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Published: 2008-10-21 01:48:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description so i wrote you a poem last sunday, but it came out all wrong
and i wanted to just tear it up but these books are so damn expensive for pieces of tree with
adolescent scrawlings concerning nature and beauty and the horrors of war,
but mostly just hormones and writer’s block.
and i wanted to give you the luminescent lines but they were all stuck to the page with the babblings
and they wouldn’t come off.
liquid paper is a boon to mankind and writers.


and looking back i suppose this is a meta-poem
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gimpbeginner - seaward
Comments: 25

sadicticvamprie [2009-04-18 17:21:35 +0000 UTC]

hey.... don't you still have my write stuff?
well if you do, FIEND!

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gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2009-04-18 17:40:34 +0000 UTC]

lol yes i do as a matter of fact. u still have half my library tho... we should get together and exchange sometimes, neh?

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sadicticvamprie In reply to gimpbeginner [2009-04-18 17:42:26 +0000 UTC]

RIGHT! i have a book from the actual library and i looked at it the other day like SHIT i dont wanna know how much she owes on that.... ;__; heh heh..
xD

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gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2009-04-18 17:50:02 +0000 UTC]

rlly? i don't think you do, it doesn't say n e thing on my account. i think it's somebody else's.

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sadicticvamprie In reply to gimpbeginner [2009-04-18 17:54:28 +0000 UTC]

hahaha! you stole someone ELSES library book? you truly are a fiend.

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gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2009-04-19 02:20:23 +0000 UTC]

muahaha.

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sadicticvamprie In reply to gimpbeginner [2009-04-19 19:47:41 +0000 UTC]

fiendish fiend.

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gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2009-04-19 20:53:28 +0000 UTC]

it's in my job description, dearie.

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sadicticvamprie In reply to gimpbeginner [2009-04-20 00:10:53 +0000 UTC]

...hmm, rather.

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sadicticvamprie [2008-10-31 00:50:49 +0000 UTC]

haha i get it

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gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2008-11-01 18:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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sadicticvamprie In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-11-04 04:33:58 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Upthendown [2008-10-24 04:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Gwaah, this is fantastic <33
You've got this talent for finding words that fit together beautifully.
-nodnod-

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gimpbeginner In reply to Upthendown [2008-10-24 18:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you! D'you know, my LA teacher said that about me on my first writing piece. "A flair for words" is how she put it.
-feels happy-

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Upthendown In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-10-26 00:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Fwaah, and it's true! I like your LA teacher; she seems to have an eye for good writers 8DD
-gives you a cookie-

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gimpbeginner In reply to Upthendown [2008-10-26 03:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Hm. It made me feel good inside because she's a really hard marker. I still will never measure up to you guys though. I'm just developing my way with words and you guys have been running with your words for miles. <-- That din't make sense.

-eats cookie-

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Upthendown In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-10-26 17:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Psh, you kidding? You passed me a million miles back xDD
And that did make sense. It was a good metaphor!
And it's always a good feeling when a hard teacher likes yer stuff. It kinda puts your mind at ease too, 'cause then you know that you can beat their trickly little rubrics xPP

-grabs a muffin-

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gimpbeginner In reply to Upthendown [2008-10-29 23:27:07 +0000 UTC]

I didn't. You are still too amazing for me to even see in the distance. I'm glad it's a good metaphor, though... and their tricksy rubrics still trip me up.

-snarfs chocolate-

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Upthendown In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-11-03 23:19:34 +0000 UTC]

OHYUSYOUDID. And neh, if I were to be that far ahead I'd have to be organized and clever, which I'm not xDD
Yeah, same. I hate it when they phrase something in a way that can be understood in two different ways, and I just happen to pick the wrong way DDx

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gimpbeginner In reply to Upthendown [2008-11-03 23:28:44 +0000 UTC]

I do that all the time. If there are two ways to take it, I can be counted on to take it the wrong way. Go me.

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Terra-b [2008-10-24 01:49:30 +0000 UTC]

confusing but what else is new?? i am the witless wonder

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gimpbeginner In reply to Terra-b [2008-10-24 18:33:00 +0000 UTC]

What are you confused about?

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FISHKISS [2008-10-22 05:02:24 +0000 UTC]

MAOW. 8D
Your talent grows daily. I love the word scrawlings <33

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gimpbeginner In reply to FISHKISS [2008-10-24 18:27:35 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, thank you! I don't deserve your praise... but I'll bask in it anyways.

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FISHKISS In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-10-25 08:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Bah, you deserve it far more than you might ever think you do :]

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