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DarkPatu [2012-08-13 16:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I have to say that this blew my mind. I write Tenchi Muyo! fanfiction, and my biggest story is set 15 years into the future with Ryo-Ohki as a 'teenager'. During the beginning of the big conflict, she's fighting a group of 'grunt' enemies and has formed 'armor' out of her mass THAT LOOKS EXACTLY LIKE THIS!!! Here's an excerpt:

"The problem with being a young, teenage girl is the way everyone thinks you can't take care of yourself. When you're a young teenage girl who also just so happens to be a supremely powerful spaceship, things don't seem to change much.

Ryo-Ohki brought her blade down, slicing the... thing... in front of her in half, dazzling light dancing off of her crystalline skin as it, like so many before it burst into a shower of sparks and brilliance. She turned, readying the angular sword she had formed from her own massu reserves, an eager grin across her face. 'It's been too long since I've had a good fight...' She thought, turning in a slow circle and measuring up the crowd of identical foes that surrounded her. Her body glittered with formed crystals, fitting together into a head to toe suit of super dense armor, the edges and faces of the dark violet stone flashing with the meager light from the overhead florescent lamps.

Another figure leapt towards her from the side, its expression a mask as her blade pierced it through the midsection and burst through its back. With a grunt she grimaced as the weight of it pulled her sword to the ground, stuck in its lifeless form, that horrible rictus of a face never changing in life or death. From the edge of her vision she saw motion from her right side and gritted her teeth, tearing the razor-edged gem blade out through the side of her latest victim's torso, showering brilliant sparks through the air as she swung her sword through the air. It whistled as it flew, severing the head from the attacking figure to tumble in the air as both felled enemies burst into motes of light that wafted down through the air around her."

I don't want to prattle on and on about this, I was just SO SHOCKED at how perfectly it fit with my description! AMAZING!

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ForWashuu [2012-08-13 04:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Duuude! This looks just like what DarkPatu described in his fanfiction, "A Dream Unrequited"!

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New-York-Luffy [2012-08-13 03:43:53 +0000 UTC]

That's a neat idea. Would've never thought of that!

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JibrilMudo [2012-08-11 23:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow, different<.<

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