +0000 UTC]
Pretty. I especially love the first stanza.Β
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wolfgirl2403 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-11-16 17:47:59 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure~
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Leonardogirl4eve [2014-11-02 02:11:44 +0000 UTC]
Broken heart
Forgotten love
A piece of my past
A hope for the future
I like this part a lot
Good job my friend
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Leonardogirl4eve [2014-11-02 03:28:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it
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Leonardogirl4eve In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-11-02 16:51:41 +0000 UTC]
No problem
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to EvilScarrlett [2014-11-02 00:33:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. A poem doesn't have to be long to be meaningful.
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EvilScarrlett In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-11-02 16:31:31 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome!
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Violet-Petunia [2014-11-02 00:02:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
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Violet-Petunia In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-11-02 00:05:04 +0000 UTC]
No prob!
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