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Published: 2014-01-15 18:56:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 115073; Favourites: 567; Downloads: 0
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Description The worm was almost to it's lair, it just had a few yards to go.  It slithered along, between boxes, crates and pipes, with poor Carla still writhing around in it's belly.  It began to slide through  the concrete pipe it habitually always slid through, and was abruptly stopped.  It pulled again, but couldn't continue through.  The worm didn't have the mental ability to realize that while it could slide through with relative ease, it's curvy meal was too large to fit.  It continued to pull even harder, which began to force Carla further into it's digestive tract.  Inside the worm, Carla felt something hard around her feet that was pushing her further into the worm.  She instinctively crunched her body into a fetal position with all of her strength to fight the worm.  It was her only play, she wasnt sure what was blocking her, but she wanted to at least slow the worm down.  The worm felt it's prey trying to fight against it, and began panicking at the thought of losing it's valuable meal.  It pulled and pulled, to the point where Carla was at the very end of it's intestinal tract.  It was then that the worm could turn it's head to see the problem.  It's small brain took several minutes of observing Carla's squirming form in it's body at the other end of the pipe to formulate a solution.  It  began the slow process of backing out of the pipe much to Carla's terror.  She tried to do everything to stop it, but Carla had no say in the matter.  It simply slid backwards out of the pipe, and used it's intestinal muscles to pull a kicking and screaming Carla back into the proper area for storage and digestion...


Heheh, I thought this was a cool idea.  A little bit of sexy dark humor .  One of the alternate endings I chose, I thought it was a unique idea for a Vore image to have the predator make a pretty serious mistake.  Carla almost came out the other end intact!  We wouldn't want that now would we?  Part of a truly awesome commission series done by the talented sketchlanza.deviantart.com/ .  Go check his page out!  Posted with permission!  Let me know if you guys have any other cool ideas, there is more to come!  I am NOT the artist!  

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Comments: 36

TheSteveIrwinFan6836 [2019-10-20 18:14:58 +0000 UTC]

That's nice! Would have been cool if she forced her way out of the tail, but eh, when she dissolves, perhaps...she might eventually reincarnate?

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iknowwhoyouaremydude [2019-04-02 22:23:52 +0000 UTC]

how did i get here from my own crappy drawing of a norse zombie knight?

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Ghrolath4 In reply to iknowwhoyouaremydude [2019-04-04 21:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Not sure?

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iknowwhoyouaremydude In reply to Ghrolath4 [2019-04-07 02:03:07 +0000 UTC]

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ShinyhypnoFan [2018-07-12 04:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Very Hot!

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Ghrolath4 In reply to ShinyhypnoFan [2018-07-18 13:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!

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NTSEFAN [2017-09-04 14:56:32 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I would have actually preferred her to go out the anus. It may be gross, but I would take that over being digested.

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Ghrolath4 In reply to NTSEFAN [2017-09-06 23:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think she would pick that too. Lucky for her the canon ending has her being puked up alive.

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NTSEFAN In reply to Ghrolath4 [2017-09-07 03:09:11 +0000 UTC]

I have read about that. If she used her arms, she could have dragged herself to the worm's end and then force her arms out of its anus and then burst her way out of the worm and then she would be free. It would be like bursting out of a trash bag filled with slime.

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Ghrolath4 In reply to NTSEFAN [2017-09-26 16:41:31 +0000 UTC]

She is still cocooned at this point though, so her arms are pinned behind her.  Plus, the worms stomach muscles are probably squeezing her too hard for her to do much.

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NTSEFAN In reply to Ghrolath4 [2017-09-26 23:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Then the only chance she'll have is if when the cocoon has dissolved, she will have to make her move before she dissolves. I'm a bit skeptical about that.

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Ghrolath4 In reply to NTSEFAN [2017-10-15 00:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, quite a long shot

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NTSEFAN In reply to Ghrolath4 [2017-10-15 14:27:53 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty much my second thought.  

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riptidespiritwolf [2016-09-04 13:53:37 +0000 UTC]

Never doubt the worm

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Ghrolath4 In reply to riptidespiritwolf [2016-09-04 14:50:09 +0000 UTC]

The hungry predator is always a safe bet

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Linndt [2015-02-05 01:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww, she almost got away...

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Ghrolath4 In reply to Linndt [2015-02-05 04:05:33 +0000 UTC]

She isnt due out that end yet!

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icenm [2014-04-27 23:07:04 +0000 UTC]

brilliant

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Ghrolath4 In reply to icenm [2014-04-27 23:23:14 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was a cool and somewhat funny idea

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geo549 [2014-04-22 23:17:08 +0000 UTC]

could i suggest another alternate ending?one where the worm gets crushed by a box?thank you if you accept this alternate ending suggestion.

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Ghrolath4 In reply to geo549 [2014-04-23 02:48:11 +0000 UTC]

I am done with this commission series unfortunately.

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malikarcanum [2014-04-05 08:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Commenter

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Ghrolath4 In reply to malikarcanum [2014-04-05 10:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Nope, sorry.

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pwntodeath [2014-01-23 06:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Cannot wait for the rest ^-^

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Ghrolath4 In reply to pwntodeath [2014-02-12 04:38:43 +0000 UTC]

More in the works!

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OdinVonD [2014-01-22 14:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Excellent story and artwork! Can't wait to see what else you've got in ya! 

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Ghrolath4 In reply to OdinVonD [2014-01-23 03:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like the story.  I just commissioned the art, but Im glad you like  that too!

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pwntodeath [2014-01-21 06:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Cant wait for more ^-^

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Ghrolath4 In reply to pwntodeath [2014-01-21 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully in a couple weeks I can swing a few more.  I am very excited as well!

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johner2 [2014-01-17 02:16:36 +0000 UTC]

clever girl but it's too late now XD.

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Ghrolath4 In reply to johner2 [2014-01-17 02:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Down the rabbit hole

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DocRudy [2014-01-16 11:55:21 +0000 UTC]

No we most certainly would NOT want that! lol

Did I read you right in one of your other pieces that you intend to continue the story? Digestion?

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Ghrolath4 In reply to DocRudy [2014-01-16 13:35:01 +0000 UTC]

I am commissioning a couple of alternate endings, one of which will be an internal shot with her clothes dissolving. Accompanying that one will be a bit of writing detailing her beginning to get digested. Nothing really gory though. I totally understand that a sizable chunk of vore enthusiasts are into digestion and even more, it just isn't my thing. Different strokes for different folks, far be it for me to judge I Don't like to imagine the damsel escaping either, so I usually like to leave things ending in a cliffhanger so to speak. This handily allows anyone to make up their own ending if they so choose. Since I am pretty sure I am going to bring poor Carla back for more fun in the future, she might find a way out of her sticky situation.

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DocRudy In reply to Ghrolath4 [2014-01-17 05:35:54 +0000 UTC]

That's always a handy way of dealing with characters you plan to reuse. Leave their end *almost* positively certain, but not absolutely definitive (i.e. "... and here is the pile of feces that was once known as Carla"). And that way you can still reuse the character without much internal conflict.

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Hunter2045 [2014-01-16 01:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice work.

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blackrainlove [2014-01-15 20:03:30 +0000 UTC]

I love this idea and image.  Some basic preds don't know when they have made a mistake.   Good idea, can't wait to see more of them.

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Ghrolath4 In reply to blackrainlove [2014-01-15 23:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Heh, it gulped down more than it could handle.

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