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Published: 2012-10-22 13:41:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 4577; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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THIS IS YAOI SO IF YOU DON'T LIKE GO AWAY

 

~START~

 

(Kids P.O.V.)

 

I was walking down the beautifully symmetrical hallways of my Fathers school. Admiring the picture frames that I helped put up and keep perfect when i heard a very happy tune but the words didn't quite fit in with the happy tune... it took me only a few seconds to realize that it was Soul singing and playing the guitar. I've heard him play the guitar many times. I would always lean or sit against the wall listening to his angelic voice singing and golden fingers strumming the guitar. Normally his songs were about sex or prostitutes (he once told me that his favorite song was Build god then we'll talk by Panic! At the disco) but this song really got to me i heard him sing...

 

'My legs are dangling off the edge

The bottom of the bottle is my only friend
I think I'll slit my wrists again and I'm 
Gone, gone, gone, gone

My legs are dangling off the edge
A stomach full of pills didn't work again
I'll put a bullet in my head and I'm
Gone, gone, gone, gone'

 

A song about suicide. This sent many thoughts to my head 'Does he mean it? Is he contemplating suicide? Why would he think that? He's been really secretive lately and he's not talked to anyone that much' I walked to the door still listening, heart racing, face flooding, eyes blurring, body shaking... i like him... no thats not right... i love him... i want him... i want to him in my arms... and to hear him play this hurts... badly...i can feel tears welling up in my eyes but i fight them off...

 

I slowly open the door to see him facing the window still playing his voice is beautiful but the song ruins it...

 

'So if I survive then I'll see you tomorrow

Yea I'll see you tomorrow... 

My legs are dangling off the edge
The bottom of the bottle is my only friend
I think I'll slit my wrists again and I'm 
Gone, gone, gone, gone'

 

Snap... That’s the sound of my heart breaking "S-soul?" I stutter... he stops playing and faces me his eyes are red and sore from crying... It ruins his perfect crimson eyes... they are now bloodshot and… Swollen "K-Kid? ... W-why are you here?" he looks so miserable and... Hurt...

 

~END OF CHAPTER 1~



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Comments: 24

CreepypastandFNAF [2016-04-07 02:03:41 +0000 UTC]

DX ssssssoooooo sssssaaaaaadddd

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solangelogirl [2015-12-01 21:22:16 +0000 UTC]

 I cant take this my heart is dead

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solangelogirl In reply to solangelogirl [2015-12-01 21:23:33 +0000 UTC]

still beautiful 

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deviishangels304179 [2015-08-30 03:39:10 +0000 UTC]

i love the song bullet 
i listen to it once a week at least (today i listened to it 3 times)

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XxTheImaginaryXx [2014-12-22 03:45:50 +0000 UTC]

FABULOUS. That tis all.

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SoulEaterzzz [2013-07-24 04:12:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh god I cried at the song ;~;

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2000kittykatz [2013-07-09 19:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Hollywood Undead's brilliant! XD nice story!

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Konfessor2u [2013-04-05 01:32:50 +0000 UTC]

gah!!!! I read this so long ago....Didn't know that it was you.

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giantdonut42 In reply to Konfessor2u [2013-04-06 02:24:10 +0000 UTC]

well yeahp it is moi!

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bk3193 [2013-01-27 00:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Awwww ^^ its so sad,but i love it sooo much

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giantdonut42 In reply to bk3193 [2013-01-27 19:29:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^-^

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XX-Harry-Potter-XX [2013-01-22 22:22:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!

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giantdonut42 In reply to XX-Harry-Potter-XX [2013-01-24 18:32:20 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks

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XX-Harry-Potter-XX In reply to giantdonut42 [2013-01-28 23:08:11 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Roxy-Phantomhive [2012-10-22 21:57:12 +0000 UTC]

this is good so far and..... PANIC AT THE DISCO I LOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEE THEM
sorry about that just a little fan girl attack he-he

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giantdonut42 In reply to Roxy-Phantomhive [2012-10-22 22:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah my friend had the same kinda response to it aswell i put that song because its about prostitutes haha

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icaraus [2012-10-22 16:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh god, I don't, I can't even.....this. Is. Beautiful...

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giantdonut42 In reply to icaraus [2012-10-22 16:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Thankies ^_^

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GoldenAltaira [2012-10-22 14:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Normally when I run into a fic like this involving this anime the one wanting to end his life is Kid; this is a very welcomed change in pace for me. I can't wait to read more.

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giantdonut42 In reply to GoldenAltaira [2012-10-22 14:51:43 +0000 UTC]

i'm actually having writers block at the moment and so i'm just going over my notes and thinking but i might have the next chapter soon ^_^

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GoldenAltaira In reply to giantdonut42 [2012-10-22 15:34:20 +0000 UTC]

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giantdonut42 In reply to GoldenAltaira [2012-10-22 15:54:07 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks ^_^

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SaraCorgi [2012-10-22 13:47:21 +0000 UTC]

My favorite show, and one of my favorite songs, hehe.

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giantdonut42 In reply to SaraCorgi [2012-10-22 13:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav and llama badge ^_^

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