HOME | DD

gimpbeginner — Untitled
Published: 2008-07-01 16:45:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
Redirect to original
Description when you look right through
do you see  what you were hoping for
the person next to me,
maybe
is it any wonder that you never saw
the world knocking on your door
dont cry  ive seen it all before
its easier to look through
than at
glass is made for windows  not girls
and when you do all you see is your
reflection
in the long run
it doesnt matter if you tried or not
if you screwed it up
cause invisibility
isnt like the movies
its the other way around you see
its the world who picks
when they can see you
cant turn it on and off  like they all say
but i digress
theres the door
feel free to exit on your left
just watch your step
somethings broken on the floor
or is it me
made of glass you see
see-through
more breakable than you
but i make a rainbow
did you know
youre leaving though
just go
dont loiter on the premises
youve stayed too long already
see ya round
bye for now
its your life

you decide.
Related content

[ TEXT ]


gimpbeginner - seaward
Comments: 7

Terra-b [2008-09-04 01:16:44 +0000 UTC]

nice

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

sadicticvamprie [2008-07-06 05:59:22 +0000 UTC]

but i digress


FUCK WHAT DOES THIS *points up to the words that say but i digress*MEAN?!?!?!?


awe so sad : ( any specific person this may (or may not) be about, or is this just to the world in general??
cuz you know me,
i like to loiter ^__^

oh and i like the flow, because you know it seems to flow. heh.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2008-07-17 23:26:02 +0000 UTC]

I digress... like, I'm going off on some unrelated subject.
And I dunno. It was originally inspired by feelings I had in the hallways, but mostly now it's for everyone who's ever felt that way. I've met a lot of glass girls and I'm sure I'll meet a lot more in my lifetime.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

FISHKISS [2008-07-01 17:45:03 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAH. 83
I've been trying to write something like this for years, and there you go and do it. I think I love it. <]

Where in whatever do you get your museberry bushes? I must go and purchase some. x0

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

gimpbeginner In reply to FISHKISS [2008-07-01 20:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you!
-feels proud-

The museberry bushes were... well, this time they were courtesy of my classmates and school. Most of the time they're really nice, but I'm kind of an invisible person. But you can purchase them at 94821 Jellynut Way, county of Attention Span of A Mayfly in the province of Distracted and Dreaming, Lalaland. The store is called, fittingly, Everything Except Cheeseburgers. Don't try to buy a cheeseburger there, they don't look at you very nicely.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FISHKISS In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-07-02 15:55:42 +0000 UTC]

xDDD
I'll be busting my brain laughing next. I've liquidated my stock of lungs, whatever that means :0
Sounds like a nummy place <33 I'll probably eat the bricks.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

gimpbeginner In reply to FISHKISS [2008-07-18 02:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Whatever it means, it's nice and alliterative. Don't bust that brain too bad though, otherwise us poor culture-deprived denizens of Deviantart (hey, that's alliterative too!) cannot enjoy your bootiful writing!

Oh no, you can't eat the bricks...
-shakes head seriously-
They charge you extra for those. Three whole truffle-yens. But if you really want to eat them (they're made of chocolate-covered balloons) I'll lend you some truffle-yens. Ten truffle-yens equals one crème brulée-kroner, just so you remember.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0